Well wish my character Alphonse for a good review, I hope he doesn't get sniped down by you people... ^,^ But if you want you guy could give me a power rating to go along with my character, because im bad at judging them xD (hopefully it's over 9000)

The basic idea is fine, but the powers, well, choose teleportation or portals, not both.

Just asking, what exactly is Aperture?

Just asking, what exactly is Aperture?

Judging by a quick skim of the previous thread, some sort of tech company or government lab that was doing nasty shit to supers on the side.

Just asking, what exactly is Aperture?

The Aperture Disaster was when a large corporation called Aperture which basically was the government's go-to contractor for Meta-problems, began trying to make a biological super-weapon called Gia. Gia was infused with the DNA of nearly every Meta and she could call upon their powers at will. She also had advanced healing. Her own brother, Doctor David Taylor was the one who did all that to her. He was an extremely powerful Meta who could steal powers with blood-samples. Essentially, he wanted to create a Meta-only society by inciting a civil war and then forcing any remaining humans to adapt powers or die. He will be killed at the end of Arc 2.

The basic idea is fine, but the powers, well, choose teleportation or portals, not both.

Huh, my character specializes in Spatial Manipulation(to a basic degree) so that isn't it plausable for me to have both? Either power aren't really devastating in my opinion.

<Snipped quote by Letter Bee> Huh, my character specializes in Spatial Manipulation(to a basic degree) so that isn't it plausable for me to have both? Either power aren't really devastating in my opinion.

Actually if used right, it can be one of the most broken powers out there, on par with time manipulation or worse. Though I wont explain how.

Agreed.

<Snipped quote by Pie Flavor> Actually if used right, it can be one of the most broken powers out there, on par with time manipulation or worse. Though I wont explain how.

I honestly don't see how teleportation or the creation of portals would be on par to time manipulation but if its two against one I'll change my character. With one power he be on C-ranked... Right? If I chose teleportation to be the single ability.

Thank you, and sorry for the annoyance/inconvenience.

<Snipped quote by Archmage MC> I honestly don't see how teleportation or the creation of portals would be on par to time manipulation but if its two against one I'll change my character. With one power he be on C-ranked... Right? If I chose teleportation to be the single ability.

I'll give you two examples, one for each. For portals... Form a portal on top of someone or in front of someone in motion. Make said portal smaller than said person. Congrats, you now have something that can cut through anything as the bits of the person that don't go through the portal are now separated from the parts of the person that did go through the portal. Basically instant death as soon as they touch any of your portals. You can also just conjure a portal inside someone and kill them that way as they die from blood loss or internal organs falling out of the other portal. Teleportation isn't AS strong, but nothings stopping you from teleporting inside a person and causing them to rupture due to the presence of another equally sized being suddenly being inside them. Sure your character might be injured a little bit, but the other person will be much worse off, IE exploded. And if you can teleport other objects, whats stopping ya from teleporting a rock into their brain? Do note that Portals, not necessarily teleportation, would work perfectly fine on gods. Gods that might very well be immune to time manipulation. Plus by quantom theory, space-time are linked, so with enough thought you could manipulate one with the other. Yeah, I'm banned from using either of those things in DnD for obvious reasons.

If you really wanna stick to the spatial manipulation thing, you could just say it only affects you and everyone else just goes through it as if there isn't anything there

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We already have two technopaths, sadly.

I guess we can have another but she'll never be as powerful as Ruby because Ruby was completely altered and isn't as combat-focused. I guess she could be on-par with Alto because he is more combat-focused. I don't mind really, it's your choice Revan.

Hey, you guys know I'm not technically a technopath right? It's just I can hack as fast as I can think, and I can hack anything I touch

Oh, right.

@Archmage MC For the portal thing, yeah I understood that part which I limited to not being able to cut flesh, I believe. As for teleportation well, nice one as that is creative right there >.> But besides that I haven't got anything else to say, so off to editing!

Hey guys, I'm kind of toying with the idea of making a self-replicator character and was thinking about making him like a small private army or security force (with limits) for one of the corporations but I'm not sure if there are any existing corporations in this story I could ally him with. Anyone want to help me out?

To what degree can they replicate themselves? If you can make a huge number of copies, then it actually limits your choices more in a way than if you could only do up to 3 or 4 or something like that.