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Here's my Sevant character. Criticism is well received! :D
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Okay, my Master has been fixed and i just finished my first beast servant. Can someone please give me some feed back on my Servants, as I have no idea if they are good or not. Also, helping me Rank my skills and Noble Phantasms(if they're acceptable) would be much appreciated.
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I'm cancelling my Lancer. Apparently making a servant takes time and effort. :p I did what I'm good at.
Also on the "disrupting" part, I need your help on that one Gnar, I was thinking of making the arrows like Kiritsugu's but I don't think I should.
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Masaki Haruna said
I'm cancelling my Lancer. Apparently making a servant takes time and effort. :p I did what I'm good at.Also on the "disrupting" part, I need your help on that one Gnar, I was thinking of making the arrows like Kiritsugu's but I don't think I should.


Well, Kerry's Origin Bullets are because his Origin of Severing and Binding is pretty much perfectly suited to screwing over Circuits. Though that's a permanent disruption. There is a temporary disruption magecraft (Counter Magic IIRC?) though, but I think you need it to hit the magus exclusively. I'm not 100% sure on that front.

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Okay, my Master has been fixed and i just finished my first beast servant. Can someone please give me some feed back on my Servants, as I have no idea if they are good or not. Also, helping me Rank my skills and Noble Phantasms(if they're acceptable) would be much appreciated.


Alrighty then.

@Solomon: Magic Resistance is not a Caster-class Skill, they're Territory and Item Construction. END/AGI are... Really high for Caster-class (But Caster base AGI is C, so maybe B could pass though that's rather high in and of itself). Demons and demonic possession in Nasuverse don't work like that, and I'm not sure angels are even a thing (unless you count V/V who looks like an angel but is actually just the Ultimate One of Venus). And Knowledge of Respect and Harmony? I know he was given wisdom from God, but I think that'd more correspond to Revelation more than anything.

@Nidhogg: Okay, so don't know much about the Beast class, but I'm definitely sure Nidhogg has no justification for Independent Action of that rank, especially in a class without IA as a skill. Plus, I think Niddhogg is still alive and thus ineligible for being a Servant? I 'unno how Gnar wants to treat that. Speaking of which, Nidhogg is a dragon right? That should mean he gets Prana Burst and Magic Resistance A as personal skills due to the whole 'dragons are living prana furnaces that breathe prana' thing. Also, those Personal Skills seem like less skills and more NPs with their absurdity. 'Biting through most mystic bindings' and 'nigh incurable curse breath/bite' just seem really powerful for something he can do even outside full Nidhogg form. Also, chaos magic? What's that?

No comment on NPs yet, since they seem to be WIP.
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Right, finished them!

Now to see if they are accepted and then find a servant.
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Okay, So far I've been playing this by ear but it seems that's not good enough to make a servant. Looks I'll have to bury myself in the wiki and look up everything that could possibly apply to all my chatacters.

@Grey, thanks for the info. I'll look up all the things you listed in your response, as well as nerf Nidhogg's abilities, as well as Solomon's stats. Geez, this is all a helluva lot more complicated than I first thought. But It'll be worth it once the RP starts.
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Here's what I've got for a Master.

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Okay, time to put my GM Hat on. Psyker and Grey already mentioned stuff in my stead, but I'm feeling better so I'll take it over from here.

-Plops the GM hat on-

@Nidhogg: Alright, I understand that this is a work in progress, however, but I feel there's some things that'll need changing. The Dragon's Breath, you're going to have to explain thoroughly, and I feel like that'll have to be a true form Noble Phantasm. Even then, I feel like I might have to remove it, so don't get your hopes up.

Storm of Ragnarok, that would also be a True Form Noble Phantasm no questions asked as a destroyer dragon. While I do admit this does seem unfair, Nidhogg is a powerful figure and is a legendary dragon; he also has his other Noble Phantasm to work with outside of his true form.

@Roland: Personally, this is one of my favorites. Just give a rank to Durandel and his horse. Oh, and just add a little more detail to what his horse can do, and he'll be fine.

@Claire "Kurei" Sugiyama-Winslow: For the most part, besides looking really revealing, she's alright. Remove the Wu Shu stuff, it's unnecessary on her if she's stealthy and a ranged fighter, and elaborate more upon her background. I hate to say this... but her background is just bland, while her Personality is lively; it doesn't mix well as a master.

@William Marks: Alright. I'm just going to say that you change the ability section completely for him, for we will be having none of that for Masters in this RP. I'm not doing this to be rude, Lionheart, I truly, truly am not. The guy is good, everything is fine except for his abilities. But I will not let a Master run amok with abilities like those in this RP, and I just want to make that clear by ending any arguments now. Rework his abilities.

@Charlotte Fairglaive : Remove Absolute Authority. If it seems like it could be breaking the rules, then it probably is… Yeah… Take it out. You can replace it with something else, fine, but not something of that magnitude.

@Rosaline Fairglaive : Change the Mystic Eyes thing to Clairvoyance or Foresight, because, correct me if I am wrong, that is not how Mystic Eyes are meant to work. Also, remove “There is another level of this power that allows her to pull what she sees into being, like a pillar, bus or train. However this drains her AND her siblings mana considerably, leaving not only her but also Charlotte open for a good while. “ part… because Masters shouldn’t have access to something like this, and I’m not sure what the first half is talking about.

For the most part, I made up my mind on these things. Also, I’ve noticed that most backgrounds haven’t been fleshed out and I would appreciate if they were… it would really add to the characters.

Questions, appeals, or anything of the like, shoot them my way.

-GM Hat Off-
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Added 'em ranks, hope things are better with the horse now, since, well, while researching, no one really went into detail about it, so I was kinda confused. :P Also, if anyone's feeling lazy to make a Master, you can use or ask me to control the Master I made in the other page, since Jelly and I will be Master and Servant now. If no one'd like to, then she's just gonna go crawl into a corner. u_u
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@Hebigami, Nidhogg is available and I'm still gonna male a CS for Fenrir if you don't care for Nidhogg. As for contril of the master, I would prefer if you controlled her, but if you don't want to, I wouldn't be troubled to control her.
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@Hebigami, Nidhogg is available and I'm still gonna male a CS for Fenrir if you don't care for Nidhogg. As for contril of the master, I would prefer if you controlled her, but if you don't want to, I wouldn't be troubled to control her.
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Raijinslayer said
@Hebigami, Nidhogg is available and I'm still gonna male a CS for Fenrir if you don't care for Nidhogg. As for contril of the master, I would prefer if you controlled her, but if you don't want to, I wouldn't be troubled to control her.


Sure, I don't mind. You can add her name in your sheet. I'll control her. :P
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Much better.
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Removed the last part of it, how is that?
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Have a Caster!

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Hebigami Shiho said
Sure, I don't mind. You can add her name in your sheet. I'll control her. :P


I feel that your Master character wouldn't intentionally summon a Servant like Nidhogg, so I'm thinking we have her trying to summon the Eagle with a piece of Yggdrasil that survived Ragnorok. However, it was a root, not a branch, so it summons Nidhogg instead.
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