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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Kurisa
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Okay so to quick get this done all that really needs to be done is the cooldowns, they need to be upped a bit.

Shikai Skills

1. Having no cool down on this skill could be a problem and usually simple skills like this have at least a 2 post cool down which is what I suggest.

2. For this skill I'd say it needs to be upped to 3 post cool down

3. For this one I'd say a 4 post cool down.

Bankai Skills

1. Like the first Shikai skill this one needs a cool down and due to it being able to home in I'd say it has a multiple choice cool down. 3 posts cool down if firing one, 4 post cool down if firing two or a 5 post cool down if firing 3.

2. For this one I'd say a 5 post cool down

3. For this I'd say 4 post cool down...but that is entirely dependent on if he fires all 3 or just 1

4. I think this needs some form of duration so I'd say a 10 post duration and then a 15 post cool down with a chance of being used twice per battle.

5. For this I'd say a 3 post cooldown

6. I'd say this just has a one time use seeing as it can only be used whilst the 4th skill is active.

Also just a note. Remember this is an Alternate Universe so nothing from Past RP's or Canon really exists here...or more people wise it doesn't.
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*sigh* Its been so long since I've seen bleach that I have forgotten...just about everything about the world. Sadly, its making my CS take a stupid amount of time to complete but I will hopefully have something for you to at least look at here in a little bit. Also, as a small warning, I am somewhat atrocious at coming up with attack names XD
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*sigh* Its been so long since I've seen bleach that I have forgotten...just about everything about the world. Sadly, its making my CS take a stupid amount of time to complete but I will hopefully have something for you to at least look at here in a little bit. Also, as a small warning, I am somewhat atrocious at coming up with attack names XD


No worries I just make them stupid or punny.
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*sigh* Its been so long since I've seen bleach that I have forgotten...just about everything about the world. Sadly, its making my CS take a stupid amount of time to complete but I will hopefully have something for you to at least look at here in a little bit. Also, as a small warning, I am somewhat atrocious at coming up with attack names XD


Or make them literal.
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I'm not dead or gone, by the way. Character's on the way soon.

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Ah I'm no good with names so don't worry about it xD

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In the process of doing it now. Me and Phobos are just making sure we are agreeing with what we got...
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Ah I'm no good with names so don't worry about it xD

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In the process of doing it now. Me and Phobos are just making sure we are agreeing with what we got...


Give it to me straight, I dont mind constructive criticism, in fact I like feedback, since it helps me improve.
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It's more a case of fitting a few things in and just coming up with fair cool downs. The core skills really shouldn't have to be changed to be honest so don't worry, this Zanpakuto will work. I want to try get this sorted and approved so you can get to RPing
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THE DUMPLING LOVING PRINCE OF FLAMES RETURNS~~
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@Vongola_Hasayo Assuming this is yo CS done then I'd say accepted seeing as there isn't a Shikai or anything to check over xD
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@Kurisa Well I didn't want to reveal my shikai before it was achieved in the IC but I guess I already spoiled it with my enthusiastic announcement...that's right everyone my zanpakutou grants me THE ALMIGHTY POWER OF DUMPLINGS!! Tremble before me xD
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@Vongola_Hasayo That's fine, will be interesting to see just how powerful this...<.< dumpling Zanpakuto it >.>
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@Kurisa Well I didn't want to reveal my shikai before it was achieved in the IC but I guess I already spoiled it with my enthusiastic announcement...that's right everyone my zanpakutou grants me THE ALMIGHTY POWER OF DUMPLINGS!! Tremble before me xD


*reads*

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*reads again*

...All right.
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<Snipped quote by Vongola_Hasayo>

*reads*

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*reads again*

...All right.


Your apathy will be your downfall
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<Snipped quote by Crimson Raven>

Your apathy will be your downfall


Araris: How do you like your dumplings? Frozen or Burnt?
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@KurisaDon't worry about the old 'people' they're there for his history purposes. They will not come into play. Also, all edits are done per suggestion.
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It's very quiet.
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<bumpity bump bump, bumpity bump bump>
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@KillBox just need to change Bankai skill 1's cool down a touch, think you made a tiny error as you put three post cool down for firing both one or two xD firing two is meant to give a 4 post cool down but once you changed that he's accepted
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