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Sixsmith said
Shhh. Shhhh. It's okay. It'll all work out.>:3


I sense taboo things brewing. I liek taboo things.
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Indeed. Also, is my character okay?
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Sixsmith said
Shhh. Shhhh. It's okay. It'll all work out.>:3


You're plotting something o_o

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Indeed. Also, is my character okay?


There's nothing necessarily wrong with it, but I would love it if you could add more :3
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I sense taboo things brewing. I liek taboo things.


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You're plotting something o_oThere's nothing necessarily wrong with it, but I would love it if you could add more :3


Oh, you guys have no idea. >:3

But, uh... I was getting lazy and remembered I had made Hayden partially in a PiratePad for critique from Fallout and Ex. Piratepad has been down for a whole month now, though. T_T So, it's all... all gone... for now. And I actually have to write stuff. QQ
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Sixsmith said
Oh, you guys have no idea. >:3But, uh... I was getting lazy and remembered I had made Hayden partially in a PiratePad for critique from Fallout and Ex. Piratepad has been down for a whole month now, though. T_T So, it's all... all gone... for now. And I actually have to write stuff. QQ


TFW. I had to do that with one character, but in the end, he improved because of it a bit.
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Oh, you guys have no idea. >:3But, uh... I was getting lazy and remembered I had made Hayden partially in a PiratePad for critique from Fallout and Ex. Piratepad has been down for a whole month now, though. T_T So, it's all... all gone... for now. And I actually have to write stuff. QQ


OH that's why it's not loading! You could still ask them for critique though!
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TFW. I had to do that with one character, but in the end, he improved because of it a bit.


Yeah, rewriting helps further establish what you want that character to be. I'm doing that now for Flynn, but Hayden is harder because he was very structured around the situation brought upon the RP I had initially created him for. I actually do that with a lot of characters, making them very hard to implement in other RPs without totally scrapping their concept and making a new person using their appearance and maybe personality traits. That removes me from the character because they lose what makes them... them. But, it's not impossible to totally reconstruct a character while keeping their core concept in tact. It makes it easier with Mizuho using Acacia and Brenden, mainly because those two kind of helped to shape him, mainly Brenden. But Brenden and Hayden had a prior established engagement, which I don't want for this RP 'cause I want to explore them actually falling in love in the first place.

I'm still doing Flynn's history, but it's coming to me. Hayden's will be a bit harder to structure and fit right, which is partially why I'm taking so long with Flynn. I wanna see how Mizuho establishes Acacia in this RP.

Which is was my devious plan. Or part of it, at least. I have such loose lips. QQ

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OH that's why it's not loading! You could still ask them for critique though!


Oh, no, the critique thing was for when I was making him for Blue Blood. =P

EDIT: I'm also tempted to make three teachers. Mwuaha.

Why? Because it's very difficult to get teachers in these RPs and I love the idea of playing them. I'm already a student and I was semi-popular in high school, despite my shyness (I got around in the least sexual way possible and the most platonic way imaginable; I was just extremely approachable and genuinely friendly and people tend to respond well to someone who makes you laugh [with, not at]), so playing a student is 50/50 for me. I'd have to have something really interesting in mind for that.
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Okay, speaking of Acacia, I have her posted in the second post of this roleplay thread. It's kind of bad, since it's just a rough draft at this point, and Acacia's CS was one of the only CSs I didn't have saved x_x And as far as my CSs go, it's kind short, so I'll probably be adding more detail later.

I have Brenden's CS saved, so I'll be tweaking that tomorrow so it'll fit in with Caelbury. Speaking of which, Hae, you should help me tweak Brenden because I'm not quite sure what to do.
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You're not too late, but like I told geminironin, It's not bad, but I would love more detail.
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Mizuho said
Okay, speaking of Acacia, I have her posted in the second post of this roleplay thread. It's kind of bad, since it's just a rough draft at this point, and Acacia's CS was one of the only CSs I didn't have saved x_x And as far as my CSs go, it's kind short, so I'll probably be adding more detail later. I have Brenden's CS saved, so I'll be tweaking that tomorrow so it'll fit in with Caelbury. Speaking of which, Hae, you should help me tweak Brenden because I'm not quite sure what to do.


I can attempt to do so. I'll PM you the Titanpad Fallout, Dread, Lia, and I have been using. We were planning on starting PH again, but Ex is supar busy-cakes and Lily is a very, very integral part of that plotline. QQ
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Mizuho said
You're not too late, but like I told geminironin, It's not bad, but I would love more detail.


Any specific things you'd like to see?
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I can attempt to do so. I'll PM you the Titanpad Fallout, Dread, Lia, and I have been using. We were planning on starting PH again, but Ex is supar busy-cakes and Lily is a very, very integral part of that plotline. QQ


I think I've heard as much as humanely possible about that without actually being told a single thing about it XD
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Any specific things you'd like to see?


Oh, not that I can tell. Like I said, it's not bad, it's actually pretty good. Maybe explore his personality a bit more?
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Mizuho said
Okay, speaking of Acacia, I have her posted in the second post of this roleplay thread. It's kind of bad, since it's just a rough draft at this point, and Acacia's CS was one of the only CSs I didn't have saved x_x And as far as my CSs go, it's kind short, so I'll probably be adding more detail later. I have Brenden's CS saved, so I'll be tweaking that tomorrow so it'll fit in with Caelbury. Speaking of which, Hae, you should help me tweak Brenden because I'm not quite sure what to do.


That...CS....is short? Dear christ...I think Jacob's is the longest I've made for a character so far...
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Would it be fair to say that if my character tested a high IQ and speaks multiple languages, but doesn't apply himself and gets low grades, he would be a Commoner?
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Would it be fair to say that if my character tested a high IQ and speaks multiple languages, but doesn't apply himself and gets low grades, he would be a Commoner?


Hmmm... Interesting. I wouldn't see why not, because the definition of a commoner is technically getting into the school via lottery. (I'll add in more info about this later) as long as your character doesn't do anything to gain attention from Caelbury, I'd say that's valid.
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McEulo said
Would it be fair to say that if my character tested a high IQ and speaks multiple languages, but doesn't apply himself and gets low grades, he would be a Commoner?


Mizuho said
Hmmm... Interesting. I wouldn't see why not, because the definition of a commoner is technically getting into the school via lottery. (I'll add in more info about this later) as long as your character doesn't do anything to gain attention from Caelbury, I'd say that's valid.


I think test scores speak louder than actual grades.

I'd assume the school wouldn't want to pass up someone of his calibre, but also wouldn't want to threaten their own school scores and grades, so would put him on an academic probation of sorts to keep him from singlehandedly ruining their rep with one score. Like all schools, they don't really care if he's a slacker or not unless that threatens the amount of money they make and amount of reputation they an ultimately gain from it. Even if they're handing out scholarships for students who can't afford to get it, but are smarter or better at athletics than most people who are actually attending. The whole loss/gain would actually not be a problem for them if they're upping their test scores with the influx of extremely smart and brilliant minded students, even if they have to spend more money to admit them to their school, in the first place. They would gain more money from wealthy people who want to fund them because they're responsible, reliable, and don't fail to impress. They're gaining more than they're losing, which is also why it's so difficult for people who are so low on the class scale to get in in the first place.

I am treating this as if it were a real school. QQ Well, it is set in the real world, so real world logic applies, especially high-class logic.

Also, damn, Mizuho, I don't even make my personality sections that long. XD And I've written a vignette and novella for my bio/history sections before.
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I think test scores speak louder than actual grades.I'd assume the school wouldn't want to pass up someone of his calibre, but also wouldn't want to threaten their own school scores and grades, so would put him on an academic probation of sorts to keep him from singlehandedly ruining their rep with one score.Also, damn, Mizuho, I don't even make my personality sections that long. XD And I've written a vignette and novella for my bio/history sections before.


The commoner addition to the school is actually quite difficult. Like I said, they get in via lottery but.. My friend (who is apparently joining this) suggested commoners who have potential to do well, even if they're not geniuses, are entered in the lottery. And like Hae said, letting in students could potentially lower the school's standards so tricky tricky. Bleh.

And also: the personality is my favorite part to write about! I could actually add like 3 more paragraphs right now, there were some key points of Acacia that I missed. But I won't cuz I'm lazy XD
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Working on my CS, hope I'm not too late. :D
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