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It's my fault for starting it so late. I hope we aren't moving too quickly.
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Its fine, just try not to let anything big happen before I can post.
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No worries! We have to wait for everyone to meet up before this story can go anywhere.
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All right, posted.
I tend to post more often in Casual, so... my posts might take longer to write than yours...
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Asdfghjkkl...that intro~
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Is it bad? It ended up shorter than usual but is it too long for this RP?
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There is no such thing as too long
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RainDash said
Is it bad? It ended up shorter than usual but is it too long for this RP?


I liked it. it seemed like a good intro.
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Ah, thanks. Just didn't wanna steamroll you guys is all.
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RainDash said
Is it bad? It ended up shorter than usual but is it too long for this RP?


No, no, it's fantastic! I really liked it!

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There is no such thing as too long


Agreed. I will gladly read a complete wall of text as long as there's something interesting there.
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RainDash said
Ah, thanks. Just didn't wanna steamroll you guys is all.


I'm good on either short on long posts. But I really hope to strengthen my ability to write long style with detail, and to be able to do it well.
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Toxic Diamond said
I'm good on either short on long posts. But I really hope to strengthen my ability to write long style with detail, and to be able to do it well.


All it takes is practice. Take time to ask, what would this person be doing while talking, or how do they respond then carefully write responses.
It not always perfect, but it helps.
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Damn 19 posts missed one day and now gotta read them thanks guys xD.
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RainDash said
All it takes is practice. Take time to ask, what would this person be doing while talking, or how do they respond then carefully write responses.It not always perfect, but it helps.


Hmm... Thanks for the advice. I'll try that next time.
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I feel like Lyra isn't going to be able to keep up her air of being a lady lol
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Lol, last I had seen the the thread, there were only 5 posts. Thank the Lord for allowing me to understand what I read, if that makes any sense, lol.
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Haha, I love how the girls are all like
"Oh, hello madam, I do hope we aren't going to our deaths"
And then the guys are just like
"Hey idiot, you forgot your pants."
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Haha, I love how the girls are all like"Oh, hello madam, I do hope we aren't going to our deaths"And then the guys are just like"Hey idiot, you forgot your pants."


I laughed way too hard at this.
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YamiCuoreLaroux said
I laughed way too hard at this.


*bows*
Thank you, thank you.
I try.
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I keep forgetting to ask, but What time period is this?
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