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Oh nice, looks good! :D
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Alrighty I'll start working on it. My plan is to make an elvish/Rohan/Dothraki kind of kingdom...plus I have to finish another CS before I work this one.
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I hope that my CS is ok. Let me know if anything needs to be changed.
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And as much as I want to finish this sheet tonight... I really just can't. I'm already half asleep and I seem to have troubles writing sensible already. -__-' Well will have to finish tomorrow. So I'm gona post the WIP here so I can continue it later.



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I hope that my CS is ok. Let me know if anything needs to be changed.


I read it and found myself intrigued by the history section. The planet guiding him through the world. And a forest village near a Fay Mau will be fun to see some time, as well as visit locations of this characters history. As for the geomancer class you've got much more you can do and your current resume build is only a small portion of that potential since magic of the earth does a lot of things. In fact you're much closer to the patrons than the summoners of Navire.

Oh quick warning, don't touch Nethicite.

And as much as I want to finish this sheet tonight... I really just can't. I'm already half asleep and I seem to have troubles writing sensible already. -__-' Well will have to finish tomorrow. So I'm gona post the WIP here so I can continue it later.



Hmm I'd like to see the culture of this character's home. I understand it's still WIP here so I won't go in on current details.
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Nice character sheet! And I too like the idea of being guided by the planet itself! Who cares about the gods when you have the planet itself to guide you!

edit: nightshift almost over... Im almost asleep Q_Q... as for the culture and what not, I will be writing them after I get some sleep when I get home in a few hours.
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I'm having difficulty coming up with my abilities...I guess its trying to incorporate the chocobo into everything any thoughts?
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You are basically gona be a cavalry, so have cavalry ideas. Like have a dash attack of sorts for better dmg with let's say lance. Also chocobos are supposed to be also good jumpers, so you can incorporate that too.
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I'm having difficulty coming up with my abilities...I guess its trying to incorporate the chocobo into everything any thoughts?


Chocobo knights have lances besides your abilities are in speed and that powerful moment of impact as a strike with the lance. You've got tactics at your disposal instead of a large array of tools and weapons, that being said it's not easy coming up with ideas beyond Strike. So here's some suggestions.

Stun: While riding the chocobo you are able to use the ability "Feather Daze Dash" which is like sonic rush from Kingdom Hearts 1. When you hit a foe with this move it stuns them as your quick speed will have them in a daze. Sure it has damage but it's focused on confusing a foe.

Defense: While riding the chocoho you are able to use the ability "Dodge and Duck" which is a tactic where you alter your behavior, making movements more subtle instead of proclaiming your courageous motions for your enemy to predict, in a sense you wait for the foe to strike, analyze your environment then use the speed you posses as a tool to out maneuver foes, sometimes able to counter attacks.

Disable: While wielding the Lance you can impact a foe, or part of their clothing to a surface such as a wall to get them pinned down. Short sweet and simple until you reveal the "Finisher Deluxe" which consists of your chocobo moving real quick then slamming on that lance in the case that it's sticking in a foe's shoulder or stomach perhaps. Yeah it consists of mostly damage but the start if that Disabling Pin Down.

Enabler: Your chocobo releases some magic, casting Hastaga on the party while simultaneously casting Slowaga on foes. Sure it does both disabling and enabling but the primary feature here is the Hastage for your party.

Skill: military tactics, military survivalism, um experience in the wild, traveler's knowledge of geography, map making, biology, ranching, what ever makes sense for the character.

Now "strike" looks like the boring part of your character.

Edit: thank Fate/Zero for being a cool and inspiring action battle anime when it's not earning that rated MA with detestable characters.
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xD nicely done@SiliconColt, nicely done!
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The class I'm creating is actually called the cavalier. So basically that's what I'm doing...so far my kingdom is one large city surrounded by nomadic tribes of shamans and breeders. The main focus is centered around the chocobo and trading. At the moment I'm working on my actual character but writing down ideas for the kingdom as I go.
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@archangel89 surrounded by grasslands where a mount is like a rocket with a saddle? That's like their perfect environment but at the same time there's a distinct weakness against stealthy foes as well as tactical combat so the battle fields are always filled with the obstacles people create and that's how terms of war are dictated, but I have no clue if shamans and breeders are capable of such hate beyond minor land and territory disputes as well as some animal rights. SO tell me, who is this patron and how does it select rulers in this kingdom of rocket birds?
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O.o...wow thanks a lot you actually helped a lot. I think I'm gonna piggyback your ideas (a little cheap I know but how could I not with such inspirations lol)
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The patron I have in mind is actually a mysterious chocobo said to be wise beyond all measure, able to speak the common tongue. He commands the tribes to send their most worthiest members to his mountain so that he may test them.
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The embodiment of wisdom, a chocobo? I didn't see that coming when I came up with Patrons. And then there's also this trend among the current Patrons...

First let me regather the current Patrons.

Navire:
Unnamed. An embodiment of Nothing, so far it ruler choice is nothing but a lottery for the unborn. Its form and gender are unknown to even its chosen ruler. With powers that are sub par, a kingdom of just refuge, what prideful form could this Patron take and what true gifts will it manifest for its people who've learned nothing but to carve their own destinies on the roots of the tree of life?

Caelum:
Sigilyph. A powerful giver of inspiration and power one would be making an understatement that she is among the most dominant patrons in the world with a people that are alike her, courageous and creative. This deity rules with pride unlike many others, with worship and glory given in daily ritual. What kingdom possesses more harmony than this kingdom with the bond between this Patron and her people?

Unnamed:
Unnamed. The most wise of all, the sage Patron who bears the form of a Chocobo, tests its people in its presence. Creatures of similar form used as tools, what does that say about the Patron and the Chocobo? What must the wisest of all Patrons need to see in her people for its one ruler? Perhaps it needs to see itself within the ruler. After all the searching the wisest one is the wisest without equal. So why is it that there can only be second best in a place where the top place must be fought over by champions.

as you can see one pattern has appeared, subtel but no less important.

All patrons have wings whether they go used or not each has wings.
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But it's not just any chocobo...its the Chubby Chocobo
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I freaking love the chubby chocobo XD I ride that mount in FFXIV ARR all the time.
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Very much interested in this. I havr a great character in my head and he will be a Ranger type. Will be from a different Kingdom however, because i always play a humans and fancy a change.... you're still accepting?
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okey here is an unedited version of hte final thing:


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