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As always, any critiques or opinions on my writing are welcome. I'm always looking to improve.
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I already wrote my first IC post, actually, since I was finished with my NS...
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As always, any critiques or opinions on my writing are welcome. I'm always looking to improve.


That is an incredible history. I could almost visualize the events happening as I read it.
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That is an incredible history. I could almost visualize the events happening as I read it.


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Your history is great, but unfortunately Tin has a copyright on burning people. Expect a lawsuit. :P

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Finished my Arqwyen II type tanks.
Arqwyen means knight and that's indeed a fitting name for them.
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Finally, free time. So..I'll try to finish my WIP part in my sheet today,
sorry for dragging it for such a long time.
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Your history is great, but unfortunately Tin has a copyright on burning people. Expect a lawsuit. :P

What's your idea that the Temple Guard gave you?


I'll burn the lawsuit...and all the lawyers
Kal is a fire god, I gotta burn something. Otherwise all the melodramatic symbolism is lost!

No idea, really.
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On a different note, what kind of wars took place around this century.
I suppose Eisenkreis (@Alfhedil) fought one just a few dozen years ago at worst. His new borders are recent conquest.
Most likely they used tanks in that.

Thanks to Yllendthyr and Avalia (@Skepic) aircrafts were also probably used in some local wars.

But otherwise I'm at loss.
So what kind of important wars occoured which may have involved some modern weaponry?
I just wish to give a nice background for my weapon developments.
For example tanks would be inspired mostly by Eisenkreis, although with the taste of elven engineering.
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On a different note, what kind of wars took place around this century.
I suppose Eisenkreis (@Alfhedil) fought one just a few dozen years ago at worst. His new borders are recent conquest.
Most likely they used tanks in that.

Thanks to Yllendthyr and Avalia (@Skepic) aircrafts were also probably used in some local wars.

But otherwise I'm at loss.
So what kind of important wars occoured which may have involved some modern weaponry?
I just wish to give a nice background for my weapon developments.
For example tanks would be inspired mostly by Eisenkreis, although with the taste of elven engineering.


Our last war was 250 years ago with Hambria, so I'm afraid I can't help you there. Unless you want to have had a war since then, which would be perfectly logical given the border tension (and explain that peninsula you own)
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On a different note, what kind of wars took place around this century.
I suppose Eisenkreis (@Alfhedil) fought one just a few dozen years ago at worst. His new borders are recent conquest.
Most likely they used tanks in that.


Eisenkreis has fought with Kzechverin for centuries, and it's highly likely the original cause for their Unification War was Kzechverin adventurers. The recent joining of Kzechverin and Eisenkreis is actually not related to the wars, but actually the union of house Desrosier and Kzechverin between Marianna Desrosier and Csilla Kzechverin. There have been tanks used in outside conflicts, however, namely skirmishes with royal houses in the Kzechverin territories, so it would definitely be a visible thing to the world of Eisenkreis' technological standing.
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Our last war was 250 years ago with Hambria, so I'm afraid I can't help you there. Unless you want to have had a war since then, which would be perfectly logical given the border tension (and explain that peninsula you own)
I don't think Yllenthyr would've risked war with a nation of near or comparable power so it's more likely the penisula is an earlier acquisition before the borders of Kataylabinsk expanded this far.
Alternatively the elves could've taken the peninsula during the chaos with the empire's fall and the formation of PRK.
Maybe Yllendthyr got those lands in return for helping your regime triumph over the empire.
I mean there could've been some obvious rivalry between the two empires.

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Eisenkreis has fought with Kzechverin for centuries, and it's highly likely the original cause for their Unification War was Kzechverin adventurers. The recent joining of Kzechverin and Eisenkreis is actually not related to the wars, but actually the union of house Desrosier and Kzechverin between Marianna Desrosier and Csilla Kzechverin. There have been tanks used in outside conflicts, however, namely skirmishes with royal houses in the Kzechverin territories, so it would definitely be a visible thing to the world of Eisenkreis' technological standing.
I see. Well, that can work, too. The main point is that Yllendthyr starts working on their tanks after they see them in combat. Also when they realize practically everyone has them.
On the other hand, union between Marianna and Csilla, huh?
Both names are denoting female gender so...I didn't expect that to happen.
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<Snipped quote by Mihndar>I don't think Yllenthyr would've risked war with a nation of near or comparable power so it's more likely the penisula is an earlier acquisition before the borders of Kataylabinsk expanded this far.
Alternatively the elves could've taken the peninsula during the chaos with the empire's fall and the formation of PRK.
Maybe Yllendthyr got those lands in return for helping your regime triumph over the empire.
I mean there could've been some obvious rivalry between the two empires.


The former probably makes the most sense, which would mean that in the last hundred or so years we probably fought some minor wars with small nations in the region, but that's probably not quite what you're looking for.
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<Snipped quote by Mihndar>I don't think Yllenthyr would've risked war with a nation of near or comparable power so it's more likely the penisula is an earlier acquisition before the borders of Kataylabinsk expanded this far.
Alternatively the elves could've taken the peninsula during the chaos with the empire's fall and the formation of PRK.
Maybe Yllendthyr got those lands in return for helping your regime triumph over the empire.
I mean there could've been some obvious rivalry between the two empires.

<Snipped quote by Alfhedil>I see. Well, that can work, too. The main point is that Yllendthyr starts working on their tanks after they see them in combat. Also when they realize practically everyone has them.
On the other hand, union between Marianna and Csilla, huh?
Both names are denoting female gender so...I didn't expect that to happen.


I do not have tanks...
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The I.C. will be here soon, I hope?
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The I.C. will be here soon, I hope?


God willing, just haven't had enough time to just sit and write. Veterans exams and other such IRL stuff. But I promised you guys an IC post so I will try my best to deliver on that promise. Even if I have to write obscene amounts on my phone. Which I'd do if it wasn't for me fixing my computer.
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The former probably makes the most sense, which would mean that in the last hundred or so years we probably fought some minor wars with small nations in the region, but that's probably not quite what you're looking for.
Nah, I got the part with tanks sorts of covered.
Avalia and few other nations also seems to have quite advanced vehicles in general which could motivate me to start upgrading my military, too.
As for air combat, I have a cold war like situation with Umbraisis. Among others that nation has elves and we periodically fight in the skies. So the arms race is there, too.

Still, if any nation had a war in their recent history or other important events, then say so.
It'd help me and others a lot to make their stories fit more organically with the RP.

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I do not have tanks...
I see.
Given your mecha-horses I thinkmaybe you can add a heavier walker unit to fill out that role.
Either that or just rely on your air power.
Your gyrocopters are almost a nightmare to WW2 era tanks.

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The PRK primarily relies on their naval power (since they have very few land borders, and those are the nations they are friendliest with). We have one of the most powerful navies in the world with radar and sonar systems installed on every ship and amphibious landing craft akin to Higgins boats, but our propulsion systems are all still coal-based. Our air force and land military are mediocre at best.
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Well, as you can see with the various colonies the elven navy is also considerable.
Albeit my ships are neglected in comparison to my air force and their primary duty is to escort transports.
They tend to be rather light in comparison to ironclads or other classic ships of the line.
All my ships have runaway pads to allow some types of aircraft to take off from them, though.
And there are motherships with their entire deck designed to launch aircraft.

The PRK primarily relies on their naval power (since they have very few land borders, and those are the nations they are friendliest with). We have one of the most powerful navies in the world with radar and sonar systems installed on every ship and amphibious landing craft akin to Higgins boats, but our propulsion systems are all still coal-based. Our air force and land military are mediocre at best.
The fastest jet fighter in the entire WW2 was powered by burning coal.


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Well, as you can see with the various colonies the elven navy is also considerable.
Albeit my ships are neglected in comparison to my air force and their primary duty is to escort transports.
They tend to be rather light in comparison to ironclads or other classic ships of the line.
All my ships have runaway pads to allow some types of aircraft to take off from them, though.
And there are motherships with their entire deck designed to launch aircraft.

<Snipped quote by Mihndar>The fastest jet fighter in the entire WW2 was powered by burning coal.


Fair enough. Hence why it's not that much of a weakness
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