Or maybe the Masters can just be demoted to simple mages. ^^
I'll look at Archer in a second, but for now, here is Rider! I'd like for anyone to tell me if they see something wrong. I'm the GM, but I want to be fair too.
@Flamelord Archer looks good. Just put him in the character tab.
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"I am the flail of God. If you had not committed great sins, God would not have sent a punishment like me upon you." Class: Rider
True Name: Temujin, or more commonly known as Genghis Khan
Age: Appears to be in his late twenties to early thirties
Gender: Male
Master: -
Cause of Death: Unknown
Abilities:Bowman- Genghis Khan does not use a sword or any other type of blade in combat; he uses a bow, instead. He is able to remain sitting on his horse without using his hands and can shoot targets easily on horseback.
Spy: the Mongols were known for their espionage, Genghis Khan included. He is a rather useful spy that can gather information and relay back rather quickly. This does not, however, come close to comparing with the skill of Assassin.
Noble Phantasm:Jebe- Genghis Khan summons a mount named after one of his most prominent generals. The Mongolian Horse, with trimmed mane and stocky stature, provides him with mobility and speed. Jebe grants him the ability to ride the wind, allowing both beast and rider to get to enemies located above him.
Pinning Shots- with enough mana, Genghis Khan can make an arrow that he shoots spit into multiple ones. They can be blocked and only receive some power increase, but unlike Scourge of the East and West, can be used several times in one battle. Pinning Shots are able to break through magic barriers if used enough.
Scourge of the East and West- summons some of his mounted Mongol army. His Noble Phantasm is more of an anti-city type, but can be used on units as well. The small army is able to rampage and pillage towns quickly and easily, along with focusing an attack on a small home, Master, or other Servant. However, this takes a toll on Genghis Khan and he is only able to keep the army going just as long as he has energy to supply them with.
Appearance: Broad shouldered and sturdy, Temujin stands at 5'8". His hair is long and wavy and falls down to the base of his neck. Some of his hair is tied into braids, whether loosened or tied. His face is usually set in a frown and at first, he looks like an intimidating person that has no room for friendship. There is some facial hair on his lip, jaw, and chin; he does not bear a full-on beard, but he does not have stubble, either. His arms and legs are rather strong due to the fact that he practices archery while using only his legs to maneuver his mount around. Genghis's armor is composed of steel plating, cloth, and fur.
Personality: To put it simply, Genghis Khan is known for being particularly aggressive. He had wished to conquer during his days, after all. However, he is not rash and foolish when it comes to battle-- he does not charge headlong into a squabble without studying his opponents, first. A lover of tactics, Temujin adores planning ahead, as he believes that it would grant him more chance of winning a battle. Though he is violent and aggressive, he is another person when it comes to his allies. Genghis Khan is extremely loyal to his friends, standing beside them through thick and thin. Loyalty is important to him; it ties several people together and makes them more of a force to put up with.
He prefers to be called Genghis Khan if one wishes to call him by his actual name as he believes the name suits him better than Temujin. He has no qualms being called Rider, though.
Genghis Khan can get rather impatient if he stays put for too long, and will often go out of his way to explore or take in his environment.
Short Biography: Born in north-central Mongolia in 1162, he was named Temujin by his father after one of the chieftains his army had captured. Temujin was born with a blood clot in his hand; in Mongolian folklore, this automatically stated that he would one day become a great leader. At the age of nine, his father took him to live with his future wife. On the way home, his father was met with some of the members of the rival Tatar tribe, who invited him to a conciliatory meal. It was at this feast that Temjuin's father was poisoned and killed. Upon learning about his death, he returned home to take control of his tribe. However, his family did not accept him as the chief of the tribe at first. They pressured him immensely. Due to the stress imposed on him, he killed his half-brother, Bekhter, after quarreling with him during a hunting expedition. Temujin was then confirmed as the head of the family.
When Temujin was twenty, he was captured by a former allied tribe in a raid and temporarily enslaved. One of the tribe's members took pity on him and helped him escape. After fleeing from the tribe, Temujin slowly formed an army with his brothers. The army's count climbed to twenty thousand units, and it was then that Temujin began to strive to unite the Mongol tribes under his rule. After several of the tribes fell under his command, the other tribal leaders agreed to peace and dubbed Temujin "Genghis Khan", or "Universal Ruler". Genghis Khan's empire grew to become the largest one in history, branching from the east of the Mongol empire (some of China, etc) to the west (Turkey, Afghanistan, etc). It was then when his army was known for being an extreme force to deal with and was feared by many.
Genghis Khan died in 1227 after the submission of the Xi Xia. No one really knows how he died; some say that he fell off of his horse and died of fatigue and injury. Others state that he died of respiratory disease. He was buried without markings, as per the tradition of his men. According to legend, the funeral escort killed anyone and anything in its way in order to conceal the location of the burial site, and a river was diverted in order for it to flow over his grave.
Other: Wields a short sword that is used for close combat. While the sword isn't anything special, Rider finds it useful for fending off those who get too close for him to use his bow.