Ha, I only see seven, checkmate.

can anyone look at Jennifer(my character sheet) to see if there needs any fixing? Besides the sort biography?

Jennifer - WIP - Done in a quickie O^O [+]

Username: Pie Flavor | Character Name: Jennifer(Jenni) | Character Age: 16 | Character Gender: Female

Appearance [+]

Fourth Dimensional Power [+]

Sound: Jennifer was born blind in this world unfortunately however due to her flaws, her remaining senses have instead been finely tuned so she isn't hindered as much. However unlike the normal, only Jennifer's hearing has been enhanced, but it extends out of the range of what even a blind person be capable of as she has never needed a walking stick ever in her life, all she has needed was to be mindful of her surrounding and listen. It is simply nature's way of saying sorry for those who are unfortunately tasked to receive such gifts, and it sometimes compensates for a world lost to those who have to bear such gifts by making another for them to experience. However with the advance of technology, this ability to hear has further been expanded to the point of where she is sensitive to sound at random moments and requires the overall volume to be lower so it doesn't hurt her ears. Unlike other people who have this ability, her own prowess with this power extends what people can normally achieve as she has been listening her whole life. Energy: (LOCKED) Technology is a blessing in these days, which defies the will of nature as allows ways for people to overcome their flaws that have been etched onto by nature. However complete compensation for a lost sense is possible with today's advancing technology, Jennifer prefers to keep to herself in the world that only she knows and had strangely gotten another Fourth Dimension power known as Energy. It had allowed her to sense the emotions of people around her and effectively allowed her to 'see' another world that was separate from the one that she could hear. Now she is able to see the blobs of colors that walked among the streets that showed what other people were feeling and what they were thinking of doing for the day. Jennifer herself has helped a person however only once stopped themselves from killing themselves, with the use of her other dimensional power to read their mind and her new one to read their emotions. She did feel great about helping them but was doubting that hearing and seeing the emotions as well as thoughts of others was as good as she thought it would be.

Bio [+]

Born from birth blind of a disease that she rather not mention, Jennifer has always been short and blind since she was born. Always being smaller than the regular student even the girls were taller than her sometimes, only falling short by several inches but she has always been self conscious when people says that she looks so cute at her height.

Jennifer - WIP - Done in a quickie O^O [+]

Username: Pie Flavor | Character Name: Jennifer(Jenni) | Character Age: 16 | Character Gender: Female

Appearance [+]

Fourth Dimensional Power [+]

Sound: Jennifer was born blind in this world unfortunately however due to her flaws, her remaining senses have instead been finely tuned so she isn't hindered as much. However unlike the normal, only Jennifer's hearing has been enhanced, but it extends out of the range of what even a blind person be capable of as she has never needed a walking stick ever in her life, all she has needed was to be mindful of her surrounding and listen. It is simply nature's way of saying sorry for those who are unfortunately tasked to receive such gifts, and it sometimes compensates for a world lost to those who have to bear such gifts by making another for them to experience. However with the advance of technology, this ability to hear has further been expanded to the point of where she is sensitive to sound at random moments and requires the overall volume to be lower so it doesn't hurt her ears. Unlike other people who have this ability, her own prowess with this power extends what people can normally achieve as she has been listening her whole life. Energy: (LOCKED) Technology is a blessing in these days, which defies the will of nature as allows ways for people to overcome their flaws that have been etched onto by nature. However complete compensation for a lost sense is possible with today's advancing technology, Jennifer prefers to keep to herself in the world that only she knows and had strangely gotten another Fourth Dimension power known as Energy. It had allowed her to sense the emotions of people around her and effectively allowed her to 'see' another world that was separate from the one that she could hear. Now she is able to see the blobs of colors that walked among the streets that showed what other people were feeling and what they were thinking of doing for the day. Jennifer herself has helped a person however only once stopped themselves from killing themselves, with the use of her other dimensional power to read their mind and her new one to read their emotions. She did feel great about helping them but was doubting that hearing and seeing the emotions as well as thoughts of others was as good as she thought it would be.

Bio [+]

Born from birth blind of a disease that she rather not mention, Jennifer has always been short and blind since she was born. Always being smaller than the regular student even the girls were taller than her sometimes, only falling short by several inches but she has always been self conscious when people says that she looks so cute at her height.

I do like that you have taken the time to explain her fourth dimensional powers, and there is quite a bit of exposition that gives us an insight on your character. One thing sticks out, the fourth dimensional powers, I believe, are most often acquired through a procedure that has a random outcome. Or a child can inherit on from a parent. If you could add that in and extend the biography I would say, perfect. Unfortunately I am not the GM.

Jennifer - WIP - Done in a quickie O^O [+]

Username: Pie Flavor | Character Name: Jennifer(Jenni) | Character Age: 16 | Character Gender: Female

Appearance [+]

Fourth Dimensional Power [+]

Sound: Jennifer was born blind in this world unfortunately however due to her flaws, her remaining senses have instead been finely tuned so she isn't hindered as much. However unlike the normal, only Jennifer's hearing has been enhanced, but it extends out of the range of what even a blind person be capable of as she has never needed a walking stick ever in her life, all she has needed was to be mindful of her surrounding and listen. It is simply nature's way of saying sorry for those who are unfortunately tasked to receive such gifts, and it sometimes compensates for a world lost to those who have to bear such gifts by making another for them to experience. However with the advance of technology, this ability to hear has further been expanded to the point of where she is sensitive to sound at random moments and requires the overall volume to be lower so it doesn't hurt her ears. Unlike other people who have this ability, her own prowess with this power extends what people can normally achieve as she has been listening her whole life. Energy: (LOCKED) Technology is a blessing in these days, which defies the will of nature as allows ways for people to overcome their flaws that have been etched onto by nature. However complete compensation for a lost sense is possible with today's advancing technology, Jennifer prefers to keep to herself in the world that only she knows and had strangely gotten another Fourth Dimension power known as Energy. It had allowed her to sense the emotions of people around her and effectively allowed her to 'see' another world that was separate from the one that she could hear. Now she is able to see the blobs of colors that walked among the streets that showed what other people were feeling and what they were thinking of doing for the day. Jennifer herself has helped a person however only once stopped themselves from killing themselves, with the use of her other dimensional power to read their mind and her new one to read their emotions. She did feel great about helping them but was doubting that hearing and seeing the emotions as well as thoughts of others was as good as she thought it would be.

Bio [+]

Born from birth blind of a disease that she rather not mention, Jennifer has always been short and blind since she was born. Always being smaller than the regular student even the girls were taller than her sometimes, only falling short by several inches but she has always been self conscious when people says that she looks so cute at her height.

I do like that you have taken the time to explain her fourth dimensional powers, and there is quite a bit of exposition that gives us an insight on your character. One thing sticks out, the fourth dimensional powers, I believe, are most often acquired through a procedure that has a random outcome. Or a child can inherit on from a parent. If you could add that in and extend the biography I would say, perfect. Unfortunately I am not the GM.

I just remembered that you're completely new to forum based RPs, and yet me being a 4 year veteran cannot come close to doing what you do. Teach me Based Unraveller.

My standards are dirt low. Why else would I accidentally accept those earlier apps?

My standards are dirt low. Why else would I accidentally accept those earlier apps?

Just as I had thought.

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