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This is a somewhat Japanese superhero inspired RP which I'm still fleshing out. It's basically a bunch of teenagers from the same school transforming at night to fight crime while in the day, they try to figure out each other's identities.

During the day, the characters might interact with each other in Hongo academy, named after the founder of the school, Takeshi Hongo. Hongo academy is fairly normal bar the fact that pretty much every masked teenage superhero attends the school.

The current villain ideas I have currently (which you'll unmask later) are a demon lord, a crazy scientist with an army of mutant cyborgs, aliens and things from other dimensions, the leaders of which might be attending the school (maybe). The opposition against the antagonistic forces are mainly separate from each other and include the angels, other demons, anyone who might oppose a crazy scientist guy, people who give other people powers and are from different dimensions and so on. You can integrate a personal vendetta against one of the antagonistic forces if you want. If you're still confused, think of the Power Rangers, Kamen Riders or Magical girls. I might consider allowing Lycans but they are unlikely to go well with what I've planned.

Also might be closing soon.

Character sheet:
Appearance: (text or picture)
Name: (first, last)
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Hero Appearance: (text or picture)
Hero name:
Powers:
Transforming item: (Just write at will if it’s at will but otherwise write down anything they need to transform)
History: (their early life, significant events, include how they got their powers or their hero form)
Other: (anything else I should note. May include split personalities which came in a bundle package with the transformation or basically anything of significance.)

You can also have demon transformations or beast-like transformations but keep in mind that intelligence is necessary and being a berserk monster is kind of a bad idea. That said, if it's something like you have to fight for control, it'll probably be accepted.
I haven't completely figured out the story yet but it looks something like this:

Recently in some city (someone help me with that too please), strange things have begun to occur. Strange phenomena at night, missing people, rumours about monsters, etc. Unbeknownst to most people, there are many things are moving in the background. For example, the Demons are stirring, the Aliens have begun their campaign against earth, a brilliant scientist has gone missing leaving behind scrambled words of human and mechanical experimentation, conquerors from other worlds have begun their incursion. And spoilers: They're working together (but you don't know that). The main protagonists of this story are a group of teenagers attending some school (seriously, pls halp with the names) who have their own share of secrets. Namely, they fight crime while hide their identity. If you didn't miss the hint, that's you.
What I term 'transformation' is fairly liberal, the criteria being it hides your identity. That said, I want a human level of intelligence kind of, but if you're not sure just post the sheet and I'll tell you if you need to fix anything.

Also, I need help with a few things. The name of the city and the school (both in Japan) if anyone has suggestions. Also, if the character you think of has a personal vendetta against anything not contained in the story, I can do it anyway. That said, I need some ideas about the kind of enemies you can fight as well.
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I like all of this apart from the "edit everyone's posts together" and "no posting heroes" parts. It makes the action extremely non-interactive, as none of the players are working together, or have any idea what the other heroes are even doing, even if it's the sort of thing that they'd actually be able to see going on. On top of that, it's not a very good way to mask who's who: it becomes a case of 'mask the writing style'.

And no-one having any idea what any other character can do sounds like a grand way to have too much overlap and/or no idea of what the overall group is turning out like.

If it's your first time GMing, requiring a mass-editing session and having everyone wait on PM's they can't see or know about is going to make things much, much harder.
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Well, I kind of figured it'd be like this:

Usually, I'll have some bad guys show up or something. I'll ask in the OOC who's down to fight them. Then I'll collect their responses to put together. After that, I'll have to go one by one and give the players involved what I've got so far and they can give me their responses. I'll use the character names so that while they remain unknown, they'll still be collaborating with each other. I'll do that for everyone involved and then post it. I also said 'smooth it out' but I'm not planning to interfere with their parts at all, it's to blend the parts together.

If this is confusing, look at it this way: There is Player A, B and C.
So it'd be like
Stuff happens, Player A, B and C respond
I put the responses together, write more stuff happening. Send it to Players A, B and C. A, B and C respond.
Repeat
Finish, polish and post

On any night without anything special happening, I'll get the players to tell me what they'll do at that time. I'll also do that for all characters not involved if there is a situation that doesn't involve everyone.

Like that, it'll probably end up being really tedious but I did it that way so that everyone will technically have full interaction, but no one knows who's who. At least, I think it'll work. If not then I may just abandon the anonymity part of it altogether.
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I meant that characters can't co-ordinate a response, because that requires OOC communication between the two players--which isn't possible if the players are totally unaware of whose character is whose. And, as you've said, this would be a very, very tedious process.

Easier to work it as the characters not knowing but the players knowing.
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True, but the reason I did it this way was because it would be more interesting if the players actually try to figure out who's who instead of already knowing. Problem is, it does leave something to be desired with communication, as you mentioned.

Well, one reason I thought this would work is because it would give a 'realistic response' because the players truly don't know who is who and would then give a better suited reaction. In theory, at least. And it's not as if the player's will be totally unaware of each other's identities. The point of hiding them is so that the players put in effort trying to find out the secretes for themselves. That way, it would add another element to this RP and makes it more interesting.
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It also massively increases the effort required to GM, makes the actions stilted, and obscures a lot of the information that characters would be able to build conclusions out of (because there's not going to be a full description in the thing), whilst leaving us with only the meta-gamey "Well, these people aren't fighting" and "I recognise the writing style" bits.

And welding together people's posts is either going to be clunky stitching or intrusive rewriting, which I can't really get behind. I write my posts as I want them to appear, after all.
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While the premise sounds interesting, I have to agree with Raineh. It seems rather complex and would severely cut down on character interaction. You may be better off pushing players to write out the characters realising who/what their classmates are on their own, or with some prompting. If you really want to keep up the mystery element, you could make it so the players have to puzzle out who any NPC/villain characters are.

That said, if you manage to come to a happy middle-ground with this idea, I may be interested. I have been looking for a superhero RP.
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yeah, I went to sleep and thought about this and I kind of realised I should probably not do it like that. -.- It'll be a lot easier.

I'll edit the first post accordingly.
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LET'S DO THIS. At least if I can figure something out. ^^;
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I'm definitely on board with a Japan-inspired superhero* RP, then!

*Any in particular?
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Sounds fun. I'm definitely in if I can work out a character.
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Um, interested!
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I think i would like to voice some interest in this as well.
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Hold up, let me fix this slightly
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Alright, fixed it slightly. Also added stuff I need help with.
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I might have some interest in this one. I shall commence lurking.
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I did my character sheet if anyone needs a point of reference. Keep in mind that I'm still being fairly liberal on the whole powers thing.
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Signing up.
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Guess ill post one too. Hope its ok!

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Accepted. Sounds pretty good. He sounds like the kind of guy to have a seat of authority in the school somewhere.
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