@FlynnThat's fine, and since he is mostly mechanical I will not make the age detrimental to his physical attributes in any way. Glad you understnad! your character is now accepted.

For each ability on the Machina side, is the knowledge of manufacturing each of our items used inclusive? It would be rather skewed in favor of Magica if we didn't comprehensively know how each of our items worked.

Also, can these abilities be permanent augments for Bio-Machinae?

@Desire Huzzah! I will do so!

I'm diggin' it.

@Desire
I removed the two and added a new ability. I was too lazy to put in two abilities to explain each other's combination with each other so I put them into a single one.

So, what do ya think?

@BytheSpleen Yes we do get the knowledge in the side of the Machina, and the Bio abilities can be permanent as long as they are listed in the abilities.

@hagroden Cathluts seem a little, robotic, to me? For Magica summoning it has to be nature related, cannot have any man-made qualities.

Also with summoning, cortex in it's natural state is useless to machines unless refined. With Magica, you cannot summon the refined version. That's the rule of Magica... That and it'd grant an unlimited power source at a moment's notice and that would be kinf of OP.

Everything else looks fine

@Urbanliner Two things:

One, I'm not allowing any Machina and Magica abilities together, they are separate. At a later date, possibly, but starting out they must be separate. That means, you have to find new abilities for your first two.

And neutrals get 4, 2 Machina, 2 Magica, so you actually left one out! So keep a fire manipulation, give me another Magica and two Machina and we are good to go.

@Urbanliner Two things:

One, I'm not allowing any Machina and Magica abilities together, they are separate. At a later date, possibly, but starting out they must be separate. That means, you have to find new abilities for your first two.

And neutrals get 4, 2 Machina, 2 Magica, so you actually left one out! So keep a fire manipulation, give me another Magica and two Machina and we are good to go.

Oh, okay. Gave her two separate abilities. I did have another Machina but nerfed that anyway just in case.

@UrbanlinerEverything looks fine besides the sword creation. If it's a Machina skill, then you'd have to physically craft these swords (although it wouldn't take overly long because of the advanced technology). You won't be able to magically poof a sword from your ass if you have an ingot. But if you plan on physically crafting a sword from metal and not magically, but using some form of technology, I'll accept it.

Done.

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Name: Uojak E. Skothzar

Age: 39

Appearance: Uojak stands at a fairly tall height of 5'11", with a decent build to match. A stubble wraps around his lower face, thickening at the sides and around the mouth. His irises are a dull grayish blue. Cheek and tear troughs are noticeably defined. Uojak's brown, tousled hair, just like most men, is plainly short. He is of a Caucasian complexion. His torso bears some scars, noticeably one near his chest when his heart was almost impaled in combat.
(RPer note: He'll be my first experiment on drawing men.)

However, seeing how he wears his bulky mechanical armor often, these features are not much seen.


Race: Machina

Affiliation: 7

Specialization: Mecha-Machina

Abilities: All of these abilities are under his armor's capabilities. The Peacekeeper, his personal suit, weighs as much as a morbidly obese man on its own and requires internal mechanisms to support Uojak's movements. Even with this function, the Peacekeeper is just as agile as a turtle. However, it is durable enough to withstand a heavy beating, at least not on the vulnerable parts such as its Cortex core in the chest... or directly to the face. A tube is available on the mask for breathing purposes, but it can also be used for eating and drinking when detached from the air supply.
Gatling Gun - 10mm caliber, 5,000 rounds per minute.
Cannon - 3 inch diameter round, 1 round every 2.1 seconds.
Saws - Retractable, concealed within arms. Half a meter in length.

(Just some personal addition.)Personality
Brought on by his service to the Machs, Uojak has developed a bit of a nature for conflict. It would mostly seem that he is loyal to his nation judging from his occupation, but in fact he doesn't really care that much about his race. As long as he gets paid, he is willing to partake in an operation to slaughter an entire village community (theoretically) for gold. Even then, Uojak's not very hardworking, so recently he's putting military work on hold to take a rest, relax and improve his suit.

He can be a wisecracker at times, making remarks that may be occasionally found rude. This is especially after having booze.

(Also this.)Background
In over 20 years of service to the Machs, Uojak had undergone plenty of risky missions and had endangered his own life several times. He had been mostly raised by his father, an alcoholic soldier, while his mother disappeared when he was three. It wasn't until Uojak was 11 when it was discovered that the mother didn't die or run away from abuse, but rather to have an affair.

Despite what it seems when one has an alcoholic soldier as a dad, Uojak went along well with him, but he inherited some undesirable manners such as his desire for beer, his view of conflict as a business, and some other things. Eventually after his father's retirement, Uojak began following in his footsteps, made his own suit, and served in the military of the Machs.

Recently, Uojak began a 1-year break on military work to relax and tweak the Peacekeeper.

@UrbanlinerEverything looks fine besides the sword creation. If it's a Machina skill, then you'd have to physically craft these swords (although it wouldn't take overly long because of the advanced technology). You won't be able to magically poof a sword from your ass if you have an ingot. But if you plan on physically crafting a sword from metal and not magically, but using some form of technology, I'll accept it.

@UrbanlinerEverything looks fine besides the sword creation. If it's a Machina skill, then you'd have to physically craft these swords (although it wouldn't take overly long because of the advanced technology). You won't be able to magically poof a sword from your ass if you have an ingot. But if you plan on physically crafting a sword from metal and not magically, but using some form of technology, I'll accept it.

Thanks, clarified it is a crafting-based skill. What do you think about being able to make one sword in a hour and thirty minutes with little input from the character using it, though?

@UrbanlinerThat's perfectly fine, I'll say normal swords you can make relatively fast (Maybe five minutes) but any specialty sword takes longer depending on the power of it.

@Unfortunately I see nothing wrong with it, I give it my seal of approval!

Alright everybody please post their accepted character into the character list so I can get a head count as see if we can get this thing going. If you still need my approval, feel free to post OOC or PM me. Questions, comments, concerns, delusions, dilemmas, anything, I'm here!

Here we are. @Desire

Yo @Desire what about my fellow?