@Oblivion: It being in a hider is always so hard to spot, I kept looking (overlooking I should say) for it and finally saw it. XD
*taps head* Silly me. It looks fine to me, I would just caution to perhaps take the effect of the "speed wind spell" (can't remember the name even though I just looked at it) from a few hours, to maybe just one hour? Getting super speed (well it's pretty much assumed she'll "shut it off" once she's done utilizing it) at her young age on top of her skills with mist and wind manipulation just make me think her getting the speedy ability while draining, for a couple hours seems unfair, unless you up her age to something like 27 or 28? Other than that, yeah you're totally good to go!
@Clumsywordsmith: Okay, bringing my attention back to you!
I get that he's a novice and his experience is not reflecting his age (not that he's OLD I mean...) I just want to find a way where I'm comfortable with his skills in the group and that you're comfortable with anything we can come to agreement with.
@Rayn Night: Awesome.
@Everyone: I will be editing the first post of the OOC with the offical people I know I've Approved or have mostly Approved. Please look for it and make sure you're on it and if you're not, contact me and we'll see what needs to happen. I will be editing a random post here with my own characters as well and that will be found in the first post of the OOC and I am have pretty much the next four or five days to myself so I can get into writing. Homework is done for tomorrow, I have a few Adv 1x1 posts but I would like to get this thing up ASAP so as soon as I finish fleshing out my Character Sheets, I'll begin making an intro. Should anyone have any questions before or after it's posted, let me know. There's no posting order but there will be Rounds.
I will add that in the OOC too, it's just something I've been doing since I started GM'ing years ago, a Round consists of a post from everyone. Just one, no need to throw posts every second. A Round ends when I note everyone has posted. There's no order but it still ensures that interactions and players don't get left out or left behind, so the sooner someone posts, the quicker a Round can finish and I can kick off a new one. Okay?
*taps head* Silly me. It looks fine to me, I would just caution to perhaps take the effect of the "speed wind spell" (can't remember the name even though I just looked at it) from a few hours, to maybe just one hour? Getting super speed (well it's pretty much assumed she'll "shut it off" once she's done utilizing it) at her young age on top of her skills with mist and wind manipulation just make me think her getting the speedy ability while draining, for a couple hours seems unfair, unless you up her age to something like 27 or 28? Other than that, yeah you're totally good to go!
@Clumsywordsmith: Okay, bringing my attention back to you!
I get that he's a novice and his experience is not reflecting his age (not that he's OLD I mean...) I just want to find a way where I'm comfortable with his skills in the group and that you're comfortable with anything we can come to agreement with.
@Rayn Night: Awesome.
@Everyone: I will be editing the first post of the OOC with the offical people I know I've Approved or have mostly Approved. Please look for it and make sure you're on it and if you're not, contact me and we'll see what needs to happen. I will be editing a random post here with my own characters as well and that will be found in the first post of the OOC and I am have pretty much the next four or five days to myself so I can get into writing. Homework is done for tomorrow, I have a few Adv 1x1 posts but I would like to get this thing up ASAP so as soon as I finish fleshing out my Character Sheets, I'll begin making an intro. Should anyone have any questions before or after it's posted, let me know. There's no posting order but there will be Rounds.
I will add that in the OOC too, it's just something I've been doing since I started GM'ing years ago, a Round consists of a post from everyone. Just one, no need to throw posts every second. A Round ends when I note everyone has posted. There's no order but it still ensures that interactions and players don't get left out or left behind, so the sooner someone posts, the quicker a Round can finish and I can kick off a new one. Okay?