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Name: Cre’oan Mal
Titles: The Diver, The Voice Without Breath
True name: The name of Cre’oan Mal is a deep moan. It is a sound that man is not able to make, but Cre'oan Mal's known name is a very old, and mortal interpretation of the sound.
Inspiration:

the endless depths of the ocean, the secrets beneath the waves, the darkness watching.
Appearance: Cre’oan Mal appears as a speaking body of water. When de voice of Cre’oan Mal emerges from any liquid, it becomes a very dark blue or black, like it is an endlessly deep pool. His voice always sounds from far away.
Symbols: an arched line, wider at the top than at the bottom. Under it is a dot.

Portfolio: The Depths, The Eldritch
Alignment: NE
Servitars: great, unimaginable horrors from the depths of the ocean.
Weapon: stone dagger
Agenda: [Only gods know of Cre’oan Mal agenda. Mortals know him only as the terrible sea god, that gifts those who work from him with maddening and frightening knowledge]
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Name: Vryad
Titles: Lord of the Unlikely, Lady of Chance, The Underdog, The Unfair, Cheater, The Unjust, Marriage-breaker, (Dreaded Judge of de Dead)
True name: Dach
Appearance: Vryad rarely makes a physical appearance, but when it does, it prefers the form of a black panther with wings like a bat.
Symbols: Cat's eye, weighted dice made of bone
Portfolio: Bad Luck, Chance, Lust, Casuistry, Death, (Trickery)
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Servitors: Imps, Bat-winged Panthers, Succubi, Incubi, Banshees
Weapon: fan
Animal: Black Cat
Followers: Gamblers down on their luck, insane people, lonely people, the downtrodden, the unjust

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MasterOfMetal said
Zaya sat in the middle of town.She was playing, with rocks.She would find a rock, a pretty one, and then search for bugs and crawleys.When she found a good big one, she would smash it with the stone.This was her favorite pass time, she did it almost every day, she would do it until the rock was stained with the insides of the bug, or until something bigger to play with..


Game of thrones reference? CUNG CUNG CUNG CUNG CUNG CUNG CUNG
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yes. very much.

also, i edited, for progres' sake
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Merlijn, I love how you made it cannon, marijn and I were discussing that today xD
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I also loved how you incorporated almost everything in one single post. You wit-gifted storytelling genius you... :)
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Name: Múndis
Titles: God of nature's forces, God of disaster, Father of planet Earth, Shaper of planets.
True name: Birndràth
Inspiration: the titans of greek mythology, mother earth and earthly disasters
Appearance: Múndis mostly gets depicted as a rock titan. But that is because no mortal knows what he looks like, even to some gods his true form is unknown. Artists might utter he is in their work if they depict a tidal wave, a blizzard or a volcanic eruption. Basically a huge force of nature. Some say Múndis has no form at all, that he is just some kind of divine energy, not percievable unless it's doing its work. Others state that he is the earth's core, in a slumber and sometimes taking over on the surface.
Symbols: A volcanic eruption
Portfolio: The creation of the planet, keeping the world(as ecosystem) balanced, nature's forces/natural disaster
Alignment: Chaotic neutral
Servitars: Greater elementals
Weapon: Water, wind and time can take down everything.
Animal: The Tuatara
Followers: Specific monk tribes that settle in the mountain peaks to meditate and slow their pace of living.
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Burzadurr, I would advice against beïng "The father of planet earth, and shaper of planets". Because, when you leave the shape of this world in shadows, we could do more creative things with it than just another round planet. Also, being a planet or i'ts core isn't very... mythalogical i feel.
Also, maybe your portfolio is a bit grand. You almoast encompass every aspect of the world. It might interesting if you have just one element, or just natural disasters, or balance. That way, you have can have flaws, which are needed in a story.
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and ecosystem and everything in it is already covered by Tavon and Era.
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Thank you for your feedback, I'll reconsider my god.
I had such a feeling that it was a little too grand.
I will sleep it over for a night and check back tomorrow with something else and (holpefully)better ;)

Also, do I need to make the character sheet of my champion/hero already? Or is it okay to introduce the character via the rp itself?
Have a good night!
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Agreed: a god of this calibre doesn't allow you to do much that would be interesting on the scale of a mortal (even powerful, supernatural mortals).
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It is okay to introduce the character via the rp and make a sheet when it becomes the champion of someones god. I also agree with the rest of the people. Your God doesn't allow much interaction and meddling with mortals is the whole point of this rp. Also I would advice to look at the other gods for inspiration and to make sure you don't choose a domain that is already taken.
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Now to come up with a champion....hmmmmm.....
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Slight change to Vryad's domains and history. Hope you like it.
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AND AS ALWAYS KIDS, REMEBER:

"THE SECRET IS IN THE SIGN!"
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Berdagon said
AND AS ALWAYS KIDS, REMEBER:

"THE SECRET IS IN THE SIGN!"


It's a boob O,o

EDIT: Sorry, but had to post it ;)
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Wodgev said
Slight change to Vryad's domains and history. Hope you like it.

Wodgev said
Secret Lore
Vryad also wears the mantle of Death and Repose. By utilizing a complex "system" of servitars (impossible to comprehend by the mortal mind, and sometimes even an immortal mind), Vryad makes sure that the dead stay dead, and are brought to whichever deity they worshipped in life (contracted souls are, naturally, a different story entirely). However, when an atheist (or someone who doesn't worship just one God) dies, their soul is "judged" by Vryad, and their soul can end up anywhere Vryad's "system" deems "logical".


I don't mind you taking an extra domain, but I can't think of any logical explanation why your god would do that. He is the cheater/chance god and he is chaotic evil. The distributer of souls should be a judger god and neutral.
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LordMarwain said
It's a boob O,oEDIT: Sorry, but had to post it ;)


say it IC. it'll be fun.

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LordMarwain said
I don't mind you taking an extra domain, but I can't think of any logical explanation why your god would do that. He is the cheater/chance god and he is chaotic evil. The distributer of souls should be a judger god and neutral.


agreed
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akje said
say it IC. it'll be fun.


SO MUCH TEMPTATION
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