WOO! More girls for CHarlotte to secretly oogle at! :D
I mean.. uhhhh.... WHAT'S THAT OVER THERE!? A DUCK!?
*sneaks away* >.>;;
I mean.. uhhhh.... WHAT'S THAT OVER THERE!? A DUCK!?
*sneaks away* >.>;;
WOO! More girls for CHarlotte to secretly oogle at! :D
I mean.. uhhhh.... WHAT'S THAT OVER THERE!? A DUCK!?
*sneaks away* >.>;;
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Charlotte could ogle overtly with Scarlett.
As for everyone else, I have a pressing feeling that I need to address what feels like an over-abundance of gay characters within the RP. A few characters are fine, and I have no problems with the whole idea of gay characters either I just feel that with the time setting, an abundance of gay characters is just way too much. It was a very, VERY touchy thing back then and in all reality, the characters we have that are gay wouldn't even so much as mutter a peep about it because of how it was viewed back then. So please, lets keep this to a slight minimum? Please don't make your characters gay for the sake of being gay. Have a plan (this goes for all the already approved characters who have been deemed as gay already too).
Sorry for the rant, I just want an equal, realistic balance of characters here.
@Shadowcatcher
Great job on Iris, being as she was poor to begin with, there wasn't much that the war would have done to affect her noral day-to-day life, so for that, Iris has been accepted and will be placed into slot number 7.
For Erik, just a few small things. One, could you elaborate on Erik's abilities? Separate out what he can do now and what he will be able to do later? That just makes it easier on me. Also, this deal he made with Logan (since Logan is my character, I would like to know about this beforehand) I'm assuming the deal was for Logan to teach Erik to fight in turn for Erik not using his powers on the metal in his body, am I correct? I was hoping that you would go through the backstory I initially gave you and flesh it out a bit, make it sound like you wrote it and fill in some gaps that might appear. Would that be alright?
@YoshiSkittlez
You know what? I'm gonna drop that from my guy. I only had it because I needed a better trait for him. But I don't need it now that I have the PTSD. So my guy is not gay anymore.
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Thanks for the feedback! I was wondering if I should do some more elaboration with Erik but I wasn't entirely sure. I did want to kind of see what you were looking for before I just started adding useless information. I'm just getting off work now so I'll work on him later.
@Pie Flavor Hey great! Looks really good but before I approve Im slightly confused on one thing. Where did the him touching the others and inflicting pain come from? That's not part of his abilities...
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If manipulating the body goes anywhere, I believe that within reason one can also kill a person by confusing the nervous system of feeling a various amount pain. By tampering with another one's nervous system and inflicting this false sensation, it could overwhelm a person that they die from shock. What I believe a shock is that the mind basically shuts down and waits for the danger to pass. I think this also happens in a stroke? Its basically a protective measure against something like a car crash but beside that, its all I know about this brain shock thingy. (Im surprised I know this random fact lol)