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@Prince Rivera Yep yep we are c:
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Okay awesome! I'm making my character now, I just have a few questions

First, unique Kekkai Genkai are allowed yes? I always like making my own :)

Second, is there a rank that I should make? How are all the character interacting should I be a chunin? A genin? A jounin? Just curious, maybe it doesn't matter idk I'm dumb nevermind.

And lastly, if I could just get a summery of what's going on IC? That would be awesome, thanks!
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@Prince Rivera As long as you don't have a carbon copy of magic eyes, all is good.

If you want a summary I'll gladly give you one once you've applied. If you're worried about integration, there's no worry, we can easily place you once you've been approved. It's usually done through skype and we establish a safe route for you to enter without interrupting anything.
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I'm kinda tired so there might be some problems with this but I will definitely fix anything you need fixing!


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@Prince Rivera

I'll take a look when I am back from school.
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Still looking for fresh meat?
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@Yorutenchi Yes newcomers are always welcome!
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Alright. I will start up on a CS tomorrow morning. Got to sleep now its pushing three am here.
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@Yorutenchi Aye I'll review you when you're done. Unlike Vuur who has 4 day long classes (in his defense Sota didn't really appear since.)
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Sorry I am working on it slowly but I didn't get it done in time for work. I might have some free time later tonight when work dies down. If not I will finish it when I get home. Its between two character types right now.
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The RP seems to be in a sort of downtime kind of thing right now, as lots of people suddenly had things pop up. A result of school, I'm sure. As such however you're free to take the time to work on it. We'll not rush you and I think I can even squeeze you into a mission if you finish it soonish..
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Review is in red!


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- Fixed the eye and hair description.

- Every female will be a lesbian? Hmm. At least 50/50 here for her. Depends on the characters and interactions.

- Crimson Tempest a more unique name?

- Yes. Twaz round 4:30 in the morning when I made that error.

- Explained more in depth how she got the position as well as humorous jabs and lame jokes.

- To clarify. She can only ever use her own blood for Chiton. She cannot simply "summon" blood as she could water for water jutsu. If she needs more blood she has to spend the chakra to create enhanced replication of blood cells.

- To clarify her blood drinking. She has to drink directly from the body vampire style. She cannot control blood that is not hers. If someone was bleeding all over the floor she couldn't do anything with it. She cannot command the blood of others to "come to her" or obsorb blood back into her body in any way other than drinking it.

- Laten charka regained has to do with how powerful the person was. To totally replenish her chakra she would need to drink a person of equal power totally dry while still alive. If she were to drink the blood of a kage it would be proportional to the power they have. Again it would have to be taken from the body or very very very very freshly spilt. Not normally done in combat ever. But if one was to fight a team of people she could consume their blood after the fight to replenish for the next fight. But it is doubtful she could do anything during the midst of combat.

- I have edited some of the techniques and changed some of the ranks. The only A rank will be the blood clones. The bloody mist technique I will make a B but she cannot simply form weapons out of anywhere. It would only be around her. But instead of having to create more blood or pull it from her own body she can use the blood in the air.

- On her regeneration she cannot recover her regular organs with the exception of skin and vessels any faster than normal shinobi. Muscle tissue, tendons, skin, vessels and the heart she is able to recover quickly. A stab wound in the heart would probably kill you....no matter who you are. The heart she is able to regenerate and protect to a degree but if you impale someone the typically die. I didn't mean to make it sound like she could just "boop" new heart* or anything.

I noticed I still have some Jutsu room so I will consider adding more in the future but I will run them by you before I do.
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-I actually meant a description like most CS' but w/e, it's actually not important at all lol.

-It's a joke because almost all female characters are bi or lesbian and we have two lesbo couples already.

-How about Red Dick?

-k

-Gin was an ambassador? Thought he was too much of a pussy really. Well w/e see with Fallen about that one. As for the position in itself, isn't it a pretty serious position given to people of trust? One would think her lineage would make it easier through some form of nepotism operating in the shadows.

-Okay so just her speshul AB- special snowflake blood. Alright

-Okay so tediously slow drinking away

-Seems legit

-Obito, Madara and Sasuke would disagree. Okay sure, that seems balanced enough.

Just deal with the ambassador shit to make her, you know, LEGIT.
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However even this was not enough. It took an intervention from an elder who knew of her mother and more importantly her father. He begged the question of her potential rather than her current ability. He also seemed to owe a favor to her father. With his action helping her here it relieved his soul of the burden of that debt. She still has no idea what the debt is or why it was the elder helped her get this position. It also didn't hurt that she has been shuttled back and forth to Konoha on several occasions throughout her life. The argument for this was that she could help bridge the cultural gap between the two villages. The argument against it was that it threw her loyalty to the mist into question. However after much deliberation it was ruled that the time of peace between the two villages would allow for someone with such strong ties to be trusted with ambassador duties. However they were going to keep a close eye on her.


- added part.
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Seems legit, all gud, nao post in the char bin with a cool title and join us for some skyping so we can have you started with some relevant shit.
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I've only seen the first Naruto show, so I'm not that familiar with them, but I was thinking of playing a kind of super villain who uses Shadow possession, Shadow clones, maybe the rasengan or chidori, and his byakugan to basically be an assassin and exploit non-shinobi. He could also walk on walls and water, of course, as well as disguise himself as others, maybe even using other illusions, but his primary method of attack against shinobi would be disrupting their chakra with martial arts or making them kill themselves.

I assume he'd have to at least be a chunin for those moves, though.
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