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Manipulate darkness as in forming it into a non-physical form, such as a sphere, or the illusion of a weapon if I wanted, though nothing physical. I added some specifications to the ability on the sheet. Maximum distance of use is there.
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Ispep said
Manipulate darkness as in forming it into a non-physical form, such as a sphere, or the illusion of a weapon if I wanted, though nothing physical. I added some specifications to the ability on the sheet. Maximum distance of use is there.


Approved!
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Cool.
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So about that gum...
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Exactly.
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@Watermelon Tango: I love it. CS looks great, and I would approve it... you just have to go a little more detail in his characteristics of insanity. I just want to know what he'll do if his routine gets interrupted. Sure it maybe basic as a violent fit, but I still would like some formal confirmation.


Mostly he'll get progressively more aggravated and impulsive. It's not so much that going out of routine makes him angry, it just makes him a lot more likely to react unpredictably. He's spent the vast majority of his life getting used to living alone, and it's taken him several years to get used to living in an asylum. Routine is what he's used to and it's what helps him feel grounded.
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How dark is this going to go, I am a fan of pushing boundaries and finding ways to unnerve readers, is that something I can try or is that to far? In any case im interested and would hope I could make a cs.
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@nonsequiter: Everything looks good, aside from the way he became insane. It doesn't really have anything to do with his power (it doesn't have to, but it should be loosely irelated), and I dont think him getting lightly bullied is enough to drive him insane. Kids get bullied all the time in school and none turn in to blood thirsty maniacs. Yeh, that's all you really need to fix. Also you said he's a staunch believer in God? Does that mean he's going to be obsessed with god, cause that'd be pretty cool.


It...wasn't light bullying. Sustained ostracizing, getting shoved and yelled at, having his arm slammed in a locker, for a few examples. And it went on for three years. I agree about the bloodthirsty maniac thing though. Would burning them in the heat of the moment (pun kind of intended) be acceptable?

Now I'm not so sure what loosely related means. Does fire have to come into it somehow? That's workable for me, but I'd like to confirm it. (Side note here: the "insanity" thing kind of reminded me of the trigger events from Worm, so I tried to make the circumstance match his type of power, which in this case would be "implicit threat but not immediate harm". Does actual harm have to come in for this?)

EDIT: I'll fix the link when I'm back at a computer. And he's going to have some religion-influenced delusions too.
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So I have two questions now.

1. When are you planning on starting this?

2. Will there be gum in this Rp?

These questions are both of the utmost importance, but if I could only ask one, I'd choose the gum.
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@DemntedGrin: Nothing's too dark here! Unless, y'know, it doesn't sit well with the Roleplayerguild Guidelines.
@nonsequiter: Yeah, fire has to come in somehow. It can be in any way, maybe that day there was a fire in his neighbourhood.
@vulpes: Accepted!
@WatermelonTango: Ok... accepted!

I will start making a list of Accepted Characters....
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So I have two questions now. 1. When are you planning on starting this?2. Will there be gum in this Rp?These questions are both of the utmost importance, but if I could only ask one, I'd choose the gum.


Starting this once we get 8 - 10 characters. Also, can someone explain the gum to me, not really understanding that XD
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Chewing gum. Will our characters be able to get it somehow?
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Also, fire does come in somewhere. In the cause of insanity part, he was just about to be set on fire.
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That would be the obvious choice, yes. Damn, I'm getting predictable.
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Inuyasha said
Starting this once we get 8 - 10 characters. Also, can someone explain the gum to me, not really understanding that XD


Ispep wants his/her character to be some sort of gum fiend or something.
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Also, fire does come in somewhere. In the cause of insanity part, he was just about to be set on fire.


Ah, I seemed to have missed it. Sorry nonsequiter. But still, when kids get bullied in skool they either cut or they commit suicide... I dont know it just doesnt click to me that he would go insane.
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I believe what drove him over was seeing his best friend walk past and not do anything to help. I mean, I'd probably flip too if like, the only person I thought I could count on abandoned me.
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Got ninja'd. Thanks, Ispep (really).
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No problem at all.
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