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SO these planes are a roup of what we would call individual fictions, but all sharing a theme. Like with a medieval theme all the worlds of Brave, Lord of the rings, Game of thrones, etc things like those could all exist in one plane together?
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SO these planes are a roup of what we would call individual fictions, but all sharing a theme. Like with a medieval theme all the worlds of Brave, Lord of the rings, Game of thrones, etc things like those could all exist in one plane together?


No, each Plane will be its own separate fiction, like the main KH games. I was just giving examples for a Plane Aura could have come from, with the characters medieval theme.
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Alrighty, I've got it now.

Also are we allowed to us an image of a keyblade we ourselves have not created.
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Sure! Just make sure to provide a link to the source
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Accepted, though you seem to be missing the strengths and weaknesses for Destiny's Song. I suppose you don't want any of either that's fine, it just confused me that they weren't present. Go ahead and add it to the characters section if that's the case!

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So, about Aura. She's a great basis for a character, but I think you may have misunderstood the history of Sanctuary a bit. The fall of the six other Planes of Light happened over 100 years ago, and thus she could not be around for when it happened. You could still keep this history in essence, perhaps she could be driven by the stories passed down through their family of the fall of their home.

Which brings me to my second point; Besides Sanctuary, which is meant to be an original world akin to Traverse town or Twilight town, all the other planes are meant to be based on some existing fictional universe. If you want Aura's family to come from Bravery, I'd like you to try to come up with some ideas for what Bravery will be based on. She has a medieval theme, so perhaps something like fire emblem, or final fantasy? Or perhaps something more traditionally middle ages, like Game of Thrones or Lord of the Rings.

You don't have to come up with a plane, but I would like some help ^^;

I didn't want to rail-road the universes people could draw from, but the lore I wrote up dictates that about 6/7ths of the population came from those other planes.


I mean hey I can do more with Bravery I just wasn't sure how much I had to work with so I kept it vague just as a precaution. If you want more I can give more if need be. As for Destiny's Song I must of missed that part so I'll go back and look again. I'll rework it.
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The first part was actually for iciclerapierfaize's character, not yours. Your Keyblade was fine :p

And I would appreciate it if you changed the history to reflect those changes, yes
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Oh oops on the first part and yeah will do. I've erased it right now so I'll get back to you when I'm done.
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The first part was actually for iciclerapierfaize's character, not yours. Your Keyblade was fine :p

And I would appreciate it if you changed the history to reflect those changes, yes


Added the weaknesses and strengths for the sword~ Still working on procuring images...
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Added the weaknesses and strengths for the sword~ Still working on procuring images...


Alright! Strengths and Weaknesses looks good, post it in the character sections whenever you're ready!
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All right redid the history. As for the Plain of Bravery I'll be using the world template to flesh it out. Might not see something until late tonight or tomorrow since I'm going to be mixing and matching stuff.
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I might need a bit of help getting Light into the academy for obvious reasons. Also I'm bad at intro posts in general.
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I might need a bit of help getting Light into the academy for obvious reasons. Also I'm bad at intro posts in general.


Don't post anything IC yet. I'd like to wait until we have at least a small cast before getting started. I'll work with you over PM to come up with your beginnings.
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Name: Plain of Bravery (at least where Aura comes from, unsure if this means it will represent everything within the Plain of Bravery)

Fiction: A bit of mixture between Fire Emblem, Final Fantasy, Demon's Souls/Dark Souls. I guess it would be the world something similar in style to Fire Emblem and Final Fantasy blend together (maybe even Legend of Dragoon slightly in the mixure) with a dabble of the Souls series with the whole dark beasties that lurk around that are not heartless and the whole ruins of the old cities that were destroyed those centuries ago from the fall. You know Majestic yet that dark eerie feel to them if one was to go into the ruins of old knowing that something lurks within them, be them just wild creatures or the heartless themselves. I kind of view it as that there are some cities and one major city left in the realm with small villages scattered around in open clearings while places in forested areas are avoided as best as possible which lead to the old ruins of the ancient cities that did not survive the fall and are mostly unexplored. As for creatures well range from regular cats and dogs to dragons of unspeakable power and intimidation. Some might help, others will kill on sight. A place where being a knight is a high honor as being a protector and guardian of the places where people live and go into the woods from time to time.

Reason for inclusion: Aura's Homeworld.

Well that was faster then I thought. Really kind of a high fantasy type of area to best describe it without all the evil politics like Game of Thrones (XD) and horrible diseases and illiteracy of the actual medieval era.
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Welp, took long enough, but 'ere ya go. Feel free to rip 'em to shreds. :D


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Welp, took long enough, but 'ere ya go. Feel free to rip 'em to shreds. :D



No ripping required! I love how you've written them (Unfortunately, the mages don't win :c ), and the idea of a moogle with a little stick of a keyblade is adorable to me. Accepted! Go ahead and plop him into the characters section when you're ready.

As for @Argetlam350, I think with those final changes to your history, Aura is ready to go! Add her to the characters section when you can.

As for your idea for the Plane of Bravery, I think I'm going to go with a Final Fantasy inspired world, to allow Ogobrogo's character to have ancestors there as well. Expect something in the Library for that soon :p
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Just was wondering if you could quick look at mine so far. I have o get his history up and maybe one other thing. I just want some feedback
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Hello! I'd like to throw in a WIP, if that's alright. I'll have it done tonight. :)



As for the world, I'll fill in the sheet later, but I was thinking the Plane of Knowledge could be a Big Hero 6-inspired world? Essentially, a more technologically-advanced version of present Earth. It seems like it could work well.
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I like your idea for the knowledge plane. Makes sense.
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No ripping required! I love how you've written them (Unfortunately, the mages don't win :c ), and the idea of a moogle with a little stick of a keyblade is adorable to me. Accepted! Go ahead and plop him into the characters section when you're ready.

As for @Argetlam350, I think with those final changes to your history, Aura is ready to go! Add her to the characters section when you can.

As for your idea for the Plane of Bravery, I think I'm going to go with a Final Fantasy inspired world, to allow Ogobrogo's character to have ancestors there as well. Expect something in the Library for that soon :p


Woot! ^.^ Not gonna lie, I had way too much fun writing up the little guy. I'll have him moved over in a couple hours. Gotta finish up the workday and all that jazz. Copy/paste worked! Thanks for not being terrible, phone.

@Chezka oooooh, I really like this Kaz charrie! Mad scientists make everything awesome.

Oooooooooh, I don't know if it's just the digusting amount of caffeine pumping through my veins thanks to all of these energy shots, but I'm like super hyped for this RP xD
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Just was wondering if you could quick look at mine so far. I have o get his history up and maybe one other thing. I just want some feedback


It's looking good! I also noticed that the appearance is missing. So just that and the history and you'll have a ready to go character!

Hello! I'd like to throw in a WIP, if that's alright. I'll have it done tonight. :)

[Kaz Snip!]

As for the world, I'll fill in the sheet later, but I was thinking the Plane of Knowledge could be a Big Hero 6-inspired world? Essentially, a more technologically-advanced version of present Earth. It seems like it could work well.


Kaz is looking good! Just get a history up, and I'll take another look.

And that's a cool idea for the Plane of Knowledge! Definitely seems to lend itself as a world, in my opinion.

and @Ogobrogo, I'm really excited too! This is my first RP to get this sort of attention! The idea for it just sort of came on a whim, and it really took hold of me. I hope to take it great places!
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