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kapuchu said
...Go Denmark?


Denmark is cool.

Plus, Vikings.
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And there ya go! Finally! Only took me three fucking hours to write that background xD
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kapuchu said
And there ya go! Finally! Only took me three fucking hours to write that background xD


Deus mea, Kapu.

I'm going to go weep in a corner because my backstories always suck.
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Deus mea, Kapu.I'm going to go weep in a corner because my backstories always suck.


I could probably have done better if I cared to put more work into it... But this is pretty much it :P Not much to tell about someone without parents living on the streets.
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I could probably have done better if I cared to put more work into it... But this is pretty much it :P Not much to tell about someone without parents living on the streets.


You still managed to produce a fair amount, I'd say.
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All right, here it is. It only took me the whole day.
Hopefully this is acceptable!
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I would like to reserve a spot for a Titan class. Infused with Giant blood, his shifter form would be about as large as a typical school bus if it were on it's end. Enormous strength and high durability. Uses any weapon he can get his hands on, even other badguys. I'll get a CS up tomorrow if this preview is accepted.
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I would like to Reserve the Dragon Titan Class, Ill post the Cs tomorrow since it's late today
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Suddenly! Two people pop out and reserve spots!

Let's see where this goes, shall we?

EDIT: Three people suddenly reserving spots!
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Count me in?
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Scio said
Count me in?


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I would like to Reserve the Dragon Titan Class, Ill post the Cs tomorrow since it's late today


Sure thing guys :) I think we're at max capacity. 8 players at the moment. Additional applicants will be put in a "maybe" spot, so to speak. So, for now, full team. Nice to have you guys ^^

Monochromatic? I'll give your CS a look later. I'm about to head out for a 4 hour train trip to visit my dad. I have my laptop with me so I'll reply later :)
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Sure thing guys :) I think we're at max capacity. 8 players at the moment. Additional applicants will be put in a "maybe" spot, so to speak. So, for now, full team. Nice to have you guys ^^ Monochromatic? I'll give your CS a look later. I'm about to head out for a 4 hour train trip to visit my dad. I have my laptop with me so I'll reply later :)


Alrighty, I'll be waitin'
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Spent all of last night just trying to find a picture I liked for my character. I'm big on visuals.

Gonna hopefully get the CS written up today in between loads of laundry. XD
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After much arguing and many letters of pure vitriol, she was pulled from public school and began to

And began to what?

Alright... there are a few things. First is her Blast of Magic thing. I hope you're okay with it just being a medium-to-short range ability? Does really fit with a Valkyrie to have long-range abilities. As for her wings, I have found pictures of Valkyries with wings so I'm letting it pass.

The biggest thing, however, is her Shifter appearance. Valkyries were more than just warriors, they were also servants and lovers, meaning that they also had a very feminine side. I feel like your Alice is a bit too... masculine for a Valkyrie, at least in her Shifter Form. I would suggest changing her Valkyrie Body to be more feminine, at least have her face be kinder than usual. Remember that you become a hybrid of that kind of Mythic and her human self, so it goes without saying that she would become more like a proper Valkyrie. So... you don't have to make her any less muscle-y (though you can, if you want). I just ask that her face becomes kinder rather than more scowling.

Aside from that... pretty much good to go :)
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And began to what? Alright... there are a few things. First is her Blast of Magic thing. I hope you're okay with it just being a medium-to-short range ability? Does really fit with a Valkyrie to have long-range abilities. As for her wings, I have found pictures of Valkyries with wings so I'm letting it pass. The biggest thing, however, is her Shifter appearance. Valkyries were more than just warriors, they were also servants and lovers, meaning that they also had a very feminine side. I feel like your Alice is a bit too... masculine for a Valkyrie, at least in her Shifter Form. I would suggest changing her Valkyrie Body to be more feminine, at least have her face be kinder than usual. Remember that you become a hybrid of that kind of Mythic and her human self, so it goes without saying that she would become more like a proper Valkyrie. So... you don't have to make her any less muscle-y (though you can, if you want). I just ask that her face becomes kinder rather than more scowling. Aside from that... pretty much good to go :)


Alright, I'll get to work on fixing those once I'm at my computer.

And iirc, I did list the magic blast being short ranged, with the reasoning being the same as you said- it wouldn't make a whole lot of sense for a long ranged Valkyrie.
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Alright, I'll get to work on fixing those once I'm at my computer.And iirc, I did list the magic blast being short ranged, with the reasoning being the same as you said- it wouldn't make a whole lot of sense for a long ranged Valkyrie.


You did write that it was short range. I simply forgot ^^

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I would like to reserve a spot for a Titan class. Infused with Giant blood, his shifter form would be about as large as a typical school bus if it were on it's end. Enormous strength and high durability. Uses any weapon he can get his hands on, even other badguys. I'll get a CS up tomorrow if this preview is accepted.


I see no problem with that. Sorry for the late reply, btw. also, just for the record, it isn't blood but "Essence", so something like a piece of their magic or soul.
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And began to what? Alright... there are a few things. First is her Blast of Magic thing. I hope you're okay with it just being a medium-to-short range ability? Does really fit with a Valkyrie to have long-range abilities. As for her wings, I have found pictures of Valkyries with wings so I'm letting it pass. The biggest thing, however, is her Shifter appearance. Valkyries were more than just warriors, they were also servants and lovers, meaning that they also had a very feminine side. I feel like your Alice is a bit too... masculine for a Valkyrie, at least in her Shifter Form. I would suggest changing her Valkyrie Body to be more feminine, at least have her face be kinder than usual. Remember that you become a hybrid of that kind of Mythic and her human self, so it goes without saying that she would become more like a proper Valkyrie. So... you don't have to make her any less muscle-y (though you can, if you want). I just ask that her face becomes kinder rather than more scowling. Aside from that... pretty much good to go :)


Alright, so hopefully the couple changes I made will suffice?

I didn't cut down on the muscle, but at least she's not got a hawk face in human form anymore.
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Mach2 said
Hey, another Canadian! Whoo! Happy Thanksgiving, Bunnita. :)


Ewwwww... you're one too? XDDD True north strong and free!! Wut!! Maple s'up, girl! ;D But yeah happy Turkey day to you too, Mach2!!^-^!!

K sooooooo like I'm still trapped at daddy's place so all's I gots. Is muh phone. So hopefully later tonight I will have sumpin up k?
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Alright, so hopefully the couple changes I made will suffice?I didn't cut down on the muscle, but at least she's not got a hawk face in human form anymore.


I forgot to tell you, but it's approved :P added under the Character List in the first post.
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