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Edit: Thanks for the direction! I am glad to have the opportunity to be part of an RP that has strict rules, which will make for excellent RP. I have added a ton of backstory for my character. I hope you enjoy.

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Feb: That CS was perfectly done (though we have wait to see on the equipment) Playing the technologically advanced survivalist in the group, I welcome his primitive counter part. I don't see it as a direct encroachment onto his role as a survivalist, but more of a cohesion that can prove interesting withing the roleplay.

Since I am in the (incredibly slow) process of converting everything to a google doc. (Haven't had a hell of a lot of time to do that, but I will) I'd be willing to give you the Khu'lu faction, as in creatively, but only if you want it. I will have a Faction CS up thursday. Otherwise I will rewrite it and make sure it fits with your shaman, but if you had a certain vision I'm willing to give you the creative freedom with them. As reap will do with something she is thinking up. (Unfortunately Fire if you're reading this, The Silver Hand I have grand schemes for and cannot release their custody. They will be a part of the main storyline eventually, and it will be important.)
Snow: I've never been one to lie. The biggest differences I see between casual and advanced players are the time they take to flesh out their writing. What do you think when you make that decision to time-line skip up to this point, and look back on the single paragraph you have? The biography is supposed to be meaningful information to help us understand your vision of a character. You started when she was child, did nothing else happen during her life to affect the out come of her development as a person? What's the inbetween, I want the story when she was 7 and the cat tied to kill her. I want tales of her time in the wild, how it shaped her as a person, how it molded her. I want the in-between.

Just so you are warned. At no point in this roleplay will I accept less than two paragraphs. That being said, you're CS was not half bad. Lacking in the bio, the gear could use some updating but we'll get to that. What I want write now is for you to show me that you want to be here, that you're willing to put in the effort to advanced yourself creatively when you write. If you can show me that through the biography, then we will work our the rest of the minor kinks and get you over to the IC.
It is 5.am and I am going to bed. I will check up tomorrow if I can, my lady is coming down and we have things to take care of, so Thursday at the latest.

Final decisions will be made when I return.
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I've added the equipment and believe it's a fairly complete set, but please let me know if I've overlooked something.

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Playing the technologically advanced survivalist in the group, I welcome his primitive counter part. I don't see it as a direct encroachment onto his role as a survivalist, but more of a cohesion that can prove interesting withing the roleplay.


With virtually everyone having some degree of survival skills, I'd hoped to put her in more of a support role that would enhance their skills rather than compete with them, in much the same way she would work within the Khu'lu. I think they should complement each other well.

Regarding the Khu'lu faction, I'd love to help develop it. I mean, I'm doing it anyway to flesh out Nix'ta, so it might as well contribute to the overall lore.
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Aeonumbra: I added three large additional paragraphs to her story, and expanded on the original paragraphs. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
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snow-- add these to the CS

- Small tools (for tinkering with electronics)
- Tailors kit/tools (for tailoring on the go.)
Anything else you can think off, no matter how small, think of this as starting gear.

- Add "Agile" or "Quick Reflexes" to skills and talents.
- Add "Fletching" somewhere if she can make her own arrows.
(If she can't then she can buy them in Refuge)
Febs-- Add these and any other misc. gear you think you'll need. Maybe some pre-made camo paints?

-- Add "Fletching"
-- Add "Athletic"

Alright, I'm going to give you the Khu'lu faction. Keep to the basics, and you can do whatever you want to them. Look below for more information.
Everyone

I just wanted to re-state. If you create something out of the ordinary, I want a CS on it. Be it creatures, plants, or factions.
Febs you have quite a bit, the eel-snake thing of doom, creeper plant (creeper seed oil), and the raptor that I can remember off the top of my head.

It was a hard decision but you're both accepted. Remember snow, I will help you strive to meet most "advanced" standards, the jump from casual to advanced is difficult, especially because everybody is an elitist. That biography was excellent once you did a little more work on it, I nearly teared up at the candy scene.

I will have the formats for the CS up soon in the google docs area. I will post a link then and add it to the front page.

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*Added Templates to the Inf. Database. Link on front page under picture.
---*Kapu, Fire: Please re-work, or move information around, to fit the flora and fauna cs.

**YOU CAN HAVE FRUITS!! AND NUTS!! But only if it's a specific creation that specifically states it bears edible fruit/nuts/etc.
---*Everything not stated in the flora section consider poisonous.

***Added "The Cast" to google docs. Will finish adding snowminx and febs when CS is finalized.
---Going to kill Spartan's character due to inactivity.
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Delivered!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1y7qfHE0zOZv-2B7g1IfvyMWkE-S8MSwWFNWFvmMt_ow/edit
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That is the best damn gif ever XD

Also you took class a little to literally: you said: assassin.

I wanted "Arachnid" XD or something like that.

I fixed it though, thank you very much for the update.
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I wasn't quite sure what you meant with "Class" So I thought how they hunt <.<
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Febs-- Add these and any other misc. gear you think you'll need. Maybe some pre-made camo paints?


Ok, I've added fletching and athletic to skills and elaborated on the contents of the tubes in the bone cases. I think the only remaining question is whether they'd have discovered a natural equivalent of purge, or whether that's something they'd be trading for. If they haven't, then I'll need specify that in the base extracts case.

I'll start on the write-ups for the new items.
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Lol kapuchu, that gif xD
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Lol kapuchu, that gif xD


Of course, that gif! xD

Aeon dares make demands? I do what he demands, then THROW IT IN HIS FACE! xD
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It's cool, as long as the REQUESTS are met haha xD
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I updated my CS to reflect what you asked :)
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Ok, I've added fletching and athletic to skills and elaborated on the contents of the tubes in the bone cases. I think the only remaining question is whether they'd have discovered a natural equivalent of purge, or whether that's something they'd be trading for. If they haven't, then I'll need specify that in the base extracts case.I'll start on the write-ups for the new items.


I'm going to keep 90% of the plants poisonous//infected to humans. If you want a "natural" plant based solution, or "fruits" and "nuts" then you need to create specific plants for that in using the templates. (even if it's a plain boring tree). As edible plant grown fruits and nuts is a rare thing. Unless you want it specifically then you have to trade for purge.

In your gear you list fruits and nuts, you'll need to create flora to match that, or edit in some purge. Also would be a good reason for them to trade.
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It's cool, as long as the REQUESTS are met haha xD


"Requests" <.<
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kapuchu said
"Requests" <.<


Yes.
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I'm going to keep 90% of the plants poisonous//infected to humans. If you want a "natural" plant based solution, or "fruits" and "nuts" then you need to create specific plants for that in using the templates. (even if it's a plain boring tree). As edible plant grown fruits and nuts is a rare thing. Unless you want it specifically then you have to trade for purge.In your gear you list fruits and nuts, you'll need to create flora to match that, or edit in some purge. Also would be a good reason for them to trade.


That works. The Khu'lu are more plausible having at least some ability to forage and hunt, but access to purge via trade would make their lives significantly easier. It would also support Nix'ta's reason for leaving the tribe, especially given their cohesion and the importance of a shaman, if they no longer had access to slush or purge without re-establishing some type of consistent trade arrangement. I'll create some flora and edible fauna - the latter will probably be larger predators that, while providing a plentiful supply of edible meat, would also be dangerous enough to challenge that trading for purge is preferable.

In terms of the IC, how would you prefer that to happen? She could plausibly try to work her way onto the Darkling hunt, or she could cross paths with the group en route.
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Hmmm. Collab is always an option, probably our best bet. It's super late and i've been busy helping my driends out so im kind of exhausted. I will elaborate some more ideas when i get up.
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I'm alive. Just so everybody knows I will be advancing the IC tomorrow. I apologize for the long delay.

Febs. If you want to collab (tomorrow) let me know what times are good for you. I'm (UTC-07:00) Arizona. Otherwise you can skip the darkling event and just go into refuge, perhaps end your post at spotting the group?

It's a good journey from the khu'lu area to refuge, make sure you check the map because your character has to go over water once or twice.

Snow, You're free to post whenever you want.

Fire, Leviathan, I'm not going to wait any longer for you two. Either wrap up the collab or find a good point to stop at.
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Trust me Aeon, the Collab shouuulld be over with the next post, hopefully. I don't know what Levi's gonna do yet. Sent her a reply today, she hasn't responded yet.
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