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Skipping the... whatever the first ones thing is because I'm honestly not quite sure what you're suggesting... and focusing on the chupacubra: you're conflating several completely different ideas again. Goblins domesticate chupacubra? That's an interesting thing. Dark elf elite defences for a warm Aztec-goblin place when the dark elves are basically in Iceland? That's a logical jump.

I'm finding it hard to say much about the ideas you're proposing, because it keeps starting with a simple premise and ending up with results that have knock-on effects on major cosmological points (or are just plain confusing)
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@Raineh Daze perhaps i didn't really go into any sort of actual detail on Orthet but that it is a human kingdom the Dimverandi are Marduk's Varangian Guards
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perhaps the reason for my stuff can be confusing is the fact that i start getting anxious as i write something long and as i write something that is long i begin to think that what i wrote is becoming too long to read so i try to finish up all that i have written so far and it ends up incoherent mess where you can only get the bits and pieces of a (possibly good) idea

So sorry for not making any good post on this thread
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It would be better to go with the stupidly long version. More room for paragraphing and explaining things.

For instance, the chupacubra being with the dark elf Vikings serving an Eastern Roman Empire analogue would make less sense than it being a goblin guarddog (especially if they have a blood and guts obsession).
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Once I get hone I'll check this out and find something to vote on.

Do we want to vote on changes for a race, or do we want to do more a general rule of thing. Like good, needs improvement, needs alot of fixing, and scrap it?


i think when it comes to the races Joe i think we are just going to be doing the latter
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@Raineh Daze i had a reason why the chupacabras are The Dimverandi's hound instead of goblin's. and it was that the goblins think the chupacabra are demons of Edel Athran so goblins view chupacabras as something to be killed as soon as possible before they can corrupt Marduk. And as you can possible guess this does cause some amount tension between The Goblins and The Dimverandi (for the moment we are going to view The Dimverandi as a sub-race of Dark elves)

The goblins view the act of keeping chupacabras as Guard hounds (Or Pets due to some Dimverandi will actively sell the runts (an infant chupacabra) to Nobles) as a form of blasphemy because to them The Dimverandi are essentially keeping and breeding demons

i hope this is better
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Um... I kind of figured that the goblins would be more servants of Edel Athran honestly, what with all the blood sacrifice and all but um hmmm. ^^;

...And it'd probably be more fitting for them to have chupacabras anyways, since... Well, the chupacabra is a Mexican thing and all. Kind of strange for them to be owned by viking elves. ^^; Um hmmm...
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@Rin it was just suggestion. but i do actually have a cryptid in minds for the goblins to have as pet or such
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@Rin Its called an Ahuitzotl it is from Aztec and Mayan Mythology. Said to look like a small dog, the Ahuitzotl had streaks on its head, small ears, and a hand at the tip of it's tail. And according to legend it would submerge itself in a lake or stream and begin to wail like a small child or a frightened woman. A passerby would hear the sound and would rush to the rescue of the "helpless victim".

Upon approaching the water the victim would be strangled by the creature's infamous tail-hand and then the creature would tear out the victim's eyes, nails and teeth and eat them. It would then toss the lifeless body onto the riverbank and restart its wailing.
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You guys know what i think you guys are right so instead of Chupacabras The Dimverandi will be having Akhlut A.K.A the Seawolf for a picture just look a bit down

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Edes Athran probably doesn't have direct servants per say since it has no mind of its own. It'd be more of an indirect thing, acts of evil such as blood sacrifice and all that stuff "feed" it since it's more of a conceptual evil then a direct thing that acts on the world.

Also I think names for anything should be discussed beforehand instead of just writing them up. ^^;
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Additionally, it seems like the mention of the Varangian Guard might have confused things. That was more or less just the name given by the Eastern Roman Empire to the politically-independent mercenaries serving the Emperor directly. They happened to, initially, be derived mostly from Scandinavia--thus Vikings. With Viking dark elves and a human empire derived from the ERE, keeping that sort of dynamic would mean getting the guard of dark elves from wanderlust, desire for riches, or whatever, and having them serve as politically neutral soldiers--possibly moreso, due to lifespan differences between humans and elves. Not a separate subspecies.
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@Billsomething (In Shagga's voice) There are no Goats in Pre-Colonial America.

Edit: *were

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In fact "Capra" is a Spanish loan word the Aztecs used, so I guess that is the word for "goat."
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So figured I'd post this, um. I know it's long but it's everything I have worked out for the Nem and yeah.



Also worked out some probably not great language stuff.

Also a sketch of a female Nem.
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Isn't that the etymology for chupacubra anyway?
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@BillsomethingI really like the idea of viking dark elves riding those orca-wolves for some reason.
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Not a separate subspecies.


There not an actual subspecies i said that so we could focus on The Dimverandi as separate from the dark elves of Incarva but there not

Edes Athran probably doesn't have direct servants per say since it has no mind of its own. It'd be more of an indirect thing, acts of evil such as blood sacrifice and all that stuff "feed" it since it's more of a conceptual evil then a direct thing that acts on the world.

Also I think names for anything should be discussed beforehand instead of just writing them up. ^^;


I understand but what wrote is that the goblins believed them to be the servants of Edes also the names Like Incarva, Orthet, Arzula these are just temporary names i am using to simplify things
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Also i think you Discworld fans would love this Fauna its called a Zaratan there a species of turtles known for there gigantic size and docile behavior (pictured below)
as you can see above me they are the size of an small island (actually can you call that island) When a Zaratan get hungry, it opens its mouth wide and releases a sweet smell. Fish are attracted to the odor and swim in, when its mouth is full it snaps its jaws shut. There found all around Marduk.
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Also i think you Discworld fans would love this Fauna its called a Zaratan there a species of turtles known for there gigantic size and docile behavior (pictured below)
as you can see above me they are the size of an small island (actually can you call that island) When a Zaratan get hungry, it opens its mouth wide and releases a sweet smell. Fish are attracted to the odor and swim in, when its mouth is full it snaps its jaws shut. There found all around Marduk.


They seem more like they'd be a tropical thing really. ...Also I want one. D:

Anyways... Anyone brave enough to try and make a list of all the ideas for races mentioned thus far? ^^;
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