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Awesome post :) . I am assuming the rouge Harbinger is dead?
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Awesome post :) . I am assuming the rouge Harbinger is dead?


No where near.
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I've included a helpful diagram made by somebody else of the ship for everyone to see. There's also a picture of a Spanish Galleon to give you an idea of what it may look like.

EDIT: I also edited my post to be in line with the diagrams. On top of all that I included an extra paragraph or two to tie things up a little bit. You should all go take a second look at it. It may answer some questions, settle some minds.

Perhaps it made things worse, how would I know?
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I should be home from vacation by Tuesday, I'll have more free time once I get back. On another note, I like the edit, and I think I have a good idea for Artemisia for when I write my next post.
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I should be home from vacation by Tuesday, I'll have more free time once I get back. On another note, I like the edit, and I think I have a good idea for Artemisia for when I write my next post.


I was hoping you would.
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@The New YorkerJust though I'd say my collab post is coming along, just been held up with revision.
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@The New YorkerJust though I'd say my collab post is coming along, just been held up with revision.


Good, PM me when it's ready.
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I've finally caught up with the posts and I'm drafting something viable to go along with everything that's happened so far.

All this Harbinger lark is terribly exciting - a Harbinger of what... what was the shadow that keeps darting around... will anyone ever get any sleep?

Ha, I'm intrigued for the future.
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I've finally caught up with the posts and I'm drafting something viable to go along with everything that's happened so far.

All this Harbinger lark is terribly exciting - a Harbinger of what... what was the shadow that keeps darting around... will anyone ever get any sleep?

Ha, I'm intrigued for the future.


I can say one thing, the shadow has readily revealed herself. There are hints pointing to that in the first sentence.
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A question @The New Yorker, this Harbinger is it a mythical beast/creature? Or is it a human beneath the armor? Or is it more of a spiritual entity?
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A question @The New Yorker, this Harbinger is it a mythical beast/creature? Or is it a human beneath the armor? Or is it more of a spiritual entity?


Think of it like some sort of magnetic soul which is keeping the armor together. There is nothing underneath no. I feel like I've failed if that's not clear enough.
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Think of it like some sort of magnetic soul which is keeping the armor together. There is nothing underneath no. I feel like I've failed if that's not clear enough.


On the contrary, I was just making sure so that I wouldn't screw my post up, I had the impression that it was otherworldly when you wrote of the mechanical voice it had, and how the armor reassembled itself. Your explanation helped for clarification (: thanks.
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I can say one thing, the shadow has readily revealed herself. There are hints pointing to that in the first sentence.


Ah yes, that woman, now I see.
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Ah yes, that woman, now I see.


The closer you look, the more you see.
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That part with the guard was so funny, @Eru Iluvatar.

"Oh yeah, sure I'll just continue on this trip to Morocco only to sit on the beach and probably catch syphilis."


He probably deserves it for stealing.

Really nice post, I like your use of actual Spanish and Portuguese words.
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Very nice! Keep 'em coming, guys.
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That part with the guard was so funny, @Eru Iluvatar.

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He probably deserves it for stealing.

Really nice post, I like your use of actual Spanish and Portuguese words.


Thanks, I always get worried when using the words as I can only find current translations so I have no idea if there were any significant language changes from the 17th Century to now. I think it will be fine as long as I just limit them to curses or greetings.
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Thanks, I always get worried when using the words as I can only find current translations so I have no idea if there were any significant language changes from the 17th Century to now. I think it will be fine as long as I just limit them to curses or greetings.


I have the same hesitancy.
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I actually speak Spanish, but only to some degree, past an present tense but no future tense. I've got an idea on how Portuguese and Italian words should sound, but I use a translator for those.

In other words, I'm home from vacation now, so I have all the time in the world to write. Expect a post from me today.
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