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I still have Lance submitted earlier in the thread, waiting to be gone over.

However, I'm going to overhaul him, should be done later today.
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I know, I know, his techniques section looks intimidating, but he's not stronger than anyone else of the rookie captains, he's probably more experienced, I'd wager.
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Things that have been pointed out, that looks like will need to be pointed out again, Firstly, you dont give yourself a bounty, Since Jabber had to step down as GM, it'll be up to Dawnstar to give you a bounty and quite honestly.....Desertion wouldn't earn you such a high bounty, no matter who you are. Plus you'd only put a bigger target on your back and lessen your characters survival chances anyway.

And Secondly, wasn't it said one who thinks of using Rokushiki should only know (or was it master) 2-3 of the styles?
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Things that have been pointed out, that looks like will need to be pointed out again, Firstly, you dont give yourself a bounty, Since Jabber had to step down as GM, it'll be up to Dawnstar to give you a bounty and quite honestly.....Desertion wouldn't earn you such a high bounty, no matter who you are. Plus you'd only put a bigger target on your back and lessen your characters survival chances anyway.And Secondly, wasn't it said one who thinks of using Rokushiki should only know (or was it master) 2-3 of the styles?


First off, Jabber told me it was up to myself. 20 Mill is more than possible for desertion, realistically he should get like 100 million (Which is excessive, I'm using Drake for reference, as he and Lance's positions are somewhat similar.). What do you think happens to a Military officer who goes rogue in real life? They get hunted down like a dog, it doesn't matter how dangerous the person might be or not, it's a matter of principal, and I would only imagine the Marine would act the same way, especially post-Luffy who they all thought was "No big deal" but instead came to take the entire world. The target on his back was the reason I decided to make him an Ex-Marine. Not a very practical choice if you're in the business of staying alive and safe.

Secondly: I have no clue, I ain't been keeping up with the OOC very much. Lance hasn't mastered any of the techniques, so that should count for something. His mastery of each ability is about on par with what I would imagine Kobi's was pre-timeskip but Lance knows all the techniques, instead of just Soru. If GM-Man has a problem, I'm sure he would tell me so.
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Jabber isn't in charge anymore Hilan, Dawnstar. And yes 20 mill is excessive and he shouldn't start with so many techniques. I think I have the most abilities at the moment and that's three. So just tweak it.
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Yeah, we're supposed to be rookie pirates, so our abilities shouldn't be so high tier right now.
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Luffy had a bounty of 30 million at the time he went through Lougetown, he had spanked three "Big" pirates, all with Bounty's almost at 10k, Arlong's being at 11. But once he did insult the world government and the marines his bounty became triple of what it was before. Deserting your rank and bombing your base would put you on the Governments most wanted. As for the techniques, Like I said, I have no clue what the limits were / are, like you said, Jabber ain't in charge, it comes down to what Dawnstar says. I've not intended for Lance to be stronger than anyone else, quite the opposite, actually.
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I like the character and all but having all the abilities of Rokushiki. Perhaps removing one or two would be good. I would suggest getting rid of Rankyaku Kyanon and Shigan Kyanon. Shigan is more of a piercing type of ability which requires a sharp point. Developing it into a blunt force weapon would take quite a bit of time to perfect. As for Rankyaku Kyanon, a move like that is similar to when Zoro uses Mutoryu and seems a bit too powerful. A move like that would posses both the speed of Shigan and the cutting power of Rankyaku which would then negate the supposedly 'blunt' damage by Shigan. Kyanon. It just ignores the principle of Shigan Kyanon to even use Rankyaku Kyanon.

Anyway, I've been thinking of restyling the whole idea. Been looking into a different time setting. Something more in the future with a higher tech style. Something more than just muskets that the One Piece world naturally has. Say, a more modern setting. Pirates still exist and such, better weaponry, more room to grow and the possibility of a larger organization than the World Government.
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Go for it.
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DAWNSTAR said
I like the character and all but having all the abilities of Rokushiki. Perhaps removing one or two would be good. I would suggest getting rid of Rankyaku Kyanon and Shigan Kyanon. Shigan is more of a piercing type of ability which requires a sharp point. Developing it into a blunt force weapon would take quite a bit of time to perfect. As for Rankyaku Kyanon, a move like that is similar to when Zoro uses Mutoryu and seems a bit too powerful. A move like that would posses both the speed of Shigan and the cutting power of Rankyaku which would then negate the supposedly 'blunt' damage by Shigan. Kyanon. It just ignores the principle of Shigan Kyanon to even use Rankyaku Kyanon. Anyway, I've been thinking of restyling the whole idea. Been looking into a different time setting. Something more in the future with a higher tech style. Something more than just muskets that the One Piece world naturally has. Say, a more modern setting. Pirates still exist and such, better weaponry, more room to grow and the possibility of a larger organization than the World Government.


Fair enoough. They shall be removed.

And I don't know about the chaning of settings. You should be careful regarding that.
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Yeah, I'm not sure about the change of setting either. I sort of thought we could just continue on with what we already have. But I guess it might be fun to give it a try.
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Don't change the time of the RP. I like it the way it is. Want to appeal to the One Piece lovers not change what they know.
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While the idea to change the time might create interesting story opportunities you can't forget that most people are here for One Piece and too big a change can be unsettling. However the rp already takes place after the anime/manga so in my opinion some advances would be okay, for example submarines and androids becoming more common, the synthetic Devil Fruits expanding beyond just the Zoan type, stuff like that
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Airships and laserguns or bust. :_>
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How about no Hilan, that's just freaken stupid
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I would also like to put it out there, i think we should make a new thread.
Reasons why:
Dawnstar has no control over the starting OC so he cannot make changes.
I don't think i can play the role i gave to Edge and would like to adjust him so he's not a dick.
We don't have to make Dawnstar's character an NPC if we start a new one.
So i think a new thread would be best. Bu in the same time period.
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BrodZ11711 said
I would also like to put it out there, i think we should make a new thread.Reasons why: Dawnstar has no control over the starting OC so he cannot make changes.I don't think i can play the role i gave to Edge and would like to adjust him so he's not a dick.We don't have to make Dawnstar's character an NPC if we start a new one. So i think a new thread would be best. Bu in the same time period.


The smileyface was enough of an indication I was messing about, I myself would've imagined. But you know.

Anyway, yeah, what you said, new thread, create a character stash to throw all the CS's in.
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Yeah everything considered that might be the best solution
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We need to wait for DAWNSTAR to tell what he is doing and Hilan sorry
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No harm no foul. :P
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