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I went and assumed it was night time...hopefully that works. >.<
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TheWindel said I claim having Chiyo taking in Karina to be her student. Because that's gonna be hella funny to read.

I second this movement. With Hisako pulling the seniority card just for somebody else to point out that she's still a fledgling.
Mach2 said I went and assumed it was night time...hopefully that works. >.<

This works fine.

EDIT: Totally forgot about it, but Karina seems cool by me. Fix your [img] tags though; either you typed them wrong or the URL just isn't working :\
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Yeah, I'll try ^^ If it doesn't work I'll just find another image.

Edit: Done! And also; I THIRD the Chiyo - Karina student thing-a-ma-bob.
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It's kinda late where I am, so I'll post tomorrow.
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I don't think Krov is going to get along with Karina.
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still accepting? just about to do a cs
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KaijuBaragon said I don't think Krov is going to get along with Karina.

Also seconded
libbypt said still accepting? just about to do a cs

Indeed we are
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Appearance: Petite, 5"4, red/hazel eyes.
Name: Kaori Ito
Physical Age: 16
Actual Age: 86
Personality: Cheerful, happy and always looking for something fun to do, Kaori is the opposite to what a typical vampire should be. She possesses a sense of boundless optimism for the future, rarely ever believing that misfortune will befall her (or if it does, not for long). Her happiness is shown through her activity and rarely her facial expression, to catch her with a smile on her face is an achievement on its own, but to catch her with a smirk is almost always. She is sensitive to harsh comments or rude people and will 'try' and tell them off. Her sense of humour is somewhat sarcastic and she knows how to push peoples buttons. She tries to act tough and strong but she is an easy target to manipulate and a pushover.

Bio: Kaori was born in Japan into an average family in 1928 and the first 10 years of her life were happy, but once the war began her and her family lived in fear and never let Kaori leave the house unless they were with her. On her 16th birthday in 1944. She was abducted during a midnight raid and after 4 days of torture she was forced into a brothel as a 'comfort woman' for soldiers. She was tortured and raped for 4 weeks before she managed to escape and take shelter in bombed ruins. Weak, hungry and desperate she found herself stumbling into abandoned houses searching for anything she could get her hands on. After a while she came across a young man in a worse condition than she was and decided to nurtured him and give him any water and food she found, but he refused and constantly told her to take it 'for him'. This man managed to get her in a hostile situation and had her on her knees begging not to kill her. To her surprise he didn't kill her, but left her feeble. He had kept her to be a vampire. Over a week of her bringing humans into the abandoned house to 'help a dying man stabbed in the night' the two shared a small bond. They looked after each other for 30 years, hunting and feeding yet both became unsatisfied and began killing and torturing . They had become power-hungry, thirsty for control over all living things, but this did not last long, as their destruction led a path that was followed by the most deadliest and brutal hunters. Kaori survived by hiding on the rooftops and left the man to die as 'bait' regretful she has lived her years on her own, happy to have any interaction from anyone and promised herself to only kill for food.

Skills:
- She is very skilled in gymnastics/free-running.
- Talented at stealth.
- Uses her innocent and young looks to manipulate.

Anything Else:
She has a small fear of older men because of her traumatising past. She is also VERY clumsy.
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I've got a fair few problems with this one, to be totally honest. Were it not for these, I'd actually be all sorts of fine with Kaori.

> British but with a Japanese name. No explanation.
> Also no explaining how she got to Japan in the first place.
> Tragic backstories rife with rape and torture are criminally cliche.
> I can see the first ten years of Kaori's life being happy, but that ten-year mark for her also coincides with the start of WW2. Not a very happy time, much less in England, which was I'm fairly certain was economically ravaged by the thing. With a bit of explaining, though, I can see Kaori being at least relatively happy during that time. (strangely, her kidnapping coincides with the end of the war)
> Good at hand-to-hand combat for no reason actually, you're a vampire. This one makes sense on that principle alone.
> This isn't Cirque du Freak. We don't do apprentices.

I can certainly see effort though, and that's a good starting point no matter what my issues with your character is :)
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UnendingEmpire said
I've got a fair few problems with this one, to be totally honest. Were it not for these, I'd actually be all sorts of fine with Kaori.> British but with a Japanese name. No explanation.> Also no explaining how she got to Japan in the first place. We don't do apprentices.I can certainly see effort though, and that's a good starting point no matter what my issues with your character is :)


Sorry was in a rush when i wrote this and I was supposed to change location:/ will edit this now!
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Mashiro? Lawl
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There's no rush; take your time :)
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UnendingEmpire said
(strangely, her kidnapping coincides with the end of the war)


Thanks, sadly comfort women were still being kidnapped after the war but I've updated everything I think x
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That seems to do it quite well :) I'll get to adding Kaori to the list. Post at your discretion; I'll probably be doing so later today.
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I just posted, yaaay~ It's kinda short, but I didn't want her scurrying around the house too much ^^
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Wait, so who did Karina run into when she opened the door?
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From the description, I'm guessing Hisako?
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Now, it's cue for Krov to meet the one who gave the signal. (I think)
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@ TheWindel: I was actually thinking Chiyo ('coz in her picture she had a ponytail and stuff) but anyone is fine, really. I just needed something to get Karina into the house hehe
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Diminuendo said
@ TheWindel: I was actually thinking Chiyo ('coz in her picture she had a ponytail and stuff) but anyone is fine, really. I just needed something to get Karina into the house hehe


Ah ok. Well in that case I'll get up a post soon. Actually, it makes sense for her to save Karina from big bad Krov. Though I always just thought that was her hair to the side in my image for Chiyo ^_^'
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