Phew, that post got a bit wordy there. I think I've acknowledged most everything I needed to, but I was having a bit of a hard time trying to fit in what she was saying in the different time slots of conversations taking place... if that makes any sense.

@Penultimate_Pi
What is with the nod at the end? Is she mocking the poor girl?

@Ariamis Ha, now, you see what I mean with the misunderstandings thing!

No, but you know that thing where two people lock eyes and one of them does a quick little backwards nod (I can't think of any better a thing to call it, it's just a twitch back of the head) and it's supposed to show acknowledgement or silent agreement? That's what I was trying to do.

Pretty much what Lora's saying there is "I like that idea" or "I'll take you up on that offer". Something like that.

@Penultimate_Pi
I see, not catching that was stupid of me. Still, the true meanings behind subtle motions like that are harder to notice in text form if they aren't explicit or detailed.

I wanted to apologize for not getting the changes done even after a couple of 'days'... I was suddenly interrupted by what is known as nondescript life business and had to put it off, but on the chance it's not too late I'm actually finishing it up now.

Second post, hoping it's good too.

Welp, looks like even the Frame specs are common knowledge now, despite what I've previously said. No matter though, at least there's deep thinking about them.

Apparently the others have spies leaking the sensitive fram information back to the cadets.

My apologies, that part had slipped my mind to be honest. The whole internal monologue on the post can be chopped, honestly, instead of having it there.

Lels, we're butchering what you sort of had planned, aren't we Ariamis? Sorry, heheh.

@VKAllen
Pilot's age needs to be between 14 and 16. But I gotta say, the field procurement is an interesting addition.

Are you going to allow that to happen or would you like me to change the character's age?

@LHG100No plan survives first contact I guess.

@VKAllen
If you could change it so it's in line with the others, thank you.

@LHG100
Like I said, it's not that big of a deal. People are still going to be surprised by the weapons and tactics once they see them in battle, even if they've read about e'm, so I'm content. Also, I love the big brother thing Koehler has going for him.

@Ariamis So we know about each other's frames?

@Elitestpotato
Sure, it's too much of a hassle to say otherwise at this point.

Crap, sorry. I hadn't noticed that was something you were not initially allowing.

Name: Mai "Seven" Twilight

Appearance:

Age: 16

Personality: Most times, stoic and android-like persona. She rarely talks without sounding like a drone or she lacks emotions. Most likely due to how she was raised and trained. She does talk when addressed or if she deems it necessary to speak.

Motive to live: Unknown

Background: Mai's background is rather mysterious but is considered one of the best up and coming pilots in the Frameworks Project divisions. Much of Mai's background is either unknown or considered classified but the story that's going around about her is that she was one of several "numbers" children that were trained in the early stages of the Frameworks Project when some thought that human emotions were a hinderance against the Cruxi. As such, Mai's personality may have come from the perhaps extreme training but some rumors say that the children were pushed to such extreme's that it was deemed inhumaine even for military standards. Hence why that Frameworks division was disbanded and Mai was transfered to Framework Project XJ9 division.

The goal was to help Mai with synenergy and teamwork with other squads but due to her personality, has trouble doing so. Thus the reason for the transfer amonst other reasons just metioned. Whether anything about Mai "Seven" Twilight is true, though, is another matter. A good pilot and mechanic.

Notable Deaths: Unknown

Other things: As stated, Mai was apart of a disbanded Frameworks division. What became of the other children is unknown but due to her perfect health and training, she was deemed worthy for Framework Project XJ9. But much is not known of her. Motive to live, Notable Deaths and Personal history are classified and only known by higher-ups of the Framework divisions.

Framework Code Name: Setsuka (Model ID code: R-1)

Appearance:

Signature Weapon System: Telekenetic System - Perhaps the most unique of the current Frameworks is to tap into the "energy" that comes from the syncho rate to weild energy amplified by this system. From the frameworks mecha hands, it can then fire it like beams. It can even keep the energy itself stored into the hands to either create "energy based" weapons like swords out of pure energy or simply increase it's punching power. However, this puts a ton of mental strain on it's pilot. If the pilot loses control, his/her synchro rate drops faster than usual along with losing this combat system since the synchro rate must be high enough to produce energy (60% or higher for low output. 80% or higher for higher outputs). Anything below 60% won't produce enough energy to weild. There's also a rumor that this combat system is actually stolen technology from the Cruxi modded for human Framework pilots and Mai is it's first test pilot.

Secondary Weapon System: On it's hips are a pair of mech-sized Magnum Pistols. Each holding 8 shots, the name itself implies high powered shots capable of penetrating high grade armor. However, accurracy becomes an issue past mid range and limited ammo capacity means "spray and pray" isn't an option. A good weapons set for taking out slow but heavy armored targets.

Armor Type: Medium

Special Ability: ???

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Annnnd I just ripped off SRW -____-'. Honestly, trying to B.S. some high tech healing gun to auto-heal framework was harder than to explain the T-Link system for this RP....gah. I'm sorry but it seems I'm just holding myself and others up here. I guess I need help with this.

Though another idea I also had is that Mai is a framework tester and she's assigned frameworks/mech's based on mission objectives or simply testing old or new models but I'm sure syncho rates would drop because of this no matter how good the pilot. At this point, just tossing around idea's with this profile.

@VKAllen
If you could change it so it's in line with the others, thank you.

@LHG100
Like I said, it's not that big of a deal. People are still going to be surprised by the weapons and tactics once they see them in battle, even if they've read about e'm, so I'm content. Also, I love the big brother thing Koehler has going for him.

Done. Although I might tweak the background a little bit later...

@VKAllen
The age rule is not something I'm going to bend with. Drop two years from the sheet.

@DarkRecon
Drop the barrier/shield use for the energy manipulation.

@VKAllen
The age rule is not something I'm going to bend with. Drop two years from the sheet.

@DarkRecon
Drop the barrier/shield use for the energy manipulation.

I think there was a miscommunication and misinformation between us.

Either way, I'll fix it soon.