Any suggestions for Tierra?

You've been a lot more careful about the metagaming thing, so not really much to say.

Is there anything else I could improve though, whether with writing her or that she should change as the story progresses?

I'll need to take a closer look. give me a bit to reread your mot recent posts

Try and be more social, less internal monologues more dialogue.

Cereza really does need more firepower. Her pistols are meant to be a back up weapon, and not a main weapon, since she wants to upgrade her polearm to be melee/ranged. That being said, does anyone have any suggestions? Keep in mind, at either end of the handle are counterweights - one is the computer system which controls the blade positioning and whether it is collapsed/extended, and the other is the power supply. The handle itself has cables running through from the power supply to the computer. It has a handle on the side of the computer housing.

So, any gun form can't use the shaft for the barrel, since it is already in use. But - because of her semblance, she doesn't need a trigger or manual cocking/bullet ejecting parts as that can all be done electronically. Ideas are welcome!

Everyone is asking for tips and here I am wondering if I accidentally made my oc broken.

@SpiritedDream: Have you considered allowing the weapon to use some of it's batery offensively? Like say shooting lightning?.

Vedran, no matter how broken you think your character might be, it is nowhere near as bad as one of the ones from the first attempt at this roleplay.
Basically, he was magneto. I put specific limitations I wanted the player to follow and he just kind of ignored them.

Didn’t he bring it to the oc thread where one of us pointed at Pyrrha and told him to nerf it?

I don't think so.

@VedranTheII
You said you were UTC+6, right? which one, though?
Astan, Dhaka, or Novosibirsk?

I did?....whops, my bad, It’s GMT+3

Which UTC+3 is that? Being OCD on the clocks i set for peoples timezones.

Hey

Welcome.

Alright, since it's almost time to choose, I'm giving you the list of relics so teams can discuss which they will take and which pair will take each part of the set
the sword itself is one relic,, and the sheath is the match.
Relics:
Ornate rapier with a crystaline basket hilt resembling a pair of folded bat wings and a brushed steel scabbard with faint, swirling etchings.

a battle-worn broadsword with a a simple round pommel and beaten leather sheath. The stitching is starting to fray at both ends.

well cared for scimitar with several nicks in the blade, sturdy, well-oiled leather scabbard

A slim estoc with a half-moon guard and a stylised human with four arms and four legs on the pommel. Engraved on the blade is 'From Dust We Come' in eleborate script. A dark leather sheath with symbols of the elements stitched down one side in golden thread.

simple gladius, like new and a simple hide sheath. A closer look reveals that the sheath is stained with blood.

a clean, sharp cutlass with a sea creature engraving and reinforced plastic sheath

broken katana with a rusted dragon shaped tsuba and badly damaged bamboo sheath

A talwar with intricate tribal marking etched into the blade, leather sheath stamped with the names of previous owners (this one will be gone when you arrive, taken by team BTRW)

large, springsteel cavalry sabre with sturdy kevlar sheath

A rainbowed titanium Jian with nevermore themed guard and feather tassel, bone sheath with red Grimm-like markings (this one will be taken by the racists from Fox's post as you are arriving)

Oh, and the teams will get to keep the relics after initiation, sort of like a trophy to put in their dorm.

Argent and Viola should take the Estoc, if no one has a problem with that?

Any particular reason?

I will have her mull over the rapier sheath until she notices the swirls are in the opposite direction though...otherwise she might be inclined to dissagree.