@TheDarkTemplar

Are my posts alright then? Its just hard to think of something else when you wrote a question and you can't do anything else until they answer. :)

@TheDarkTemplar

Are my posts alright then? Its just hard to think of something else when you wrote a question and you can't do anything else until they answer. :)

Just gotta try to keep the post size up. If you're having any problems, try adding some character thoughts or some more detail.

{{YAY!!!! I FINALLY FINISHED DRAWING HER!! XD
Appearance:

Name: Ace

Age: 16

Eye Colors: Was originally born with blue eyes but her right eye turned red after her abilities awoke

Personality: At first she seems cold and introverted but she quickly warms up to others if given the chance. she trusts others WAY too easily. She is often straight foreword about what's going on in her mind and isn't afraid of expressing her opinion. She values and cherishes her comrades and is overall a warm and gentile person.

Type: 2

Abilities
Physical:Fire manipulation aka pyrokinesis - basically she can control the shape and size of fire (as well as making it move) and used it as a weapon. However she cannot create fire; she needs a source such as a lighter (which she happens to always carry with her). Due this ability she doesn't burn easily. For example, the amount of fire that could severely burn or even kill normal people would only leave her with minor burns.

Bio: Not much is to say about her past regarding her childhood. She lived a happy life with her parents up until the age of 10 when her abilities first awoke. At first she could only make the flame on a candle move or go out but her abilities quickly grew stronger. Ace's parents gradually caught on to her growing abilities and eventually disowned and abused her. After almost a half of a year of abuse from her parents; Ace decided run away grabbing a lighter and setting her room ablaze. Ever since that day she's been living on the streets.



Other: She ALWAYS carries a lighter or a box of matches with her where ever she goes.

Theme Song: [url=]youtube.com/watch?v=QAD0BtEv..

@Ace of flames01

Wow, that's a good drawing.

A few words:

Both eyes of a Gifted don't just change color, one changes color while the other stays normal.

And other than a lack of capitalization, and a few other slight errors(Mostly in the Post Example), it looks fine. Just might need a little polishing up.

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In the end, it's up to Dark Templar to have the final say.

@ArkmageddonCatoh ok! I didn't know that only one changes color and I have to apologize because my grammar and writing abilities aren't exactly top notch and I tend to have a bad habit of not capitalizing ^^" but i'll try to work on that...i'll fix my post real quick oh and could you tell me what error i made? i'd like to fix those bits.

@ArkmageddonCatoh ok! I didn't know that only one changes color and I have to apologize because my grammar and writing abilities aren't exactly top notch and I tend to have a bad habit of not capitalizing ^^" but i'll try to work on that...i'll fix my post real quick oh and could you tell me what error i made? i'd like to fix those bits.

As long as you want to improve, I think it'll be fine.

Other than capitalization(pet peeve), just a few spacing errors, and few grammatical errors(Aren't a huge deal).

You fixed the paragraph spacing though.

@ArkmageddonCatok ^^ thanks. English just so happens to be one of my iffy classes so (despite english being my first language) I tend to screw up sometimes...

@ArkmageddonCatok ^^ thanks. English just so happens to be one of my iffy classes so (despite english being my first language) I tend to screw up sometimes...

I understand. I'm not the best writer. I'll spend hours writing a paragraph cause I keep erasing what I've done.

@ArkmageddonCat

You guys still accepting? Btw, I like how you guys thought the rp out, gave it more meat than I did :)

@ArkmageddonCat

You guys still accepting? Btw, I like how you guys thought the rp out, gave it more meat than I did :)

Oh! Hello! Did you stumble on this? Me and Templar were thinking about contacting you but we didn't know if you'd like how we handled things...

But yeah! I should think we'll always have a spot for the OG GM!

Also, look in the "Current and Cool" section :D
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/83296-rpgn-ver-7-12-15/ooc
^All thanks to your idea^

No I like it, it's more thought out in areas :)

Is there a gender that you guys need more of?

@ArkmageddonCat

You guys still accepting? Btw, I like how you guys thought the rp out, gave it more meat than I did :)

It's the original!
*Prostrates*

I think it still is.

@ArkmageddonCat
That's awesome!

No I like it, it's more thought out in areas :)

Is there a gender that you guys need more of?

Oh, okay. Good then!

Uh...I don't know...

Be whichever, both are fine, genders are about even I believe?

IO HOY ME NOI YAYDI!

Sorry for disappearing everyone, I feel asleep and just woke up.

Welcome aboard, Ace!

Lalia! How's it going mang, of course you can join whatchu think this is?

(God that semi-coma has me feeling amazing, IM INVINCIBLE!)

Oh yeah as for gender count it's 7 girls and 9 guys(sausage fest)

Oh yeah as for gender count it's 7 girls and 9 guys(sausage fest)

Is that everyone who's actually still here?

Oh yeah I forgot...just a sec!

Ok so the only person who told me they'd be off for a while Dirty Dan. All others have disappeared so it's time to do a character kill off. Lemme she who dies in the next mod post.

Oh yeah I forgot...just a sec!

Ok so the only person who told me they'd be off for a while Dirty Dan. All others have disappeared so it's time to do a character kill off. Lemme she who dies in the next mod post.

Wait you might want to get confirmation first...

Yeah I'm looking at the most recent posts from everyone then the time since they were last on. Now to ask them.