1 Guest viewing this page
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Rethel34
Raw
Avatar of Rethel34

Rethel34 Inverted Archery

Member Seen 6 mos ago

Works for me. I'll get an IC post up in a minute.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by manapool1
Raw
Avatar of manapool1

manapool1 A wanderer who is actually lost

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

Appearance: Short, skinny but all muscle, large blue eyes, short black hair,pale skin. Plaid flannel open to a vailent thorr shirt, blue jeans, ragged loafers, and fist wraps
Name:Guy funnuchi
Birthdate: august first 2989
Backstory: A Sicilian boy, who when on to become a skilled martial artist to win money to save his family from the mob. He started out doing savate and bare knuckle boxing and moved on to Asia, then americas. After the war he became a hero, going around doing anything he can to help people. He is hunted by many people, for he rarely ever kills. He is currently running from a gang that wants him dead for saving a young girl from slavery. He has bee shot and could has not yet cleaned the wound, he has not eaten in 3 days.
Starting weapon: thought skilled with most weapons he carries none.
Type of social skill: thought many people find it relaxing talking to him, He also has a way of making people understand without having to say much.
Type of combat skill: he manly excels in savate but is trained in many styles.
Type of craft skill: Guy is good at making fire and fire places
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by ViKtoricus
Raw
GM

ViKtoricus

Member Seen 10 yrs ago

manapool1 said
Appearance: Short, skinny but all muscle, large blue eyes, short black hair,pale skin. Plaid flannel open to a vailent thorr shirt, blue jeans, ragged loafers, and fist wrapsName:Guy funnuchiBirthdate: august first 3000Backstory: A Sicilian boy, who when on to become a skilled martial artist to win money to save his family from the mob. He started out doing savate and bare knuckle boxing and moved on to Asia, then americas. After the war he became a hero, going around doing anything he can to help people. He is hunted by many people, for he rarely ever kills. He is currently running from a gang that wants him dead for saving a young girl from slavery.Starting weapon: thought skilled with most weapons he carries none.Type of social skill: Guy is very good at hand to hand combat and listening.Type of combat skill: he manly excels in savate but is trained in many styles.Type of craft skill: Guy is good at making fire and fire places


Hi there. Thanks for the interest.

Before I accept your character sheet, things must be done first. You need to add 17 more coherent words in your backstory (it must total to 100, now you have 83.), and you have to clarify your age. You can't be ten years old. That's too young and weak.

Also, your social skill is a little off. Hand to hand combat falls at combat skill and the listening skill is rather vague. Be specific.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by MurderedLove
Raw

MurderedLove

Member Offline since relaunch

Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by manapool1
Raw
Avatar of manapool1

manapool1 A wanderer who is actually lost

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

ViKtoricus said
Hi there. Thanks for the interest.Before I accept your character sheet, things must be done first. You need to add 17 more coherent words in your backstory (it must total to 100, now you have 83.), and you have to clarify your age. You can't be ten years old. That's too young and weak.Also, your social skill is a little off. Hand to hand combat falls at combat skill and the listening skill is rather vague. Be specific.


sorry I'm not to well with character sheets. I am not really good rp either,but I am worse at character sheets.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by ViKtoricus
Raw
GM

ViKtoricus

Member Seen 10 yrs ago

MurderedLove said



Accepted, but one thing.

For your combat skill, why not just put dagger fighting? You have a dagger, so there's no reason not to use it. lol.

Anyway, it looks as if you have over 200 words worth of backstory, which gives you a bonus. But I have to double check.

Right now, I have to go. See you all soon. Tomorrow most likely.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by ViKtoricus
Raw
GM

ViKtoricus

Member Seen 10 yrs ago

manapool1 said
sorry I'm not to well with character sheets. I am not really good rp either,but I am worse at character sheets.


No no, You're fine. Just revise it.

You'll improve over time.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by manapool1
Raw
Avatar of manapool1

manapool1 A wanderer who is actually lost

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

I tried again, still might have some problems.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by DaDrummer676
Raw
Avatar of DaDrummer676

DaDrummer676

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Still making my CS XD will be up today hopefully.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by xRobynx
Raw

xRobynx

Member Seen 10 yrs ago

Name: Alexis 'Alex' Fletcher

Birthdate: March 14, 2990 ( 20 years old )

Backstory: Alexis was born in South Carolina along with her brother Chance on a small cotton farm. She spent her childhood days helping out on the farm and her father even taught her how to shoot a rifle. Her favorite rifle became her father's Mosin but for more utilitarian purposes use used a much smaller .22. It was essential to keep the small animals out of the crops and she became quite the shot. Not long before it all began her parents got divorced with her father and Chance staying on the farm and her mother and she left for California.

Alexis wasn't happy with leaving the farm that she had grew up and worked on all her life. During the outbreak she hasn't heard anything from her father or brother besides one phone call. Her mother had been killed while at working as a nurse in a hospital recieving the first of the ill in the area. Since it has seemed the entire world has gone to Hell. Alexis has surivied relativily well as she has reverted back to her days on the farm doing what she knows best to survive. She only keeps a 9mm pistol, a pocketknife and a small backpack of scavenged supplies on her person. She hopes to one day find an old Mosin just like she used to use with her father. Not only would it be quite the keepsake, but ammo was always plentiful.

Starting weapon: 9mm Pistol with 24 bullets.

Type of social skill: None.

Type of combat skill: Marksmanship

Type of craft skill: Farming

Appearance:

Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by manapool1
Raw
Avatar of manapool1

manapool1 A wanderer who is actually lost

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

those eyes
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by DaDrummer676
Raw
Avatar of DaDrummer676

DaDrummer676

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

That hair XD my guy is going to call her Orange if they meet XD or Clemintine
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by xRobynx
Raw

xRobynx

Member Seen 10 yrs ago

Your name sounds familiar. Have we RP'd before drummer?
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by manapool1
Raw
Avatar of manapool1

manapool1 A wanderer who is actually lost

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

not me but maybe dadrummer.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by DaDrummer676
Raw
Avatar of DaDrummer676

DaDrummer676

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

I don't think so Robyn, but my memory is horrible.... So I apologize if I don't remember you.....
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by manapool1
Raw
Avatar of manapool1

manapool1 A wanderer who is actually lost

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

soo... Have you guys posted yet.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by xRobynx
Raw

xRobynx

Member Seen 10 yrs ago

well its very possible i'm mistaken. I am running on caffeine and have bad enough memory as is. =X
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Rethel34
Raw
Avatar of Rethel34

Rethel34 Inverted Archery

Member Seen 6 mos ago

Mana, your character is still a 10-year-old boy, which was already said as a no-go.

Robyn, your character seems in order, and you're likely to get that $100 bonus for 200+ words. But best to wait for Vik to get back before doing any IC posting if he hasn't accepted you.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by DaDrummer676
Raw
Avatar of DaDrummer676

DaDrummer676

Member Seen 9 yrs ago


Name: Tony Hart
Birthdate: June 28, 2987. He's 23
Backstory: Tony was born the youngest of eight. Or so, that's what his adoptive parents told him. Apperently, his parents gave him away, not being able to provide for him. You think they would have realized that they couldn't afford eight children before they actually HAD eight children. Hart was given to a single mother who had lost her son at birth and was recently divorced. He doesn't remember much about his childhood. All he remembers is that his mother, Mary, always provided for him. Through thick and thin they always had each other's backs. Tony soon realized that he was horrible at school, and was close to flunking out by high school. He did find that learning languages was fairly easy. He already knew Spanish, his mother taught him as a kid. Hart graduated high school with happiness, and immediately joined the USMC. Boot camp was brutal, seeing as Tony was very out of shape. As time went on, he became very fit, and an excellent marksman. He became a sniper, with secondary training with all weapons. Tony toured in Afghanistan 3 times. He was sent back home after being shot in the knee. Hart rehabilitated, but still walks with a slight limp and can't run very fast. Not being able to return to the military, he opened a small hockey hardware business. He still resides there, but is about to go on the move, because of the lack of food.
Starting weapon: Nothing, wondering what this bonus will be.
Type of social skill: Lack of fear.
Type of combat skill: Was in the USMC. He is skilled with most guns, but is best with rifles and pistols.
Type of craft skill: He speaks Spanish, Italian, and sign language.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Rethel34
Raw
Avatar of Rethel34

Rethel34 Inverted Archery

Member Seen 6 mos ago

EDIT: Never mind, you fixed your image.

The url that you use for an image has to end in .jpg, .png, .gif, etc. just for future reference.
↑ Top
1 Guest viewing this page
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet