Dude, I just wanna rip her guts. Honestly, don't we all?

Everyone wants a piece of the yandere action. Then we realize she's holding our guts.

@Shikaru@TheDarkTemplar Both of your new characters are approved.

@Animus Are character signups still open?

@Crimson Raven
Animus is still accepting new characters

Name: Kelsier
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Appearance: Kelsier is very tall at 6'9" and change. He very muscular and weighs 250 pounds without his armor. His eyes change color depending on the light, from a light gray to a black with a red tint.





Kingdom: He holds no allegence to crown or god.

Persona: Kelsier is calm and cool, even under pressure. He has a decent sence of humor and doesn't mind jokes directed at him. His loyalty is unqustionable, if you are able to win it. He has a code of honor known only to him, though he will set it aside for a comrade. He is very intelligent and those that underestimate him are in for a world of hurt. He is easygoing until it becomes time to fight, then his personality shifts and he becomes emotionless, focused, and quiet. His manners often seem 'old-fashioned' and he is extramely chivalrous, however he sees no problem with women fighting. He pays attention to small details and he is very thorough, and while he is hesitent to commit himself, but once he does, he sees it through to the end never giving his second best. He is facinated by guns and technology, almost as if he has never seen them before...



Equipment: His sword, Silver is capable of charging its blade with one of three elements, fire, ice, and electricity. (This is the sword's power, not his own.) His armor, Shadowlight is a powerful suit of armor that he can summon and dismiss at will, it isn't ordanary armor, a portion of his soul is bound in it. It is nearly indestructable, yet is quite light and alows for decent mobility. He also is wearing a a gold ring set with a large diamond that has a symbol carved into its facet.

Ability/Magic/Technology: When he fights he prefers to be up and personal. He is a skilled swordsman. He tires less quickly than normal. For reasons he does not explain he does not need to eat, drink, or sleep.

His magic specalty is temporal magic, which is very complicated and he is still trying to understand and master it. Most of his magic, he uses to enhance his physical combat.

Equip: He summons his armor on himself.

Telekentic Slash: This alows him to cut something from far away.The amount of energy this takes is proportional to the distace. Kelsier likes to use it to catch an opponent off guard.

Time bubble: He can create a bubble of changed time, once the bubble is up, it cannot move and one it goes down, it takes thirty seconds before he can put up another. The size and duration depends on the type. He has two types of bubbles: quicktime, which compresses time in a five foot range he can make a couple of seconds last a minute. From inside everything around it seems to move very slowly, this is moderatly draining. Slowtime is the oppisite it expands time making a second inside a minute outside. The size can go up to a small room and it doesn't take much energy.

Prescience: His most powerful ability. When activated he can see a few moments into the future. His mind is also enhanced to deal with all of the information. In combat this alows him to see what is about to happan and react to it. This ability burns through energy very quickly and he cannot use any other magic while it is active.

Haste: He speeds the rate of time on the target, making the target faster, not just physicaly but mentaly too.

Paradox: This skill rewinds time back up to a minute. It takes all the energy he has, so after using it he is completly exausted, but with it he can go back and change what just happend.

I'm not Animus, but just to put in my two cents on your character, he sounds really, really, really strong. Characters in this RP are supposed to be kinda OP but he sounds a bit too OP. Between the facts that his armor is indestructible but light, he has super human strength/speed/stamina, he's a swordsmen with 'almost no equal', he does not need to eat/drink/sleep, and on top of that he has some magic he sounds a bit too strong to me.

Anyone remember what type of currency this RP uses?

Dicks?

@Diggerton Yet there are characters who can destroy towns with little effort, raise armies of undead, or cause an earthquake. Yeash, OP is an understatment (I'm not insulting anyone's characters). A note that might not seem clear, he can get exausted it just takes longer and he restores his energy by doing nothing. Plus the not needing to eat, drink, or sleep is explanable and part of the character. Also, note I said almost indesructable and his skill with a sword is balanced by his lack of offencive magic, i.e. light someone up with a massive fireball.

Now to thing of an introduction for Spirit :> Any ideas guyz?

I'm just gunna say that the Paradox ability will probably be shut down fast. That's too much because your basically controlling the RP with that. Prescience would only work if you either got the ok from everyone on what would happen or if you made the visions vague as hell. That's for his magic, as for skills to say he is a sword fighter with almost no equal is kind of making seem like your measuring dicks here. No one is trying to be the best which is why (if I remember correctly) no one has put that their character is the best at anything they are just skilled. While yeah the magic that some characters have is op it's not controlling of the battlefield, most of the spells have th potential to fail or miss the target but yours kind of requires you to control the RP. All in all, Kelsier is almost inhuman with the amount of control he has over everything and it kind of makes it boring to have a character that has such an easy time doing things. Makes every other character seem useless in comparison.

Edit:That's just my two cents...

Now to thing of an introduction for Spirit :> Any ideas guyz?

make a collab with someone else so that ur character can integrate easier

Hmm... two and two make four, maybe if two other people put in their two cents in with my two cents, I will have a dime to make people stop on... haha sorry bad joke.
I understand about Paradox, I thought that myself when I made it but the oppertunity was too good to miss and I put it in on the off-chance it would be accepted. As for his sword skills I guess the wording was kinda bad. I will go back and edit it. Thank you for your honest opinions. Oh, yeah one more thing about the time bubble, he can only form it around himself, and anything thrown or fired or cast out of the border is deflected to an unpredictable angle.

...so I guess that my concern of Amadeus' underage drinking will go unheard? Also, I get the feeling that he's gonna become Gilgamesh with all the weapon collecting.

...so I guess that my concern of Amadeus' underage drinking will go unheard? Also, I get the feeling that he's gonna become Gilgamesh with all the weapon collecting.

I'm guessing the drinking age is like 18 ish right? Isn't this kinda supposed to be mid evil? Also, he drinks to be polite

Wait... Medieval times with guns and cannons? What kinds of guns and cannons? Muskets? Revolvers? Nine pounders? Fifteen pounders?

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I'm guessing the drinking age is like 18 ish right? Isn't this kinda supposed to be mid evil? Also, he drinks to be polite

Sure... *pictures a drunk Amadeus*

Wait... Medieval times with guns and cannons? What kinds of guns and cannons? Muskets? Revolvers? Nine pounders? Fifteen pounders?

Yep, pretty much. The most advanced we have is a stone age version of a gatling gun.

Anybody else reminded of the mage from Hunter x Hunter when thinking of Ama?

Havin some serious writers block..