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Alright. Here he is.

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Alright. Here he is.



First impression: Is that Spartacus as a Jedi? I was tempted to accept just because of the way it looked.

Then i read it and ACCEPTED it all the same.
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Finished up thanks to the helpful Nariata.

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First impression: Is that Spartacus as a Jedi? I was tempted to accept just because of the way it looked.


Oohmygosh. I... Wow. Yeah. Now that you mention it, it totally does look like him. looool.
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All well! ACCEPTED

On a side note, let me expand on what the Blackguard is (my characters faction) and what they stand for. Just so you know :)

The Blackguard are a group of force sensitives that view both sides of the force, light and dark, fundamental for balance. In fact they only view it as "the force". The most apt comparison is with the old Je'daii order (precursor to the Jedi). It is because of this they view both the Sith and the Jedi as threats to the force, and the only reason they have risen to the task of leading the CIS in the wake of the fall of the Sith is because of the massive imbalance in the force. They seek to either abolish, or eradicate, the Jedi.

Just so you know.

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Wookipedia is awesome! http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Blackguard
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Oohmygosh. I... Wow. Yeah. Now that you mention it, it totally does look like him. looool.


I guess we now know what actually happened to him in the end!
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This is still a WIP i presume?


No, they are done... Are they not good enough?

Name: Sesran Ujijutz (Darth Sion)


*Cough*

Seriously, though, if there was a relation between the characters, I'd understand, but there doesn't seem to be anything.

Also, calling it now, The Inquisitor from Rebels is going to use the same Immortality technique as Sion to come back.
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@mattmanganon lol the name was random generated
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Update on the timeline:
10 BBG:
Invasion of Naboo (Episode 1)
Sifo-Dyas contacts the Kaminoans about creating the Grand Army of the Republic.

0 ABG:
First Battle of Geonosis & the Clone Wars begins.

3 ABG:
Palpatine dies, Anakin doesn't become Darth Vader, Confederacy of Independent Systems leaders stationed on the planet Mustafar are not slaugthered by Darth Vader, the Clone Wars ultimately does not end, the Republic survives.

5 ABG:
The Confederacy of Independent Systems leaders after taking two years to consolidate their strength and rebuilding most of their power.
Confederacy of Independent Systems' fleet is on par with the Republic's in terms of numbers, and specialized ships, yet falls short in power.

Unknown ABG:
Confederacy of Independent Systems made an unlikely alliance with a faction calling themselves Blackguard.
Confederacy of Independent Systems make an alliance with the Mandalore and his Mandalorian forces.
Confederacy of Independent Systems allies with Dark Jedi.

8 ABG:
Confederacy of Independent Systems assault the capital planet of Coruscant for a second time, they capture an airfield and land three Imperator I Liberators.
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Finished writing my characters.
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@mattmanganon lol the name was random generated


Well, you may want to change it. I mean, why not something like Darth Bane, or Darth Krayt... *someone whispers in Matts ear* What do you mean those are taken?
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@mattmanganon its fine i got another one i like it better
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Alright, I'll throw my hat in the ring as a clone trooper, since we now have a good share of force users.

Name:ARF-1352 "Paladin"

Race: Human

Age: 17

Sex: Male

Affiliation: Grand Army of the Republic

Rank: Lieutenant of 1st Platoon, Bravo Company, 21st Nova Corps "Galactic Marines"

Physical Description: Distinguishes himself from his clone brothers by shaving his head bald and adorning his arms with Mandolorian tattoos. He also has a large tattoo of the Republic's Insignia on the back of his head.

Mental Description: CT-1352 was born in 31 BBY, being in the second batch of clones the Kaminoans made for the Republic. During training he was assigned to Gamma Squad, where he earned his nickname due to his skill with vibro blades. He was originally trained to be a Clone Assassin, but tests showed he did not have the fanatic loyalty needed for the role, and was transferred to Advanced Recon Force as asn Infantry Scout.

Paladin was commissioned late into the first year of the war, and put under the command of Jedi General Pong Krell as an advanced recon scout. He survived two months under the ruthless general, a feat which made him a respected veteran in his high casualty unit.

During the Battle of Umbara, he and his squad were ordered to scout out the Umbaran Capital by General Krell. The two day march to the city claimed the lives of the rest of his Squad, turning his assignment into a solo mission. He scouted out the city, placing bombs and killing Umbaran militia along the way. The intel he collected proved invaluable to General Kenobi when he began his assault on the city.

Following the betrayal and subsequent death of General Krell, Paladin was transferred to Ki Adi Mundi's command and served in the famed Galactic Marines. His skill with vibro blades proved invaluable in the close quarters combat of boarding actions.

Paladin continued serving in the Galactic Marines for a number of years, seeing action on numerous planets, most notably Mygeeto. During his time with the Marines he had risen to the rank of Captain and commanded an aggressive Vanguard company.

Following the death of Palpatine, the Republic and the Jedi realized the growing danger presented by "rogue assets". A task force was formed, combining the small numbers of Covert Ops and Clone Assassins into a new division, called Clone Sentinels. They also put out a call to volunteers for the new regiment, a call which Paladin answered.

Sentinels were tasked with huntinbg down rogue force users, clone deserters, and Separatist leaders, as well as dismantling Palpatines massive network.

Due to his rank and experience, Paladin was given command over the wetwork operations of the division. Using unconventional weapons, such as slugthrowers, flamethrowers, and vibroblades allowed the Sentinels to hunt down the dark Jedi followers of Palpatine, and even drive the Nighsisters into hiding.

Things turned sour for Paladin during his hunt for rogue Jedi Barriss Offee. After receiving intel that said Offee was on a transport vessel, Paladin ordered the craft shot down. However, examination of the crash shippeds showed Offee was never on board, and it was indeed merely a transport vessel carrying ten families to a new colony.

Following this, he requested his own court martial, but was denied due to his exlempary service. He fell into a deep depression, and grew more and more reckless during operation, constantly endangering his own life.

His descent of self-destruction was only stopped when General Ki Adi Mundi's himself confronted him and convinced him to reenlist back with the Galactic Marines. He agreed, on the condition that he be demoted to lieutenant, and be allowed to train one platoon with the new techniques he used during his time with the Sentinels.

Mundi's agreed to both requests, and Paladin has been serving under him since.

Equipment:

Specialized Maroon Marine Armor

Synthmesh Helmet

DC-17M Blaster

Custom made vibroblade, "Droid Bane"

Bandolier

Thermal Detonator (With remote Detonator)

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I'm starting to feel markedly less original now that we have a whole bunch of clone soldiers around.

Thinking about changing to either a grounded admiral, or preferably a paranoid /k/ommando who has been preparing for this invasion for years. Everyone called him crazy, but now he'll show them, with whatever the Star Wars equivalent of a surplus Mosin-Nagant and bloc armor, ready to go operate innastreets.
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I'm starting to feel markedly less original now that we have a whole bunch of clone soldiers around.
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I'd wait to see what's accepted first, but I'm getting the same vibe with my gray Jedi.
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Ok, so it seems you have forgotten somethings in these.

"When the Clone Wars broke out, she was unavailable for the assault on Geonosis. But soon after, took command of the 139th and took part in a campaign to try and take "

"Growing up, he managed to pass out of the clone training at the top of his class, due to his out of the box thinking. His most notable act was to sabotage the final test, slicing the droids before the test so that they would assist his team, rather than hinder them. He"

Need to finish your thoughts ;)







Though the pictures through me for a loop, i like the effort presented. ACCEPTED.







Alright, I'll throw my hat in the ring as a clone trooper, since we now have a good share of force users.

Name:ARF-1352 "Paladin"

Race: Human

Age: 17

Sex: Male

Affiliation: Grand Army of the Republic

Rank: Lieutenant of 1st Platoon, Bravo Company, 21st Nova Corps "Galactic Marines"

Physical Description: Distinguishes himself from his clone brothers by shaving his head bald and adorning his arms with Mandolorian tattoos. He also has a large tattoo of the Republic's Insignia on the back of his head.

Mental Description: CT-1352 was born in 31 BBY, being in the second batch of clones the Kaminoans made for the Republic. During training he was assigned to Gamma Squad, where he earned his nickname due to his skill with vibro blades. He was originally trained to be a Clone Assassin, but tests showed he did not have the fanatic loyalty needed for the role, and was transferred to Advanced Recon Force as asn Infantry Scout.

Paladin was commissioned late into the first year of the war, and put under the command of Jedi General Pong Krell as an advanced recon scout. He survived two months under the ruthless general, a feat which made him a respected veteran in his high casualty unit.

During the Battle of Umbara, he and his squad were ordered to scout out the Umbaran Capital by General Krell. The two day march to the city claimed the lives of the rest of his Squad, turning his assignment into a solo mission. He scouted out the city, placing bombs and killing Umbaran militia along the way. The intel he collected proved invaluable to General Kenobi when he began his assault on the city.

Following the betrayal and subsequent death of General Krell, Paladin was transferred to Ki Adi Mundi's command and served in the famed Galactic Marines. His skill with vibro blades proved invaluable in the close quarters combat of boarding actions.

Paladin continued serving in the Galactic Marines for a number of years, seeing action on numerous planets, most notably Mygeeto. During his time with the Marines he had risen to the rank of Captain and commanded an aggressive Vanguard company.

Following the death of Palpatine, the Republic and the Jedi realized the growing danger presented by "rogue assets". A task force was formed, combining the small numbers of Covert Ops and Clone Assassins into a new division, called Clone Sentinels. They also put out a call to volunteers for the new regiment, a call which Paladin answered.

Sentinels were tasked with huntinbg down rogue force users, clone deserters, and Separatist leaders, as well as dismantling Palpatines massive network.

Due to his rank and experience, Paladin was given command over the wetwork operations of the division. Using unconventional weapons, such as slugthrowers, flamethrowers, and vibroblades allowed the Sentinels to hunt down the dark Jedi followers of Palpatine, and even drive the Nighsisters into hiding.

Things turned sour for Paladin during his hunt for rogue Jedi Barriss Offee. After receiving intel that said Offee was on a transport vessel, Paladin ordered the craft shot down. However, examination of the crash shippeds showed Offee was never on board, and it was indeed merely a transport vessel carrying ten families to a new colony.

Following this, he requested his own court martial, but was denied due to his exlempary service. He fell into a deep depression, and grew more and more reckless during operation, constantly endangering his own life.

His descent of self-destruction was only stopped when General Ki Adi Mundi's himself confronted him and convinced him to reenlist back with the Galactic Marines. He agreed, on the condition that he be demoted to lieutenant, and be allowed to train one platoon with the new techniques he used during his time with the Sentinels.

Mundi's agreed to both requests, and Paladin has been serving under him since.

Equipment:

Specialized Maroon Marine Armor

Synthmesh Helmet

DC-17M Blaster

Custom made vibroblade, "Droid Bane"

Bandolier

Thermal Detonator (With remote Detonator)


Simple but to the point. ACCEPTED.
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I'm starting to feel markedly less original now that we have a whole bunch of clone soldiers around.

Thinking about changing to either a grounded admiral, or preferably a paranoid /k/ommando who has been preparing for this invasion for years. Everyone called him crazy, but now he'll show them, with whatever the Star Wars equivalent of a surplus Mosin-Nagant and bloc armor, ready to go operate innastreets.


While I enjoy having other clones, that concept sounds pretty hilarious. Maybe the bowcaster would be a good substitute for the mosin?

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I'd wait to see what's accepted first, but I'm getting the same vibe with my gray Jedi.


I think your character is fine, but if you want to stand out more, maybe make him a Teleepo Paladin, or even a gray paladin.
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@Ronin

Those guys are a little too radical, though I appreciate the suggestion. Gray Jedi themselves are supposed to be kind of uncommon, I wasn't counting on any more. Let alone with similar combat styles, lol. I've got a couple ideas of my own that will set him apart without changing a thing, but we'll see how it goes.
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Oh man a bowcaster would be SO PERFECT. I am also thinking he has stocked up on solid projectile weapons to kill force users [since bullets go about twenty times the speed of blaster bolts, according to the internet], and his next-level channer degeneracy lets him do the jedi-hunter emotion-projection thing. Oh man now I totally want to play this character, though to make him have any meaning at all in the larger story he is going to have to be a stone cold motherfucker.
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