WizardGirl said
No, sorry. But its for two reasons:1) Its so many spelling mistakes, I don't wanna read it.2) "Fart bending" is not funny, its only funny with kids.

Fixed it

…Are you joking? "one of the greatest airbenders alive", "ability of entering the spirit world with ease", and "descendent of Zuko and aang"

You are just trying to say "Mary Sue or Marty Stu" and if you know what that means, the term "Prodigy" comes to mind also.

WizardGirl said
…Are you joking? "one of the greatest airbenders alive", "ability of entering the spirit world with ease", and "descendent of Zuko and aang"You are just trying to say "Mary Sue or Marty Stu" and if you know what that means, the term "Prodigy" comes to mind also.

Sorry

Is this better?

Bio:descendent of Zuko a,he has shown affinity with air bending since birth,by the time he was 13,he recognized as an airbending master,he can enter the spirit world,but only with a few hours of meditation
has left home to follow the air nomads way and live alone

Hey Leda should Ton and Rikka know each other because they are both from the Northern water tribe?

Teoinsanity said
Is this better?

I believe that the issue that Wizard is trying to point out is that the characters you've been making have been a bit too I hesitate to use the word "perfect", but that's the only one that comes to mind, hence the Mary/Marty Stu comment. If your character really has to be a master of their respective element, there should be a reason for it, or at the very least there should be a significant trade off that could be a serious hindrance. For example: I made Jacque a water bending expert, but ONLY because he was taught as a child by his tribe for years as a means of compensating for his missing arm, and Shiro could be considered a fire bending expert, but ONLY because as eddieddi stated, he was trained and can only use lighting OR fire at one time rather than combining them. There's a certain balance that must be found when one makes a character.
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That aside, there sure are a lot of water benders here. One could even say it's practically...raining them.
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That was a terrible joke but I couldn't help it. I'll go sit in the corner

Sure I have no problem with that saarebas, friends or rivals?

A friendly rivalry sounds good to me. :)

MonsieurShade said
There sure are a lot of water benders here. One could even say it's practically...raining them.

You good sir win the title of funniest post of the day XD

Viva la resistance! Don't laugh ^-^ just wanted to throw something in

Here it is,re-revised CS:

Name:Mike shulk

Age :14

Gender:male

Appearance:Zuko with airbender tattoos instead of a scar

Bending element:air

Personality:a nice ,happy go lucky ,carefree good-doer who is very protective of his friends,is a wacky crackpot as well,and will sometimes take part in crazy shenanigans,and enjoys reading and studying.

Bio:descendent of Zuko a,he has shown affinity with air bending since birth,when his parents were teaching his firebending siblings how to fire bend,and when the rest of the family were out and about,he was reading books by various airbending gurus on airbending and practicing what they said.(thus not a lot of people know who he is.).

When he was 8 years old ,he went to the northern air temple ,not out of force,but by his own request allowing him to get better training then he did at home,there he meditated and practiced airbending in isolation,when he was bored he would read the temple library ,and finished half of its books,he would also sneak out during the night to practice airbending alone.

By the time he was 13,he recognized as an airbending master,and could enter the spirit world,but only with a few hours of deep meditation.

He has left the temple to travel the world ,and possibly teach people who need to learn airbending but can't .

Weapons:an air glider of the model korra used.and a bison whistle

Family:has the fire-nation royal family,but he travels only with his flying bison named Aero.

Orientation :straight

Other:due to being a monk for 5 years,he prefers to peacefully solve situations,but when the time calls for it,he can fight,but will never kill.

Is a vegetarian .

K so I just realized that saarebas and I have
Completely taken this roleplay over. I'm going to wait for the others

K so I just realized that saarebas and I have Completely taken this roleplay over so I'm going to wait for the others

sorry my stupid phone spazzed out on me

I'm waiting for Kronshi

sorry, wizard, but it seems that I always get on right after you get off

No, I was watching Youtube. The time passer.

Well,is the new CS better?

parents where a fire... bender and a earth bender
magma bending here i come...

Sorry if my post isn't very good, my brain is still fried from midterms

still open?