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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Satsuki
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I admit two things about this, I was looking to see if I had misunderstood who the gm was. In addition I am ignorant to the meaning of NRP.
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@Darkmatter is the GM. An NRP is an acronym for Nation Role Play, which you are probably at least peripherally aware of. They are roleplays where posters write for entire distinct nations in a large world setting.
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I admit two things about this, I was looking to see if I had misunderstood who the gm was. In addition I am ignorant to the meaning of NRP.


I think my sarcasm can sometimes be lost.
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Oh I picked up on it, I was just admitting to you that I tripped over it thinking you where speaking of someone else. I should really stop reading everything as if it was a literal.
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Oh I picked up on it, I was just admitting to you that I tripped over it thinking you where speaking of someone else. I should really stop reading everything as if it was a literal.


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Yeah, I can't promise a serious attitude out myself all the time.
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How does my CS look?
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How does my CS look?


I replied over in the chatzy when you commented. :)
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Dioxide
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Added a picture most representative for my character. :)
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by maplety
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Question!

Can I make the warehouse that Charis is in a Lucracidy warehouse? That way my character can get involved pretty easily.
Second, who exactly does Charis work for? Kind of need some background info on the operation because I assume with the wealth and resources Alice has, she can find out something using intelligence.
Third, can I make Lucracidy a household name? So that most people actually know who they are? Like Lexcorp or Colgate. (Haha)
Should be able to post a relatively substantial post after.

I would probably need @Terminal to check out my post before I do it though, don't wanna crank up your style.
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Silly annoying GM mode activate!

I enjoyed the posts. Good to get all the characters interacting even if indirectly. I am however, conscious that if we all get going too quickly it can gather a head of steam and lead to nothing.

So this quick awesome start is great but I'll do my best to pace the story in a way that isn't too fast so as everything just seems irrelevant.

I'd say another page or two of posting and 'main' plot ideas will start being made clear.

Good stuff so far guys enjoying reading it and contemplating the next turn.
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Posted! Features interaction for:
Snake
Haggis
Dioxide

And indirect stuff for everyone else.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Darkmatter
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@Satsuki

The post, content wise is actually great. Nice little intro.
However, the use of several different tenses is very jarring. The jumps to present tense and use of the conditional tense where unnecessary make it a little hard to read. This is meant as friendly advice not criticism!
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If anybody else wants to post, throw it out here and let me know. Otherwise, I'd like to move the Night forward so we can start to catch up with the day before Retroactive Plot Causticity begins to seep in.
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I shall go over it in the morning to correct it.
Hidden 10 yrs ago → 10 yrs ago Post by Darkmatter
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If anybody else wants to post, throw it out here and let me know. Otherwise, I'd like to move the Night forward so we can start to catch up with the day before Retroactive Plot Causticity begins to seep in.


Hey Mr. Bossy boots. I think Haggis and I would like to have some parting interaction between the two characters. Snake may also want a chance to respond to his just received communication. I've posted three times, and you twice. Give the others a chance to get a second post up if they want.

@Satsuki Ok cool :) It's usually just better to stick to the past tense unless it's conversation, again just my input. :)
Hidden 10 yrs ago → 10 yrs ago Post by maplety
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Hey all, so finals week is coming up and will be beyond beat from Tues to Thurs, and who knows what will happen after because I'll be traveling for a bit. I'll have internet but may just be busy. Am wondering if I should post something in the next two days just in case?

EDIT: Also, don't mean to be nitpicky, but I'm just wondering what are everybody's weaknesses? Or do we all not have any? I'm afraid that we're going to all be supermen without the Kryptonite.
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Set is weak to knives or anything else that is sharp. Although she is wearing ballistic armor, Charis is still vulnerable to bullets and bludgeoning, and shock force will still affect her as well. Werrill has no superhuman defenses and so is susceptible to anything that might kill a regular unarmored human.
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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Darkmatter
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I might not be able to post until Friday, unless I can slip away. Have two exams this week.

Also, Fitzroy's own power erodes away at his health, particularly when he focuses on it; if other people's thoughts are incredibly strong he can be 'deafened' and confused by them; when other people die violently (like being shot, etc) he can feel it... He's also pretty mortal and doesn't wear body armor. Easy enough to kill if he's not looking out for enemies everywhere.


I assumed you'd want to have some parting interaction with Will and Fitzroy but I understand if you can't post for a few days. I've two more exams myself this week!.

If the story has moved onto the following the day by friday, which it should hopefully have, then you can just catch him up however you see fit. :)

As for weaknesses, without the suit, Tempest can't/won't use his powers and is pretty easy to kill.
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As of right now, Gretchen just shoots lasers. Powerful lasers, but that's about it for the time being. Like Superman but just the eyes hahaha

You guys suck, my exams ended May 4. Semester starts super early in my uni :p
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