Oh and forgive the double post, but @McHaggis are those italicized sentences supposed to be thoughts? It's kind of hard to tell with the third person view.
Yes ^^ I can colour the ones he hears from other people in red which was the original plan, if you'd like, but the confusion of not knowing who they were from was sorta intentional.
Yes ^^ I can colour the ones he hears from other people in red which was the original plan, if you'd like, but the confusion of not knowing who they were from was sorta intentional.
Ahhh I get it. I used italics there at the end for emphasis rather than thoughts themselves. Changed it to bold.
I do prefer thoughts in 3rd person though, just from a writing perspective. First person thoughts feel so... icky. Not sure why.
Interested. I'm definitely give this a read and consider making a character.
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