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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Obscene Symphony
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Oh and forgive the double post, but @McHaggis are those italicized sentences supposed to be thoughts? It's kind of hard to tell with the third person view.
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Yes ^^ I can colour the ones he hears from other people in red which was the original plan, if you'd like, but the confusion of not knowing who they were from was sorta intentional.


Well I understood what was going on because I'm cool.
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Yes ^^ I can colour the ones he hears from other people in red which was the original plan, if you'd like, but the confusion of not knowing who they were from was sorta intentional.


Oh no I wasn't confused on who they were from, not at all really. I was confused as to whether or not they were meant to be thoughts, since thoughts are generally in first person. Does your character intentionally think in third person?
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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Dioxide
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Ahhh I get it. I used italics there at the end for emphasis rather than thoughts themselves. Changed it to bold.

I do prefer thoughts in 3rd person though, just from a writing perspective. First person thoughts feel so... icky. Not sure why.


I know how you feel. xD
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I just read up on Jackson Crowley and I felt sad :(
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His super power is depression.
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After a night's sleep (it's like, 1 am here), I'll write up an intro post for Gretchen

I will be probably be picking up on Terminal's post, referencing the fire.
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Interested. I'm definitely give this a read and consider making a character.
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Charis' profile is complete.
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Interested. I'm definitely give this a read and consider making a character.


Cool :)

Charis' profile is complete.


Will check it out now.
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Game of Bones. xD
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There we go. I too am getting back to writing Advanced. xD
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@McHaggis

Noooo you don't :P

I hope you don't mind :p
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Dakota's up. I'll probably be tweaking tiny details here and there for the next few days, but if any serious changes arise, I'll let you guys know.
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@Obscene Symphony
I'll read the sheet and post in a jiffy!

@McHaggis
I'll kick off the posting tonight and if we can just be online concurrently for an hourish that should be plenty time to get a post done. :)
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