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@Phantomlink959 update done
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Just did an overhaul on Jetstream's Description to anyone interested.
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Went ahead and added Cinis's sheet to team NoCTuRne

@KiltmanBagz just let me know if you want to mAke any changes to her.
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Just pure curiosity while I type Tamn up, when you said she's not like a stereotypical wolf character, what is a stereotypical wolf character like?

Also I'm assuming that for Faunus things like ears work like they would for the animal they originated from, right? Basically I'm asking if Tamn's wolf ears can hear like a real wolf's would. Otherwise I might as well have given her a tail for all the good it does.
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I would assume that her wolf ears would hear just like a real wolf, as Blake's cat ears obviously give her better hearing when she hears Ruby and Weiss on the Nevermore...all the way up in the sky. They'd probably act just like a wolf's ears too, with swiveling and perking up at sounds and laying flat backwards.

And a stereotypical wolf character...is emo, self-hating, whiny for no good reason and a loner because they feel like they 'have' to be because obviously no one likes them...even though everyone in the story thinks they're the coolest person around.
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Not sure about cannon, but that's one of the reasons I went AU, give's me a bit more freedom to work around missing info.
Anyways, yes on the animal hearing thing.
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Okay practically done typing things up, just gonna tie up a few lose ends.

First I don't really deal with heights, to me they're just meaningless numbers on the screen. So any help with how tall Tamn is would be great. :)

Second here are two differing versions of her semblance, can I get a second opinion as to which to use? Please?





both are a tad rudimentary. Will work on the one I use. :)
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Push is better, but you really should narrow down the list of uses to just the mechanism, no need to go into detail on every possible way she uses/can use it.
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I like push myself, though that might be because I really like the idea of Tamn literally skating around her enemies.
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Oh, and blank out any unused lines, if it has no passive just remove the passive line entirely
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I think we're in agreement then, I myself think push opens you up to a lot more possibilities during character growth.

As to the height I'd say 6', 6'1" is a good height if you want her tall.
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Push then. Thanks. Was kinda rushed as I got dragged out the door to help burn bramble and move wood. :)
Thanks Fox for the height. :)

I'll just neaten that up and type the last few details in.
Whee… fingers crossed I can get Tamn in tonight. :)
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Active ability's: Push is as the name suggests, the ability to push off against any solid, non moving deface or object. This can be done in short sudden bursts to act as a boost, or as one long constant push; 'levitating' the user a few inches in the air.

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@SilverWolfAngel Try

Active ability(s): creates a force that repels the user from any stationary, inorganic object
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Well that is short. And I thought I'd condensed it :)
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I'm REALLY good at being concise.
unless I'm explaining something, in which case I can ramble for pages and never quite get my point across.
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Rambling I can do, concise? not so much
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I'm suddenly doubting whether hammers are such a good idea. Everyone else seems to have something with blades, and not just our guys here.

I'm gonna leave her with hammers for now, but is there a chance that somewhere along the way Tamn replaces the hammer heads with something a bit more lethal?
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Just gotta finish up her fighting style. Can't really think coherently right now, will add in tomorrow, kay? :)


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