Look I'm sorry, it's a bit hard... I'm trying my best, I'm just not to good at things with constant revisions. I host wanted it to be so you could see it. And I'm just doing my best to use the Canon and that is an official rout. The problem is that the Digimon main three Digimon are hybrid, this variable. I can do revisions... I can take out the things... I can do something. For now I'm just using the cannon sources, which is what I thought would be best... Please can you help me figure this out? Just wait until we get into Ic... Please I'm sure these are the Digimon I want if you give me a bit of time. I'm sorry I'm just one of those mile a minute kinda guys when it comes to story... But I suppose you want the start to be more like the original than anything else.

@Tob: Then honestly dude, you shouldn't have given that as a reason. Regarding him chronically reposting the sheets, you actually didn't warn him about that. Like I said, not gonna lie, I'm still wary of anyone whose first sheet is a self-insert. I do worry at some point V-mon will go off on his tamer or digimon and he'll take it as a personal insult despite the character ostensibly no longer being himself, and I'll have to choose between pulling punches in an out-of-character manner or risk being yelled at. But I genuinely do feel that, in this case, the response was a bit disproportionate. How often do I honestly and seriously disagree with you, especially over something like this?

@Xander: Look man, at least in future cases, you can just edit the original sheet post and then just post with 'I updated the sheet'. That's all you need to do. Regarding Attribute, I'd suggest putting down for the line whatever Gankoomon has. At the same time, though, I also probably would suggest going elsewhere for a digimon rp, if only because I'm not sure you'd be redeemable in the GM's eyes. Don't take it too personally, though. Sometimes things just don't work out no matter how hard all parties try.

Frack it for conveniences sake I'm putting it on my new personal sheets page. I'll put a link into my Signutire ^-^

Okay, I'll ask one thing first- what's with the constant changing of the other Digimon you're using? First you're saying Gazimon, then you're going with the Meramon group. then randomly Lobomon and co. It's just a bit boggling.
I understand a bit of indecisiveness- I have trouble picking a good Champion for Ryudamon because Ginryumon's not my fave to go to Alphamon persay.
But on similar lines- there are a lot, and I mean a LOT, of possibilities. Surely you can find a way to link the Digimon you want to use. Just look at the ones I used. They make sense, but neither Black War Greymon nor Gaiomon technically Digivolve into Alphamon, but coming from Ryudamon, who's similar to Dorumon, it makes sense. See where I'm coming from? I'm not against helping a player out, but it's not really like it's got a system involved, because I have run RP's with systems, i.e. the tabletop section. It's just getting to the point of being a bit too hand-holdy, and I don't want one player to detract from attention to all the other players.

I might as well straight up say it- when I look at CS's, I look for ideas- ways things can play out, interesting little quirks... and, I dunno, I guess I'm not seeing the pan-out?
Comes down to the personality section of the Digimon too. Beyond all the structural, admittedly nit-picky parts about the CS, about half the forms don't have personalities, and the ones that do, well... okay, nothing wrong with playing a Digimon straight out of the box, like the way they'd be expected. I do it sometimes, but I can't think of the instances- actually, I did so with Craniamon in a Digimon RP a while ago, or would have done so, but that was because I thought having a perfectionist who cherishes his "mission complete ratio" would be fun to play in a ruined Digital World where the premise was the Knights had just been mangled, and I also had him not care for his partner completely in a setting where his use of power would put the human at risk. I also had the human character be a younger child who is inexperienced and living in the shadow of his father, and rightly so at his young age, but he had other features beyond just that.
See what I mean? I sorta don't see the depth. I know I didn't do the best job of giving depth to my own Digimon, but I have a specific plan for her where the character development would apply, hence the constant reference to Ryudamon's personality in the later stages, and I have a little unique thing for each stage.
Also, not sure how serious this is, but I don't think you've ever put a control method in. I feel like it's important, but it might be a nit-pick. And I know this is a nit pick, but leaving the direction sections in a CS when you're done with it, and not following all the directions that were there, especially when they're related to removing the parenthesed section, well, it's a bit of a pet-peeve of mine. Minor, not major.

EDIT: I'm just looking for a little progress towards something that's not expected as far as character behavior goes. If some reason to explain something can be made, I'd be glad to hear it and, if necessary, let it be used.

I'm sorry but I cant understand how to create a control point when a barely know the Digimon I'm using. I've been a bit indecisive, which is why I am trying to nail down this one. I am fairly particular about trying to do things correctly, and I feel I have gotta stick to the cannon at least partially. I could write up whole new digimon if I wanted to but I cant draw it and I realy would like to stick to the cannon. I... I'm doing my best. I'm curantly working on the sheet.

I'm sorry but I cant understand how to create a control point when a barely know the Digimon I'm using. I've been a bit indecisive, which is why I am trying to nail down this one. I am fairly particular about trying to do things correctly, and I feel I have gotta stick to the cannon at least partially. I could write up whole new digimon if I wanted to but I cant draw it and I realy would like to stick to the cannon. I... I'm doing my best. I'm curantly working on the sheet.

Edit: Double post

Look I just had an idea, to make this easyer do you mind if I create a single new digimon. Something in between Strabimon and Wolfmon... Then I can stop useing The Garurumon. If I go that direction I might be able to make a new in-training digimon or mabey...

22xander said
I'm sorry but I cant understand how to create a control point when a barely know the Digimon I'm using. I've been a bit indecisive, which is why I am trying to nail down this one. I am fairly particular about trying to do things correctly, and I feel I have gotta stick to the cannon at least partially. I could write up whole new digimon if I wanted to but I cant draw it and I realy would like to stick to the cannon. I... I'm doing my best. I'm curantly working on the sheet.

Okay, then would you perhaps like to choose one with which you're more familiar? You don't very much have to, no. As long as you can give me your logic behind it or I can see it.

22xander said
Edit: Double postLook I just had an idea, to make this easyer do you mind if I create a single new digimon. Something in between Strabimon and Wolfmon... Then I can stop useing The Garurumon. If I go that direction I might be able to make a new in-training digimon or mabey...

The first post says you can use custom Digimon, as long as they're not crazy OP or anything, like I have to OK them, but that shouldn't be hard. What do you mean about using "The Garurumon"? And what exactly do you mean "in between Strabimon and Lobomon"?

I am going to simply change the line, to make it make more since.

Okay, so just about finished my digimon. But I'm a bit confused on what you meant on the name overarching and the control method?

22xander said
I am going to simply change the line, to make it make more since.

Okay. Just tell me when you do.

Silver Fox said
Okay, so just about finished my digimon. But I'm a bit confused on what you meant on the name overarching and the control method?

By overarching, I mean like... in the manga V-Tamer, the Veedramon is named Zero. Every time he Digivolves, Taichi still calls him Zero. Like that. Basically, what's the limitation of Leopardmon? Granted, they're not very powerful attacks by them selves, so the tactical use is probably the redeeming factor, rather than something that needs to be nerfed. I do have a few concerns/suggestions. 1- did you ask the artist to use those designs? I just think that's proper to do. Also, Leopardmon Leopard Mode is a bit redundant. Maybe call it like... Beast Mode, or Panthra Mode (like the Genus) or something? I mean, call it what you want, but that's just my suggestion for non-awkward narrative.

tobiax said
Okay. Just tell me when you do.By overarching, I mean like... in the manga V-Tamer, the Veedramon is named Zero. Every time he Digivolves, Taichi still calls him Zero. Like that. Basically, what's the limitation of Leopardmon? Granted, they're not very powerful attacks by them selves, so the tactical use is probably the redeeming factor, rather than something that needs to be nerfed. I do have a few concerns/suggestions. 1- did you ask the artist to use those designs? I just think that's proper to do. Also, Leopardmon Leopard Mode is a bit redundant. Maybe call it like... Beast Mode, or Panthra Mode (like the Genus) or something? I mean, call it what you want, but that's just my suggestion for non-awkward narrative.

Awe alright.

No, but I still gave where credit is due. It's not like anyone will ask the Digimon creators for permission of their designs either. As long I don't start claiming, "these are my designs! I made these attacks! I'm a badass OC Character RAWR RAWR RAWR)

And I don't really know who made them or not sadly nor have any way in contacting them.

But... duftmon leopard mode is the technical term for that mode :T

Alright, I made the changes. I made it on my sheet in my sheets, its the first one so just click it in my signiture.

Mhm.

Ah, I see.
Well, Mystery Solved.
Perhaps reword your Techniques from the card-description habit of making them uber-lethal? Like, more along the lines of what they look like or how the Digimon tries to do it rather than the lethal end result?
That being said, it's not bad, mainly Fang of the Beast Queen, and Blockade, and maybe a re-wording of the "critical" related ones in general. Also, feel free to fill out your Knight's arsenal with extra Techniques, sorta like I did with Alphamon.
Also, Kudos on the defensive techniques. I'd have said to drop one each for Champion and Ultimate, but Death Hold is more behavioral and the Ultimate has a shield.
EDIT: Feels like LightLeormon and Co have the potential to be sorta tsundere, which I wouldn't mind.

22xander said Alright, I made the changes. I made it on my sheet in my sheets, its the first one so just click it in my signiture.

Saw it. Lycamon's good, but Lobomon's still a Champion though. You can change the Attribute throughout the line, because the light based blue color seems off for a Virus variant of Lobomon and co. Works for Lycamon though.
Anyway, still waiting for personality, which is the main thing I'm looking for to be honest.

tobiax said
Mhm.Ah, I see.Well, .Perhaps reword your Techniques from the card-description habit of making them uber-lethal? Like, more along the lines of what they look like or how the Digimon tries to do it rather than the lethal end result?That being said, it's not bad, mainly Fang of the Beast Queen, and Blockade, and maybe a re-wording of the "critical" related ones in general. Also, feel free to fill out your Knight's arsenal with extra Techniques, sorta like I did with Alphamon.Also, Kudos on the defensive techniques. I'd have said to drop one each for Champion and Ultimate, but Death Hold is more behavioral and the Ultimate has a shield.

The critical attacks are basically based off Critical Bite which is Leormon's best move (with of course like... 2% chance to actually land a blow. So not the ideal attack unless desperate) but I guess I can try to reword it.

I don't really have any ideas for attacks honestly. Especially one who isn't a fighter and more or less stands in the back and makes plans and calculations.

Silver Fox said
The critical attacks are basically based off Critical Bite which is Leormon's best move (with of course like... 2% chance to actually land a blow. So not the ideal attack unless desperate) but I guess I can try to reword it.I don't really have any ideas for attacks honestly. Especially one who isn't a fighter and more or less stands in the back and makes plans and calculations.

I see. I had/have a character with a Leormon. He won't be joining this I think, although characters connected to him are. He's Shuichi.
Anyway, okay, thanks.

Okay, that's fine. Barrier makers, analyzers, and ways of forcing opponents into certain situations would help.
See edit of above post.

Lobomon? I looked and I can't find a lobomon...

Edit: all right, it's wolfmon. I didn't know that, anyway yeah all right. As for personality, give me a bit and I'll figure out how to put it.

Are you being genuine or is that sass?
http://digimon.wikia.com/wiki/Lobomon

No I got all the data from wikimon.com, they call him Wolfmon

And as for his level, is thair any way we can let that pass. Technically he is a hybrid Digimon, a level all we that's supposed to be equal to adult yes... I have to say that sence he only appears in one season in the anime, one game 9 cards and a virtual pet can't we tweak that along with everything else?

I also have to figure out the knight's techniques, doesn't have a description anywhere and all I got is a bad translation of their names.

(Hello, guys. I am interested in your roleplay....if this is a roleplay. I looked at the front page and there is nothing, but Out of Character conversation going on. The same goes for this last page too. I tried clicking on the OOC hyperlink, but it just sent me to a 404 error. )