Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Kafka Komedy
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Yeah, yeah. That works. We don't have many "debuffers" yet. If that makes any sense. Besides, she doesn't look like the kind of person to intentionally hurt someone.
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Okay cool. We got our tank, our ranged, a ganker, some DOT and now a reliable debuffer. Now all we need is the DM!

Edit: Oh! And I planned on having Alex pick up a few easily concealable weapons to go along with his stealth.
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Who's the DOT?
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I dunno. I was bust throwing out terms.
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I feel bad for Iced, gonna come back to three pages of banter and CSes.
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Well, since the DM's not gonna be here for a few days, the only thing I can do here is improve my character. Anything coming to mind for you guys? More weaknesses? Remove some powers? See any spelling or grammatical errors?
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Looks interesting
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Hm, debating on if I should join in.
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Holy crap! I just realized, 12 people have showed interest! And 5, including myself, have already posted characters. Ice's gonna have a heart attack when they get back.
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I think I'm gonna make my character kind of a hippy dippy vegan, so the use of her powers will be at odds with her ideals.
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I was thinking, would it be too far to give Alex like a stealth weapon? Like something that could blend with him?
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As long as it wasn't an insta kill. Like Just a dagger or something.
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Still Work in Progress, but how's that?
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As a concept, she's good. She'd bounce decently well off Alex and Jude, the goody two shoes to their cowardly criminal and depressed, angry live wire, respectively. You need to describe the bubbles a bit more, obviously. More backstory stuff too.

Overall, needs work like you said, but a good base.
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Maybe have Alex carry a garrote. Doesn't need to camo with him, it'd just be small enough to escape most people's notice.
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Are the weaknesses good enough or should I add something?
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Eh, I feel like a garrote is a bit too far. I mean, he's a jerk and a punk, but he's not the kind to strangle someone to death. I like Kafka's idea of a dagger.
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Are the weaknesses good enough or should I add something?


Well, I'd like you to describe the ability a bit more. How far can the bubbles go? How fast are they? Do they explode into stickiness on contact, can you remote detonate them? I'd need to know all that first. Place you limits on that, before placing limiters on the character.
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I thnk I might give a much more in-depth backstory just cause we have the time lol, just try to tighten up Jordan a bit.
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I want to join, but it seems like you's be overflowings with peoples >_<
Still, I'll keep my eye on it so hard, gurrl.

...or something. :T
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