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Norsun uses a mace-flail with a morningstar head and I've seen plenty of characters using hammers and maces, so you're not the only one with a blunt force weapon. Though if you really wanted to change her weapons to something sharp later on, there is always the pickhammer, which would be similar in fighting style to the hammers, which would reduce her adjustment time when it comes to learning a new weapon.

Oooh. I love her weapon now that I've seen it. That's awesome.
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Hey Hey Hey, blunt force weapons are deadly as shit, those things are MADE for pounding through armor and shit, hell if a good blow to a breast plate didn't cave in your chest, there was a good chance you'd die from the armour being so bent to hell you couldn't breathe. Hammers are awesome, second only to flails :P
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I prefer the hammers, personally. If only because you can go to any hardware store and get a reasonable substitute for a warhammer.
Question is, did you draw the images for those weapons yourself?
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Alright, Silver, a few minor concerns.
1:the picture of the wolf pup is a bit superfluous, most people know what a red wolf looks like. It is cute though. that was spirit talking.
2:Just curious, did you draw the weapons? if not, please remove any weapon images that are not made for you use, I allow borrowed pictures for characters but not weapons. if they're your own work, then it's fine, though..
3:May want to clarify the class as, while a literal example of what she does, isn't really a class in and of itself. the description is a high damage per hit, low damage per second fighting style, so a fighter or barbarian class is best.
4:Other than that, she's pretty much accepted and has been assigned to team NCTR. Fox will add her shortly.
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Hey! This looks really interesting, and I was wondering if there were still slots open? If so, I can read through everything I need to and have a sheet up by tonight.
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We've still got 2 slots, one T and one R, take a look at the teams, decide which one you want to be on, and plan you character accordingly.
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The R is on NCTR and the T is on CLRT, by the way.
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Right, what she said.
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@Phantomlink959 Will do, thanks!

@SpiritedDream Thanks for the heads up!
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No problem.
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Aight Tamn is in the team.

@Mcmolly welcome, glad to have you on
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glad to PROBABLY have you on. No guarantees until we see the character.
That said, I do look forward to seeing what you come up with.
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Blah same thing, meant to have him on the forum, it's his first two posts. Your grammar Nazi is showing phantom :P

Edit: also sick, your not supposed to argue with wick people phantom
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I had not noticed the 2 posts thing.
Not arguing, replying/correcting.
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@The Fox Without Thanks, glad to be on!

@Phantomlink959 For your consideration, if anything needs to be scrapped/changed just holler!


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Well, for one, you got the confirmation question wrong. but I pretty much forgot it was even there.
Me and my Co-GM's will go over her soon as we're all on, then we'll get back to you.
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Ah damn, I'll go back over that real quick then. And awesome, thanks!
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Images.

The wolf pup and the Derivation images don't belong to me, found them with a google search. I did however get the ides of twin hammers from that picture, so thought that was acceptable.

The other four are mine, I drew them, I stuck them in photoshop, I edited and coloured them. The skeleton for Tamn isn't mine, comes from a Library book, but I can't remember which, it was on some tracing paper when I cleaned up my desk, but the hair, ears, clothes, and colour are all mine.


Other stuff:

I'll work on clarifying class now.

The thought behind changing her hammers was that with something the size of Grimm, especially with their 'face-plates', crushing skulls isn't going to be easy, and unlike those with blades she can't just lop their heads off, It takes three or four hits at least to kill things.

Oh and the wolf pup was as much for my reference as it was for yours.
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lose the derivation image. the pup, while superflous, is technically acceptable since it's not the actual symbol.
weapons were fine, just the pictures concerned me.
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@Mcmolly
Preliminary result is not looking good. Name doesn't meet CNR, she is horribly underweight, and has no combat training or experience.
you make mention of lash marks on her back, but give no explanation WHY, she wears full face coverings for SOME reason and you imply something happened to cause damage to her face, but no other mention is made throughout the sheet, and her weapon is one that requires a fair degree of skill and training that she simply doesn't have.

We're working on a more detailed look at what needs adjustment, but those are the most obvious problems.
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