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I change my mind. The realm thing will only be mentioned in his history. :P I'm to lazy to due what I was just thinking.
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>:) Ohhhh Rin could the character I make be a demon ancestor of your character.
Eh, I'd rather you didn't. For one thing any demonic blood would've been from a very long time ago seeing how the Masalans have split off into their own seperate species rather than just being "half-demon" or whatever, so your character would have to be a ridiculous age. For another thing, Jolokia's a character I've had for a while and like inserting into stuff because she's fun, and I like to keep her kind of silly. So unless your demon character is basically Asmodai from Buddyfight or something it might be a little jarring to me, eheh. ^^; Sorry about that.
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^-^ I understand. Welp looks like hell will soon be upon you all.
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Lol, if you have any more questions, feel free to ask.
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yes, is that a problem, may I not be allowed to speak the language of my native tongue?
I believe Water Akira put it aptly: it was only a question. I am sorry if it offended you.
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Name: Larz Theme Song: (Optional) Gender: Male Age: 150+ Appearance: Personality: Sadistic , Crazy , loves to here a joke once in awhile , a little cheery for a demon , enthusiastic and sometimes a total ass to people when he's angered. Favourite Colour(s): (Optional) "Oddly my favorite color is Orange." Favourite Food(s): (Optional) "Souls of course and maybe a sheep now and then." Hobbies: killing cattle , causing minor natural disasters and once in awhile killing someone for there soul. Weapons: Doesn't use weapons Powers/Abilities: Gift of the Demon- is a ability that probably every full blood basic demon has. The ability to fly, move at incredible speeds, lift beyond the weight of an elephant and drain the life out mortal creatures. The bad thing about this is that any item blessed by a priest or titled holy can easily make him powerless. Biography: larz is probably on of the oldest living things to be recorded in history. He was titled as a myth since no one has actually lived long enough to give a full description of Larz. The Myth states that there were once kingdoms in hell and verious powerful rulers. Larz was one of them and ruled over the void a small dark dot that was basically corrupted and swallowed up by evil. Years later Lucifer defeats the kingdoms and rebuilds hell from the ground up. Lucky Larz build a barrier to separate hell and the void. The myth continues on by saying Larz finally lost all he had when Lucifer confronts him and rips the void to shreds. In his final moments he consumed the rest of the void and removed his body from the realm of hell. The Myth ends with Larz dying in the earthly realm while he actually went into hiding.
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Slendy cool character! You're approved. Feel free to put your character in the Character tab anytime, as well as post in the RP.
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Um... I actually see a few problems with Larz but I need to go out soon so I'll have to elaborate on them later I guess. ^^;
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Void Magic- Similar to mind control. It mainly brings out the evil in the most purest of people.
Okay, um, I know I'm just a player but I have to protest this. The unrestricted ability to force other characters to be evil is kind of not okay. ... Also I'm not sure how someone around 150 years old is one of the oldest people in a non-low Fantasy setting. ^^; But, um, on another note, posted for Amythest.
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^-^ I can remove the mind control thing and 150+ means he's at least 150 or older and I'm shooting for older. Just point out any more things and I'll see what I can do.
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Vitavita, I love your character. It shall be lots of fun to mess with The Lord of darkness.
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My character is 100 years old so age should not be a problem. and I was not really offended just mostly confused by the question since there are so many others you could ask the same said question
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Great post VitaVitaAR XD
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My character is 100 years old so age should not be a problem. and I was not really offended just mostly confused by the question since there are so many others you could ask the same said question
It's just I've role-played with lots of people who have English as a second or even third language, and they had writing styles similar to yours.
Hobbies: killing cattle , causing minor natural disasters and once in awhile killing someone for there soul.
I'm pretty sure this conflicts with the second rule: "Do not be Overpowered, unfair or invincible with your character."
Gift of the Demon- is a ability that probably every full blood basic demon has. The ability to fly, move at incredible speeds, lift beyond the weight of an elephant and drain the life out mortal creatures.
As does this
The bad thing about this is that any item blessed by a priest or titled holy can easily make him powerless.
What? Does a blessed item only have to exist for him to be powerless? Does it have to touch him? Do the effects last as long as it is touching, or do they remain afterwards for a set time? Is it perhaps proportional to the power and/or the length of time said item was touching?
Biography: larz is probably on of the oldest living things to be recorded in history.
Second rule again.
He was titled as a myth since no one has actually lived long enough to give a full description of Larz. The Myth states that there were once kingdoms in hell and verious powerful rulers. Larz was one of them and ruled over the void a small dark dot that was basically corrupted and swallowed up by evil. Years later Lucifer defeats the kingdoms and rebuilds hell from the ground up. Lucky Larz build a barrier to separate hell and the void. The myth continues on by saying Larz finally lost all he had when Lucifer confronts him and rips the void to shreds. In his final moments he consumed the rest of the void and removed his body from the realm of hell. The Myth ends with Larz dying in the earthly realm while he actually went into hiding.
In fact, pretty much all of his bio seems in conflict with the second rule. Powerful demon ruler? It took the omnipotent embodiment of evil to defeat him? Consumption of the entire realm he ruled over? Definitely conflict here. Edit: On another note, I am currently working on a reply to your post MonkeyBusiness, sorry for the wait.
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... Yeah that sums up my issues with the bio well. ^^;
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Thank you, jdh97, I was still having trouble figuring out how to say it. ^^; Anyways, hopefully new post soon-ish maybe. We'll see.
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VitaVitaAR, I just read your post, and I must say that I was pleasantly surprised. Initially I was sceptical from the CS, but you seem to have pulled it of, and your character is really rather endearing.
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Thanks. ^^; I thought the idea seemed really fun. Though Rin suggested the concept so I have her to thank for the whole idea. Before I wasn't quite sure what to do. ^^;
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I could swear I've played with Rin before, on the old guild, but I can't quite place what RP.
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Hey everyone! First I want to thank you all for your help. It's my main goal to make sure this RP is fun and enjoyable for everyone, and that includes making sure that all of the characters are reasonable and fair. Here are the reasons why I approved the character. Larz does have powerful abilities or powers, that can potentially be way too strong. However, because of the rules, these abilities will only be able to be used in a certain way. None of our characters have unrestricted powers. The restrictions are seen in the guidelines/rules themselves. So yes, I have approved his powers and abilities. And as long as he uses them within the general rules, they are fine. Once the action and fighting begins in the story, if anyone feels that a character is too strong, please feel free to let me know. And of course I will be making sure that everything is fair myself. Slendy, all of your powers and abilities that were there when I approved your character are fine. Everyone, be sure to be fair and reasonable with your character's abilities and powers.
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