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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Rock Killjoy
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Commander Ada Larkin said
I think I can turn my concept into a Sith Assassin who could be her master.


I would be fine with that, but I don't want to force your hand so it's up to you.
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No, it still fits with my core idea. Let's do it. PM me your thoughts, if you'd like & we can synchronize our characters.
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@Apollosarcher: For now, I'm going to have to deny your character. I don't reasonably see a Jedi being granted Knighthood at 18 years old, especially with the stigma that would be on his name, he's lucky he was trained at all. I'm still hesitant with his capabilities as well, for such a young Jedi. Mastery over two styles and continued adept training in another two, some knowledge in three separate force powers on top of what is normally taught(Yes, even if he has neglected most of them, its not a stretch to go and pull them out full power on someone), all the while maintaining his use of a blaster with his only real weakness being piloting, and being seen as a corrupt knight? (Which is contradictory to being able to be on the council already, if it wasn't only for his emotions). Your more than welcome to edit it if you want, and I'll gladly look at it again, but for right now, its denied.
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Poof, Nvm
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Name: Sergeant Austacar Condar Trooper-02456 Callsign "Hunter 2-4"
Gender:Male
Species:Human
Age: 27
Homeworld: Dantooine, though his family is more of a spacer family
Faction:Republic
Role:Marksmen

Physical Appearance: Austcar

Personality: Cold and calculating, Austacar cares very little for the lives of the enemy he hunts them like he hunts any other animal, he is particularly fond of wounding enemies and seeing who comes out to take the bait to save their friends lives, under fire or on base he is still the same stone faced and stone hearted, he does not say very much.

Skills: -Skilled Marksmen
- Adept Close quarters combat specialist
- pretty good at hand to hand combat
-can drive a swoop bike like a pro

Equipment: TF-E armor, helmet can be linked up to the tacpad on his wrist to act sort of like a spotter for him also has advanced optics within the helmet, Blaster pistol, Sniper rifle, thermal detonators, Vibroknife

Powers: N/a

Flaws: His lone wolf attitude tends not to make him very many friends, he tends to disobey direct orders to chase after his "Quarry", His knowledge of electronics does not extend past his wrist mounted tacpad.

Personal History: Born on Dantooine too, a big game hunter and his wife they lived the nomad life style his mother would tell him he was lucky he was not born on a ship. But his life was enjoyable to say the least he got to see much of the galaxy, got to help his father track down big game and learn the skills his grandfather taught his father.

As Austacar grew older his father would trust him with more things by age 14 he was holding the rifle himself and taking down many a beast, but Austacar also felt like something was missing from his life something he couldn't quite put his finger on. But he found it in old holovids of republic battles from days past and found himself filled with a sense of patriotism so he left his nomadic ways at age 18 and joined up with the republic military.

His skills as a marksmen were quickly noted and he was transferred into a paratrooper regiment that terminate any sith splinter factions that dared rear their ugly head. He earned his stripes in these battles because the brass saw potential, but his commanding officers only saw that his lone wolf attitude got in the way and the brass was rewarding him for it. They made his life a living hell for it but he didn't give them any reaction he did what he was told and still managed to save lives.

Through his years of service he had distinguished himself in many battles, eventually brass saw a better use for him in TF-E and transferred him into the unit where he uses his skill set to hunt the enemies of the republic at his discretion.
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Alright I'll make some edits, I was using some other Jedi for references then again most the Jedi I've seen are in games, movies, and such are quite overpowered.
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Would it be alright if I kept my characters Race/age clouded? I was thinking of just being human but I rather like the idea of being some obscure race that no one knows. His mask will cover him all the time too and no one dreams of asking. I was thinking, if he was human, he would probably be about 34-37? Also with me not knowing the universe too much you will have to check my history quite thoroughly, I'm sure something conflicts.

Anywho it's finished so please let me know your feelings on it! Should still be on the first page!
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Wow, this thing caught traction really fast,

I'm going to be making a bounty hunter/merc/soldier type likely under the employ of the Task force

EDIT: Derp... I was going to go for a cold and efficient bounty hunter/sniper with a bit of a lone wolf things, but it seems I've been beaten to the punch
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@Enalais: Approved and good to go

@Blackbeard: Yea, just PM me the stuff that's clouded and unknown, if you wouldn't mind. Somewhere around there would be fitting, age wise. Barring anything unusual with that stuff, you should be good.
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Wow, this thing caught traction really fast,I'm going to be making a bounty hunter/merc/soldier type likely under the employ of the Task forceEDIT: Derp... I was going to go for a cold and efficient bounty hunter/sniper with a bit of a lone wolf things, but it seems I've been beaten to the punch


I can change him if you want. I just threw him up there because everyone seems to want to play a chief and not an Indian.
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I'm accepted? coooool. Yeah I'll PM you!
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I can change him if you want. I just threw him up there because everyone seems to want to play a chief and not an Indian.


It feels wrong to ask someone to change their character just because of something I want. I might try to come up with a slightly different personality, but its still going to be rather aloof and out of touch.

I'm thinking a Mandalorian bounty hunter (#basic.), mainly because I have yet to play a mandalorian in a Star Wars RP. Mandalorians look cool as fuck, but I'll do my best not to put up a Fett wannabe
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vietmyke said
It feels wrong to ask someone to change their character just because of something I want. I might try to come up with a slightly different personality, but its still going to be rather aloof and out of touch.I'm thinking a Mandalorian bounty hunter (#basic.), mainly because I have yet to play a mandalorian in a Star Wars RP. Mandalorians look cool as fuck, but I'll do my best not to put up a Fett wannabe


Dude it's cool i just kinda threw my dart at my board of characters and it came up aloof lone wolf marksmen. But it could of easily have been loud mouth demolitions expert, or war wearied rifleman. I do play a good war weary character made Sep cry.
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is this still open/accepting?
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@drallinix: Yep, it still is.

@Apollo: Alright, with the edits made, your accepted now.
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cool then ill be applying soon I will start my CS now.
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Name: Krix
Gender: male
Species: human
Age: 19
Homeworld: doesn't remember

Physical Appearance:
He is 6'2 and weighs 190 lbs. He ahs short spiky brown hair and green eyes. His body is covered in scars and he has long fangs.

Personality: He is hardened and powerful. He can be arrogant at times because of what he has been through. He has a soft spot for women and dislikes killing them. Also he believes that someone should be judged on action and treats many people as equals. He uses his hatred to fuel him, and he hates the republic more than anything else.

Skills: He is a master of the lightsaber. He has been practicing its techniques since he could walk. He is effective at using the djem so, soresu, and juyo forms.

Equipment: two lightsabers, the first of which that is wielded in either his right or both hands has a purple crystal. The second has a red crystal, but is only used when using juyo and is held in his left hand.

Powers: He is extremely powerful in the force. He is normally extremely powerful able to throw things such as starship wings and boulders. However when enraged he becomes an insatiable juggernaut. He can rip small ships to pieces and crush rooms in his fury.

Flaws: He cant see colors(he sees in black and white) making starship flying as out of the question. He also will attempt not to kill women and just subdue them. He can be irrational due to anger and pride.

Personal History: His master found him as a baby. She was a sith lord, but unlike many sith she wanted children. After killing a rogue jedi she discovered a small child in the recesses of the hut. He was the jedi's son. She took the infant with her and raised him aboard her ship. His childhood was not nice however she taught him everything he knows. From his saber styles to his mastery of the force all were beaten into him through hours of training. She utilized methods such as sparring and iron body to make sure he always had to be on gaurd and maintain his edge. He was also tortured and beaten daily to ensure he could take pain. When the empire fell thy killed the sith woman. He considered her his mother and loved her as such. Finally he found himself where he is now. Fighting to destroy the republic that killed the only person who ever loved him. Now he is going to kill any republic soldier they can.
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Uuuummm, Vaapad form was invented by Mace Windu who has yet to be born... At this time period the style would have Juyo which is similar as it is the style to Vaapad but the Jedi council limited it's use as it can lead to the dark side as such very few Jedi practice it however many Sith use Juyo with no hesitation as it is about power and focus on using the blade to rip apart your enemy.
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ok edited and I never looked to much into it. So that's one new thing ive learned today.
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I'll have a CS up soon! Question though, is there any form of weaponry that isn't a light sabre and isn't just a conventional blaster? Like blades of sort but more deadly so it would be on-par with a light sabre?
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