@Thang is using the wrong rank then, unless he means 1stLt, 2ndLt, Lieutenant colonel, or lieutenant general, that should be Captain rank...
@ClocktowerEchos and you misspelled "Corporal"
and are you a regular marine or odst?
My apologies, I'm British and follow our ranks out of habbit. British Lieutenant = American 1st Lieutenant. I shall make the change.
UNSC Ranks, for those who are needing help with that part.
@Nallore I needn't say it, but: accepted, obviously :)
@ClocktowerEchos Your armour is fine, it's on the marine side of things, but it looks sufficiently tactical to me. If this were casual/advanced, I might be a little more anal about it, but in a free RP I see little point in hounding people over little details like that. <-- used "little" three times in one sentence, that's some awesome writing right there, boo yah!
Oh, and you've spelt it "Corperal". Auto spell check has caught me out with that a few times as well. It's Corporal.
@Nallore@Thang Opinions about having a Katana for my character?
I've nothing against an ODST possessing some kind of ceremonial sword, or an unofficial armament (think the marine in Aliens with the 21st century pump action shotgun :P), but as Nallore has said, it'd be pretty ineffective against Elites and above. Not to mention, you'd have to get close to the Covenant first to use it, and depending on whether or not your guy is Grey Fox from MGS, you might have a hard time taking on aliens that bear weapons capable of melting your armour and flesh in one single hit.
So long as you don't go all rambo, I've not an issue with it.
@Aliencow Hey, and welcome :)
I've got a couple of nit picky issues with your app, and they are:
1) Unless I'm mistaken, the guy is Russian, but has a Spanish name?
2) "has family history with Spetznaz" doesn't really come under appearance, move it to
Other: instead :) Also, it's Spetsnaz (I didn't know it was spelt that way until a few weeks ago) but not that it really matters.
3) "Would rather sacrifice himself for the mission instead of getting shot" sound awfully similar to me :P You mean he would rather sacrifice himself for the mission, than die pointlessly? Who wouldn't? Have a go at re-wording it, just so's I know what you're talking about; use child speech if you have to, I aint half as smart as I sound.
4) Tone your rank down. A lieutenant colonel isn't going to be found wandering around with a sniper rifle; that's more of a command position. Depending on your character's prestige as a marksman, I'd aim for Lieutenant and below. Oh, sorry, FIRST Lieutenant and below.
^ Have a crack at these for me, and let me know when you're done :) I'll be happy to accept you after they've been addressed.
Right, have I got around to everyone? Sorry if not, I'm doing this between house chores.
In any case, I think there's enough of us for the RP to start. I'll open the IC in due course.