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@ClocktowerEchos Ok edit him to be a metahuman with finite measurements on his physical abilities and you should be good
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@AdjectivesYo, I think you messed up and/or seriously lagged out there mate

Also, takinga quick look at your CS, I think while we can have super powers and stuff, we can't be an accented being. Also, the portal thing seems unbalanced at best and why would he use a fighting style that requires him to open hundreds of them that hurt him? It seems like he's playing portal russian roulette.
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He isn't really enlightened. Just sort of. To the point he can pop around and spread words of nonsense and wisdom. It wouldn't dramatically steer the direction of the story. :) I put his race as an enlightened being more because that is what he considers himself and because he is unlikely to fit into any category as he is technically alien.
Why is it unbalanced? Maybe hundreds was a high estimation, but he moves around very quickly in battle so he would use lots of portals.
He has no enhanced physique, so he wouldn't be taking on armies or anything.
His ability to move between dimensions is rooted in his character because he is a nomad from a magical world. He is on Earth
to help protect humanity, but that means helping it help itself. Rather than opening pan dimensional portals for everyone which would affect the storyline negatively, his purpose is to support other characters, to guide.. blah dee blah.

I hope that helped.

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Finally! it took me a while longer than I'd expected to get these two done. Please let me know if they need overhauling or tweaking in any way:





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He isn't really enlightened. Just sort of. To the point he can pop around and spread words of nonsense and wisdom. It wouldn't dramatically steer the direction of the story. :) I put his race as an enlightened being more because that is what he considers himself and because he is unlikely to fit into any category as he is technically alien.
Why is it unbalanced? Maybe hundreds was a high estimation, but he moves around very quickly in battle so he would use lots of portals.
He has no enhanced physique, so he wouldn't be taking on armies or anything.
His ability to move between dimensions is rooted in his character because he is a nomad from a magical world. He is on Earth
to help protect humanity, but that means helping it help itself. Rather than opening pan dimensional portals for everyone which would affect the storyline negatively, his purpose is to support other characters, to guide.. blah dee blah.

I hope that helped.


Again, last I checked this was a human and human variants only, I don't think alien nomads are allowed. My point of the portal remains though, why is he using a fighting style which can weaken him and cause him to die? If he used like a special move it'd make more sense but as a primary way of fighting, not really. Hell, it seems that your entire character is dependent on the portal for anything really. Of course that's assuming the portal thing is accepted anyways.

Also, his bio and his personality go against what was originally said in the OP. Our characters are meant to be flawed and imperfect, its said that we can't be the saintliest heroic good guys or villainous horrible bad guys and it seems like your character is undoubtedly the first kind.

Something else too, why does an alien look like an ethnically Thai human?

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@ClocktowerEchos Okay DaVinci's good, he's accepted you can put him in

@shaitarn Both of them look great, both accepted, go ahead and move them to the character tab.

We have enough to get started, I'll have my first post by tomorrow at the latest

@Adjectives Clocktower has it right, I allow human or nonhuman characters as long as they have a place in folklore or myth. Pan-dimensional aliens are beyond the scope of the roleplay. The whole thing about traversing universes is way beyond what PCs should be capable of. It's perfectly valid if you want to play someone from a mythic race but I don't like PCs with no initiative of their own. He's basically just there for no reason in particular with no goals or motivations besides being helpful. And yeah his power doesn't really make much sense.

You're welcome in of course, you just need other ideas or a heavily revised one.

@Athinar@Leviathan@gaudi When do you think you guys can be finished?
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@MrDidactSo when will we be starting?
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@shaitarn could steel please report to the archive Isaac will have work for him :p

But seriously i'd like to get Isaac and nick started as close associates. Both metalworkers of some sort lots of ideas there. Isaacs database of designs infinite possibilities there.

But do whatever you feel.

@MrDidact writing up jack now. Death magic user. Also US army medic. Felt it was a good ironic combo.
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@MrDidactPretty soon.
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@MrDidact I think I'm going to sit this one out, though I really like the world you've created and everything like that. In general, I don't like playing with other characters that are over-powered which is the general trend among the characters I've seen.
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@gaudiSorry. I tend to write form the perspective of:

I can write the biggest best strongest protagonist ever, but the bad guys can always be bigger than that. I do hope we hit that point that these guys seem strong now, but are still struggling to handle the wasteland still.
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@gaudi I don't see how my character is OP. She's just really strong, and nigh invulnerable to blunt trauma. Stabbing and cutting still work.

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@jasonwolf@Athinar I don't mean to offend either of you and I'm not referring to any specific character. Hopefully we can play together in later RPs. :)
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@jasonwolf Nick would be fine with that; it's nice to have someone you can talk shop with!
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@gaudicertainly not offended to each their own. I just was stating my views on over powered characters. I mean Jack is pushing boundaries for me even since his power can be increased infinitely by absorbing souls, but I'm sticking VERY heavily to that moral code with him.

But I mean I stared RP when I was like twelve and back then I didn't know about balance or mary sues, and my first character was literally the son of hades and the most OP mary sue of all time. As I wrote him more I constantly was cutting him back making him a better character, but even now his ultimate strengths let him raise armies of the dead and he's still the best mortal archer alive beating out children of Apollo the god of archery, because that adds some flavor. he's not normal he's weird and has traits that probably shouldn't fit together but like real people they do. It's like how I love some really good heavy metal, but my favorite song ever is Jason Mraz "Remedy".

If anything I hope this RP proves that these characters are less powerful than we think. Really put us into that mindset of superhumans who are suddenly scraping by.
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