HAHA, the brownie points are mine!
I originally had John shivering throughout his talking, but to be honest it was annoying both to write and to read, so I took it out. You'll all have to just imagine he's shivering without the phonetics.
I originally had John shivering throughout his talking, but to be honest it was annoying both to write and to read, so I took it out. You'll all have to just imagine he's shivering without the phonetics.