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That's a fair point. I should see to that.
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@Partisan I think Kanajiro is an okay character. Just one thing, really: I (And a few other people I talked to on Skype) don't exactly understand the power - mostly it's capabilities. Like, it's nice that you provided a description as to where it came from, but all of that isn't necessary (You could put that in a hider, or in the other section). I want to know details about the power itself, and what it's capable of. Like it's hardness, and any other trips.

At best, he could produce a toothpick sized crystal by crystallizing the air at his finger.


Also, I don't think this is a good idea to start off being able to create this little.

However, he is most definetely a good friend despite his quirks and quietness. If you need him, he will be there, and he will sacrifice himself to prevent you from being negatively affected in anyway, and he won't expect anything in return. But that will require his friendship first.


And I always found personality tidbits like this cringeworthy. Like, doesn't this go without saying if you're a good friend?

He should be heavier too - like twenty pounds.
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I can get behind that. Sorry, this is my very first time creating a power of sorts and it's actually a lot harder than I thought. I've certainly gained respect for those that do this on a regular basis.

And I should've specified that I meant more.. self sacrificial in battle or something like that where there are more serious consequences. The way I put it now probably makes it sound like he's willing to be a shoulder to cry on or something. I don't know. Allow me to change it or remove it all together.

No idea how much a pound is so I'll use a converter, haha.

Is it alright if I add you on skype so I can get some help with the power or do you want me to try and figure it out myself?
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Good, you can add me on Skype. I'm busy atm.

.... And restricted to a phone.
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I've changed it around a bit, I've looked a bit more into the properties of crystal against certain elements, and components of crystal that keep it together + I increased his current skill level or ability level a bit. I've also removed the personality part, you were right, it was just silly and unnessecary. However I would like to stress that I can totally 100% understand if you don't want me around. This RP seems very advanced and set up already, and I could understand not wanting to waste time on someone like me, who has no experience or clue as to how to do this properly. So if you'd rather see me leave, feel free to say so.
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I've changed it around a bit, I've looked a bit more into the properties of crystal against certain elements, and components of crystal that keep it together + I increased his current skill level or ability level a bit. I've also removed the personality part, you were right, it was just silly and unnessecary. However I would like to stress that I can totally 100% understand if you don't want me around. This RP seems very advanced and set up already, and I could understand not wanting to waste time on someone like me, who has no experience or clue as to how to do this properly. So if you'd rather see me leave, feel free to say so.


God damn it we need more folks like this around here.
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However I would like to stress that I can totally 100% understand if you don't want me around. This RP seems very advanced and set up already, and I could understand not wanting to waste time on someone like me, who has no experience or clue as to how to do this properly. So if you'd rather see me leave, feel free to say so.


Actually, you did pretty damn good. Just what I wanted to see, actually. You described the power pretty well. I just wanna know more about the "crystallizing people" part, since I'm wondering if you mean, uh, turning someone into a crystal, covering them in it, or...?
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I wish I could edit that in but it's getting late here and I have a mandatory class tomorrow early on, so I will edit that tomorrow and get back to you asap.
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I wish I could edit that in but it's getting late here and I have a mandatory class tomorrow early on, so I will edit that tomorrow and get back to you asap.


Take your time.
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I've changed it around a bit, I've looked a bit more into the properties of crystal against certain elements, and components of crystal that keep it together + I increased his current skill level or ability level a bit. I've also removed the personality part, you were right, it was just silly and unnessecary. However I would like to stress that I can totally 100% understand if you don't want me around. This RP seems very advanced and set up already, and I could understand not wanting to waste time on someone like me, who has no experience or clue as to how to do this properly. So if you'd rather see me leave, feel free to say so.


Hey Partisan! Just want to vouch for you. I've Rped with him before and he has done a great job, much better than me. So for what it's worth, I think he would be a great addition to the RP.
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Good. I already decided to accept him long as he makes his edits.

And whoever wants to go on a spooky trip to the Ruins... Head on over to the Beach Lodge.
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@TaliPaendrag@Wintergrey

Mind if I just, uh, get the group to the Beach house next post? I dunno where to take their interaction.
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I'm fine with that. :)
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fine with me
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I'll post tomorrow.
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@Wintergrey Hey! Thanks for the vouch :p good to see you again.

@Mr Allen J I added a little tiny piece about it being more like encasing, rather than turning people into crystal. If need be, I can even change or remove that part because.. well, it's not really neccesary for him to have it.
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@Partisan I think it should just be cut. Buuuuuuut, make that edit and you can put him in the character tab.
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I'll remove it, it's pretty stupid as a power anyway.
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I'll certainly post later on today.
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Would you have me handle a certain post cycle, or am I free to reply whenever and whatever I want? I'd be afraid to hog the thread.
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