[OOC] Bleach: Soul Extinction (Reboot)

[Kurisa]

@KillBox

Okay so to quick get this done all that really needs to be done is the cooldowns, they need to be upped a bit.

Shikai Skills

1. Having no cool down on this skill could be a problem and usually simple skills like this have at least a 2 post cool down which is what I suggest.

2. For this skill I'd say it needs to be upped to 3 post cool down

3. For this one I'd say a 4 post cool down.

Bankai Skills

1. Like the first Shikai skill this one needs a cool down and due to it being able to home in I'd say it has a multiple choice cool down. 3 posts cool down if firing one, 4 post cool down if firing two or a 5 post cool down if firing 3.

2. For this one I'd say a 5 post cool down

3. For this I'd say 4 post cool down...but that is entirely dependent on if he fires all 3 or just 1

4. I think this needs some form of duration so I'd say a 10 post duration and then a 15 post cool down with a chance of being used twice per battle.

5. For this I'd say a 3 post cooldown

6. I'd say this just has a one time use seeing as it can only be used whilst the 4th skill is active.

Also just a note. Remember this is an Alternate Universe so nothing from Past RP's or Canon really exists here...or more people wise it doesn't.

[ChaoticLaw]

*sigh* Its been so long since I've seen bleach that I have forgotten...just about everything about the world. Sadly, its making my CS take a stupid amount of time to complete but I will hopefully have something for you to at least look at here in a little bit. Also, as a small warning, I am somewhat atrocious at coming up with attack names XD

[Oblivion666]

*sigh* Its been so long since I've seen bleach that I have forgotten...just about everything about the world. Sadly, its making my CS take a stupid amount of time to complete but I will hopefully have something for you to at least look at here in a little bit. Also, as a small warning, I am somewhat atrocious at coming up with attack names XD

@ChaoticLaw

No worries I just make them stupid or punny.

[Crimson Raven]

*sigh* Its been so long since I've seen bleach that I have forgotten...just about everything about the world. Sadly, its making my CS take a stupid amount of time to complete but I will hopefully have something for you to at least look at here in a little bit. Also, as a small warning, I am somewhat atrocious at coming up with attack names XD

@ChaoticLaw

Or make them literal.

[Cinderella Man]

I'm not dead or gone, by the way. Character's on the way soon.

*dives majestically back into the Internet ocean*

[Crimson Raven]

@Kurisa

*Waits patiently for you to review my character sheet.*

[Kurisa]

@ChaoticLaw

Ah I'm no good with names so don't worry about it xD

@Crimson Raven

In the process of doing it now. Me and Phobos are just making sure we are agreeing with what we got...

[Crimson Raven]

@ChaoticLaw

Ah I'm no good with names so don't worry about it xD

@Crimson Raven

In the process of doing it now. Me and Phobos are just making sure we are agreeing with what we got...

@Kurisa

Give it to me straight, I dont mind constructive criticism, in fact I like feedback, since it helps me improve.

[Kurisa]

@Crimson Raven

It's more a case of fitting a few things in and just coming up with fair cool downs. The core skills really shouldn't have to be changed to be honest so don't worry, this Zanpakuto will work. I want to try get this sorted and approved so you can get to RPing

[Vongola_Hasayo]

Hasayo Shiroga

Hasayo Shiroga

Age::
17

Gender::
Male

Height::
5' 8"

Weight::
137 lbs

Hair Colour::
Red

Eye Colour::
Emerald Green

Birthday::
January 8

Clan/Family::
n/a

Race::
Soul

Profession::
Shinigami

Rank::
Squad 6, 6th Seat

Power Level::
Seated

Spiritual Energy Colour::
Red w/ hints of White

Personality::
To be added.

History::
To be added.

Relationships/Friendships/Rivalries/Siblings::
Asami Shiroga, 25 - Sister; Deceased
Meowmel - A strange cat that Hasayo took in after joining Squad 6

Other::
| Hasayo has a obssession perfectly healthy love of dumplings. If ever someone was looking for him the first place they should check is the closest restaurant that sells his favorite snack.
| His most treasured possession is his sister's pocket knife. Hasayo never goes anywhere without it.

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto Name::
Unknown

Type::
Unknown

Zanpakuto Shikai Release Command::
Unknown

Zanpakuto Bankai Release Command::
Unknown

Spirit Appearance::
Unknown

Inner World::

Inner World

Sealed Appearance::
Kusanagi; the sheath and hilt are white with a red stripe down the middle.

Shikai Appearance::
Unknown

Bankai Appearance::
Unknown

Shikai Skills::

Bankai Skills::

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills::

~Skills~

Zanjutsu::
Hasayo is a naturally gifted swordsman. He feels more comfortable with a blade in his hand than without. While his instincts as a swordsman are impressive on their own, it's Hasayo's dedication to improving and his innovative swordplay that truly make him stand out.

Hozuki
Shitonegaeshi
Ryodan

Kido::
Hasayo's use of kido takes a more supportive role to his other strengths. That said he is average in this area but the way he utilizes kido in combat is unique and compliments his instinctive fighting style.

Hado

#1 Sho
#4 Byakurai
#32 Okasen
#33 Sokatsui

Bakudo

#8 Seki
#9 Horin
#30 Shitotsu Sansen

Hakuda::
Hasayo can hold his own in hand-to-hand combat but he neglects training in hakuda to focus on zanjutsu. While he knows he should probably dedicate some time to this, he believes the instances where he finds himself without his sword will be few and far between.

Tsukiyubi

Hoho::
Hasayo is very mobile in combat so he trains his agility and reflexes quite often in order to keep up with the fastest of a opponents.

Shunpo

Mission/Point Log

Total points gained: (This lists the total amount of points you have gained from missions etc. only goes up, never down)
Total Points Spent: (Here you list how many of your total earned points you've spent)
Mission log: (List here any training, Sparring or missions you have done and how many points you earned)
Points spent and skills gained: (Here you list what your points were spent on)

THE DUMPLING LOVING PRINCE OF FLAMES RETURNS~~

[Kurisa]

@Vongola_Hasayo Assuming this is yo CS done then I'd say accepted seeing as there isn't a Shikai or anything to check over xD

[Vongola_Hasayo]

@Kurisa Well I didn't want to reveal my shikai before it was achieved in the IC but I guess I already spoiled it with my enthusiastic announcement...that's right everyone my zanpakutou grants me THE ALMIGHTY POWER OF DUMPLINGS!! Tremble before me xD

[Kurisa]

@Vongola_Hasayo That's fine, will be interesting to see just how powerful this...<.< dumpling Zanpakuto it >.>

[Crimson Raven]

@Kurisa Well I didn't want to reveal my shikai before it was achieved in the IC but I guess I already spoiled it with my enthusiastic announcement...that's right everyone my zanpakutou grants me THE ALMIGHTY POWER OF DUMPLINGS!! Tremble before me xD

@Vongola_Hasayo

*reads*

*blinks*

*reads again*

...All right.

[Vongola_Hasayo]

<Snipped quote by Vongola_Hasayo>

*reads*

*blinks*

*reads again*

...All right.

@Crimson Raven

Your apathy will be your downfall

[Crimson Raven]

<Snipped quote by Crimson Raven>

Your apathy will be your downfall

@Vongola_Hasayo

Araris: How do you like your dumplings? Frozen or Burnt?

[Infinite Cosmos]

@KurisaDon't worry about the old 'people' they're there for his history purposes. They will not come into play. Also, all edits are done per suggestion.

[Remram]

It's very quiet.

[Crimson Raven]

<bumpity bump bump, bumpity bump bump>

[Kurisa]

@KillBox just need to change Bankai skill 1's cool down a touch, think you made a tiny error as you put three post cool down for firing both one or two xD firing two is meant to give a 4 post cool down but once you changed that he's accepted