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Name: Ajax Diagorides
Age: 40
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual/fightsexual
Role in Society: Foreigner/commoner
Occupation: Mercenary/wanderer/troublemaker

Legend:
The legends surrounding Ajax have spread across the kingdoms as a result of his ceaseless traveling and the ease with which he stands out no matter where he goes, hard to miss the obvious foreigner built like a brick house. The actual stories vary from place to place and feel more like baseless rumors than legitimate recountings, but they all share a similar theme.

He strangled a cave full of ogres to death in this kingdom, he killed a minotaur with a single strike to the head and took one of its horns as a trophy in another, he entered a renowned school of martial arts or a tournament and bested all their fighters, he cleared out a bandit garrison because it was on his way, it's a simple thematic. Also famous are his disregard for the study of magic and his lack of belief in the existence and influence of gods and his mentality that humans can achieve whatever they set out to do if they try hard enough.

Appearence:
Ajax is an olive skinned and tanned man who stands at 6 feet 2 inches and weighs around 260 pounds. A thick, muscle bound figure with powerful, sinewy arms and robust legs which end in burly hands and feet and a log-like neck that holds up a head as large as the rest of his body, with a prominent jaw and chin as well as dark brown eyes, short, curly black hair and a thick but not overly long beard, overall bearing more than a passing resemblance to the Boxer of Quirinal.

Ajax is a mess to look at. He is scarred from head to toe, his eyes are sunken, his nose squashed, he has cauliflower ears and his hands, forearms, elbows, knees, shins and feet are covered in extremely thick and rough calluses, giving them a leathery, bumpy look. Ajax's clothing, a loose, white doric chiton that's strapped to his left shoulder with a pin and goes past the waist, ending just above the knees, does not help hide his rather deformed body. Ajax also wears brown leather, hobnailed, sandal-like boots called caligae.

Personality:
Ajax is a reasonably merry man, fond of living a life full of excitement and action and fairly easy to get along with as he is giving, loyal, honest and straightforward, seeing greed, deceit and treachery as marks of weakness. Conversely, he's also kind of nuts. He enjoys battle to a mind-boggling degree and smashing things to bits seems to be his main solution to any problem, often turning him into the aggressor as he prefers to escalate things when others are more than ready to back down or run away.

Ajax has a great distaste for magic and religion and will act rather condescending to anyone who relies overmuch on these. It’s not enough to bring him to violence but he sees over-reliance on magic or the intervention of higher forces as a queer path in life. Why credit the gods with your achievements, why rely on some mystic force you can barely comprehend when you could achieve this on the strength of your back? He feels much the same towards those who take their status as nobles as somehow making them intrinsically superior to others.

Ajax has a fairly complex world view based on strength, self-reliance and personal growth. He feels the strong come to rule the weak, but that strength isn't limited to physical strength or martial power and that the weak should, in turn, grow strong and strive for greater things in life. He relishes the freedom necessary for such a growth and will readily help others to attain it, just as long as they actually put the effort to grow themselves. He is rather harsh towards those who could stand for themselves but don't and expect others to do it for them, believing that over-reliance on others is another path to subjugation.

Skills:
-Pankration master: Ajax is a frighteningly skilled unarmed fighter, having trained to fight most of his life and having survived a number of ordeals through fighting skill alone. His fighting style is known in his homeland as Pankration, loosely translated as "all of might", and was originally a blend of boxing and wrestling with no rules beyond no biting or eye-gouging before more and more skills were added to its repertoire. Ajax is particularly skilled at the boxing aspect of it, having trained in it first before starting in Pankration, but he is still quite good at grappling and other forms of striking.

This is Ajax’s everything, his reason to be, his focus, the thing he has practiced for nearly all his life, and he has lived a fairly long one, much longer than most would’ve bet on considering his lifestyle. Given his extreme level of overspecialization and his age, it stands to reason that he is better at this than others who have pursued other skills in their life, especially those who are younger and have not fought anywhere near as much as he has.

-Animalistic: Ajax’s instincts have been honed through his time surviving in the wild with no tools or any real survival skills to speak of, just plain overpowering physicality. This gives him a sixth sense for detecting and reacting to ambushes and traps as well as hunting down specific prey and projecting a certain "aura" of intimidation that goes beyond his obvious physical attributes and enters the terrain of monsters, producing an instinctive feeling of dread that marks him as extremely dangerous to any self-aware creature.

Combat flaws:
-Complete lack of versatility: Ajax is limited to smashing. Ajax smashes. Well, okay, that’s kind of a gross oversimplification of his abilities, he’s a superlatively skilled unarmed fighter, but that is all he has and all he wants to have. No magic, no weapons training of any kind, no desire to even consider learning these things, nothing but his own body.

Personality flaws: Ajax is impulsive, agressive and extremely set on his ways. He considers all forms of battle that aren't a straightforward clash as varying degrees of cowardly and his peculiar set of morals can leave him seemingly uncaring towards someone's plight because he feels this person can face it on their own and should do so rather than beg for assistance from a foreigner like himself.

Abilities:
-Superhuman physicality: Magic, Ajax feels, is for the weak. This is a sentiment shared by many of the premier heroes of his homeland. Magic is for the weak who need to rely on something other than their own body and waste the endless potential of a living, breathing creature for growth and progress. Through lifelong dedication, Ajax has made himself as physically overpowering as any monster. Though his agility and manual dexterity aren’t much to speak of, he is freakishly strong and damn near tireless. His entire body is tremendously difficult to damage and eradicates poisons, toxins and disease with absurd ease.

-Pride: Pride's a powerful emotion and Ajax is quite proud of himself. Proud of his superhuman body and the primitive power it represents over that acquired through money, knowledge, social influence and other roundabout ways. So much so that he is able to use his body against things that should be unaffected by mere brute force, pitting his might directly against magic and the like. This kind of pride also allows him to ignore any sort of mind-altering effects, and attempts to invade his psyche will meet with as heavy a resistance as if Ajax was fighting the person directly.

Backstory:
Ajax descends from a long line of athletes, from a land far away. His father, Diagoras, was an accomplished boxer trained by his father as was tradition within the family and celebrated in his homeland for his many victories in legitimate sporting events. Ajax was trained by his father, a widower, from an early age as well and rapidly became a boxer of considerable skill himself. However before Ajax could make his debut in an official event, Diagoras was murdered, the killer managing to evade the law.

Ajax eventually discovered that his father's death was orchestrated by Diagoras' supposed benefactor, Magistrate Cleon, because Diagoras had won a fight he was asked to throw, thus ruining many a bet. Enraged, Ajax sought Cleon out to murder him with his own two hands but was subsequently defeated, bested by foul sorceries and the attack of a demonically powerful fighter in Cleon's employ, known only as Hyperanthes. He was captured and his family subjected to great shame.

Publicly tried for attempting to murder a magistrate, Ajax was sentenced to death by poisoning but before it could be carried out he was smuggled out of prison by Cleon and his associates, who then sold him to The Crypt, a brutal underground arena where people are forced to fight in rule-less deathmatches for the enjoyment of select crowds. It was here, fighting for survival armed only with a pair of old and worn gauntlets and greaves, that Ajax developed his fighting style across several years of captivity, with only one thought keeping him from despair: revenge.

As time passed Ajax befriended a few of the other fighters and together they planned an escape, which was mostly just being superior fighters taking on a bunch of crappy hired guards by surprise. Knowing he'd be hunted down by The Crypt and Cleon, Ajax decided to flee the country without involving anyone else, sneaking into a random merchant ship leaving the island which was first dragged around, then smashed to bits by a typhoon. The lone survivor, Ajax drifted aimlessly in a damaged boat until he arrived to Iliviace.

He has spent many years in the land, growing accustomed to its language and its ways, always wandering, always fighting, never settling for long. Some day, he will return to his homeland and wreak upon Cleon a vengeance so thorough even the gods, should they exist, will have to stop and take notice. But for now he is quite lost on how achieve this, considering he has absolutely no clue on how to get home and couldn’t possibly give any directions to a ship.
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A couple things, though I do really like the character. I know you made this after the change, and for that I personally apologize, but his flaws are all personality flaws. He'll need some combat flaws according to the new CS. The other small thing is... demons don't exist as far as anyone is aware of and magical beasts are rare to very rare, so a crusade to kill a bunch of them doesn't make much sense.
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A couple things, though I do really like the character. I know you made this after the change, and for that I personally apologize, but his flaws are all personality flaws. He'll need some combat flaws according to the new CS. The other small thing is... demons don't exist as far as anyone is aware of and magical beasts are rare to very rare, so a crusade to kill a bunch of them doesn't make much sense.


Ight, thanks boss(wo)man. I meant demons, in the foreign heretic kinda way, like the Christian Crusaders called the Muslim peoples, but yeh ill change up magical beasts to seem less common place aswell as flaws.

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Just a few concerns here and there, but before doing that - this is actually a very well thought out character. ^.^ The part that concerns me first was his personality. I think it's fine to have some social awkwardness, I mean after all Cerylia isn't letting anyone that close for a while (maybe), but you took it a step further. It makes me cautious to whether he can actually work inside a group at all at this point.

Second was the flaws. The first one listed is the same concern as above - if he can't work well with others, how can we expect him to group up with everyone and go on this adventure? I almost see him as just leaving the group and having his own private adventure, away from this RP... which I don't want to see. The second one really isn't a flaw, because no enemy could realistically take advantage of it. There are thousands of people who don't know magic (since it takes study, which I should note, but thought it was obvious haha) so it's not exactly a specific flaw that a character has... someone without combat knowledge in a fight can be taken specific advantage of by getting in their face with a mace - see? There's no real downfall to not knowing magic.

The last minor nick pick is, it's unlikely a fight would last a full day, let alone both parties having the endurance to fight for so long. ^.^ Otherwise, I really do like the character. He seems much more like a jack of trades wilderness person than a ranger, so that's cool.


Okay, I'll tweak his personality to make it clear that he's more 'abrasive' than 'totally incapable of camraderie'. I'll also fix the flaws while I'm on, just to add more emphasis to the whole 'can only fight on his terms' part of it. I guess I sort of misinterpreted the 'flaws' section, so I'll handle it.

Oh, and just to clarify, I didn't mean that he and the ogre were like, actually fighting for a whole day, more that it took him a whole day of leading it around and annoying it and snaring it before it actually died. It would have been more like, attack, fight for a bit, Tobias runs off, they lick their wounds for an hour or so, repeat.
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GM would you mind clarifying which skills exactly are to be changed?
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If this was a steak, this would be a rare steak, because this RP is better than well-done. But to be honest, almost everything is better than a well-done steak. My point still stands though, this is a well-written RP. In other words, this has my interest and I will probably get started on the character sheet tomorrow morning.
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@Zero Hex - That's an interesting character and I like the work you've put into him, but frankly - he doesn't fit anywhere in this role-play. I hate to point this out, but I specifically said no murderous characters or ones whom liked killing. There's no way I could accept him here.

@TheWizardLizard - Sounds good. Looking forward to it then. ^.^

@Everyone - I think this needs to be made clear after talking with a few friends - Anti-heroes are going to be extremely difficult to fit into this adventure. Besides the fact that most anit-heroes don't work well in groups and I pointed out that all characters must be able to work with one another, this particular plot and story needs more traditional heroes. It's okay to have flaws and issues (@Irisity's character is a perfect example) but to be without morals and some level of restraint when it comes to killing people is not what this role-play is about.
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GM would you mind clarifying which skills exactly are to be changed?


Well, I'm not sure. Compare your character to mine. I felt like Chase was a cookie-cutter of Cerylia. Not all rangers are masters of the bow, or even experts. A ranger can be a dual-wieldest for example, or even use a sword and shield. Or maybe a two-handed weapon or specialize in only one weapon. There's tons of ways to go here.

Also rangers don't need stealth. You can rangers that are more hunters in that they can run further, endure longer, chase down prey, etc. Of course, you'd imagine some stealth... and the abilities are pretty much a copy too. I'm not sure what else to say besides be original and think of other ways the character might be skilled.

If this was a steak, this would be a rare steak, because this RP is better than well-done. But to be honest, almost everything is better than a well-done steak. My point still stands though, this is a well-written RP. In other words, this has my interest and I will probably get started on the character sheet tomorrow morning.


Thank you for the compliment!~ <3
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I'm...not sure why exactly Ajax liking to fight and not being one to back out from one or getting rid of dangerous monsters for people who ask him to is a problem when there's characters described as assassins and the like and Ajax is specifically said to be an okay guy to be around with if you don't try to fight him.

Most traditional heroes made their impact precisely because they presented these attributes of foolhardy courage and relentless battling both for self improvement and against threats towards either humanity as a whole or their lands/close ones. It's not the killing that matters, it's the test of personal strength and skill, with no tools or anything to facilitate success, that matters most.
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Well, I'm not sure. Compare your character to mine. I felt like Chase was a cookie-cutter of Cerylia. Not all rangers are masters of the bow, or even experts. A ranger can be a dual-wieldest for example, or even use a sword and shield. Or maybe a two-handed weapon or specialize in only one weapon. There's tons of ways to go here.

Also rangers don't need stealth. You can rangers that are more hunters in that they can run further, endure longer, chase down prey, etc. Of course, you'd imagine some stealth... and the abilities are pretty much a copy too. I'm not sure what else to say besides be original and think of other ways the character might be skilled.


Hm yeah I see,
about the stealth, I guess it's part of his 'guilds' needs, he gathers intel and the like.

I'll see what I can do,
and and do read the Kingdom too, thanks.
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@Zero Hex - Well, I'll admit I misread violence as killing, which is my bad... but yes, anyone who enjoys killing isn't really a heroic type, no matter what else they believe in. I looked at it closer and I still see things that make it hard to envision him working in a group though. His distaste for magic being one... seeing nobles in a hostile way (when some character might be nobles), and I specifically honed onto this; "feels that the strong should rule over the weak." That, to me, definitely feels less moral... as long as your strong, you should rule anyone who is weak, strength is everything. It speaks for a lack of morals even though the character himself may not be a bad guy.

Definitely seems to be a set-in-stone anti-hero. At least that's my take on his character, whether it was the intention of it or not. It's just really hard to see him working in a group and adventure designed for heroics, is all. I'm sorry if you disagree with that and you're free to try and argue your point, but as it stands... I just can't see it that well.

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Hm yeah I see,
about the stealth, I guess it's part of his 'guilds' needs, he gathers intel and the like.

I'll see what I can do,
and and do read the Kingdom too, thanks.


I did! The kingdom sounds pretty awesome, actually. ^.^
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Oooooooh this looks very intriguing. Gonna work on application if thats alright. :)
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Edited, he's less of a complete misfit now.

Also, I can't help but notice that our characters aren't really lining up well for the 'romance' angle... we'll see how that plays out, I guess.
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Edited, he's less of a complete misfit now.

Also, I can't help but notice that our characters aren't really lining up well for the 'romance' angle... we'll see how that plays out, I guess.


I think you're the first accepted character!~ Good job. ^.^ And yes, it isn't thus far... maybe people in the future will keep that in mind when making their characters. I'd put bisexual if I was at all comfortable with the opposite sex (sexually only), haha. Anyways, feel free to post in the character tab.

Edit: But there's nothing against possibly using NPCs as well, played by other players.
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To start with, heroism isn't defined whether you kill or not, like I said there's plenty of characters given as heroic who will readily kill threats because of a lack of social constructs that make such a thing unnecessary like effective law enforcement and prisons to keep people safe without resorting to taking away a life. I'm not particularly seeing the problem with a guy who clears out dens of dangerous creatures for the peasantry, he'd probably be hailed as a hero for getting rid of a threat to everyone's safety.

Distaste for magic, religion and nobility doesn't mean he won't work with them, but he sure as hell won't be impressed by magic, religious devotion or noble birth. He sees magic as taking a crappy shortcut to power rather than building oneself up and relying on their own body, religion as hiding behind something you feel is greater and waiting for things to be given for granted rather than actually striving towards them and noble birth as completely meaningless, because you are much the same as anyone else.

The strong rule the weak in Ajax's world. Be it by establishing an order that puts them ahead by use of state or religion, it winds up with some people on top and some people on the bottom. Ajax feels that everyone should strive to be higher than they are, to be strong. Not many can walk the same path he has, to be physically strong to such a level that it lets them do as they will, and he'll certainly look down on those who don't as inferior to him, but any who can place themselves in a position of power over others should remain there.

This applies in every way, of course. If those people who put themselves over others are then, in turn, overthrown and others establish their own order in some way then that is the way of life. He sees his path as the best, much like most everyone does theirs, but this doesn't necessarily make him aggressive towards those who don't follow it.

As far as party dynamics, think of him as that one buddy of yours who doesn't necessarily agree with what you do because you're an art major and he's a lawyer or a surgeon and he teases you gives you crap about it but doesn't particularly care and can live with you being wrong. See what I did there?
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Wooooo! Posted in the characters tab!

This'll be grand, I can already tell.
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Btw, note - I'm posting this for everyone's sake, so they get a better understanding of how this world works. We can argue all day what is actually right or wrong, or if good and evil actually exist, etc, etc, etc, but this is my world I am sharing with those accepted.

@Zero Hex - Man, I need to choose my words more carefully... kind of hard trying to reply to everything. Certainly didn't expect like 20 people to be trying to make characters for this, so forgive me for the lack of clarification. I meant killing in the sense of murder or enjoying the act of killing. Of course tons of heroes kill in order to protect themselves or others from terrible acts of evil, so you're absolutely right there. (Had a similar argument with someone else who said it wasn't evil to execute murderers after they've surrendered and sought redemption, but that's something else entirely).

Okay, so he's arrogant as all hell... but can work with others. That can be worked with, though it'd still make it a bit hard and rough to do so, especially if he goes around telling other people how much better he is than everyone else. That's hard to work into a group, but doable. However he can easily end up hurting the group as a whole too, with wanting to fight all the time... that's really tricky to work.

I'm still hung up on his beliefs though. So if a murderer is able to overpower everyone and rules a kingdom - it's just the way it is? Striving for continuous improvement and strong ruling the weak are two different beliefs. He's basically saying anyone and everyone that can overpower another has every right to rule over them as they see fit. I'm not sure how you can possible argue that's a moral outlook on life. Neutral, maybe, but not good.

However I think it is good to take this to PMs if you still don't agree with me, so we don't clutter the OOC with a back and forth argument.
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@lydyn I think the group could use a healer then. Forget my overly dark assassin, I'll be creating a scholar/healer soon-ish.
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I guess I'll rehash my guy then, just to swordsmanship since it seems like most people don't use it.
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