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@boomlover You never said he was a hired killer, his profile makes him out to be an emotionally damaged drifter with nothing to lose, not a trained killer. One slave rampage does not an assassin make. Also I'd be real fucking surprised if he gets hired after headbutting his prospective employer.
Also your post is rife with errors. Like it's actually difficult to read at parts.
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@RhineQueen dangit dangit. I fed up but in my defence about the headbut. If i rember correctly Flynn said that a The gm wanted a barfight.
And the way he wrote levi he was like waitng for it.
and im fixing the spelling now.
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@Desire Ok Hired killer wrote that because i had mentioned in my first ic post That my chara had bein doing jobs. Some of them where killing people some of them where fixing stuff. And as for why he is very smart? as a small child he was already fixing stuff and inventing things.
I think im screwing up royal and i apologize for that.
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I WAS TOLD THERE WILL BE PLANES!!!!!!


I am on it sir! U am currently busy drawing the world map IRL and doing some vehicle categorization. So there will be. For gun you will all get crappy ones from me, and as we scavenge you will all get parts for them or even new ones. But I call dibs on the lever action rifle!
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@Flynn I hate to be that guy right now. But as i remember correctly there was gonna be a second thread? Also The gm did not want more than 5 people. I was able to get in though because im lucky. And cute cat eyes.


You bastard! You told my one weakness! You wont get a revolver after this! U get a makarov( and ni giant fucking lake either XD)

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And lastly sorry guys for making Flynn do my post! I am seriously so busy IRL that I only have time to apologise. I hipe I can get something up this weekend, and actually have time next week. Till then I will use my breaks in school to sketch some airships and a world map. Some basic lore. And no there won't be a second thread, I am already too busy to reply to any other post than this and my 1x1 with Flynn. Oh and @boomlover stop writing to me on Skype saying "GET YOUR ASS OVER THE THREAD" I always think shit hit the fan. So guys keep him at bay XD
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@6slyboy6 Also User. Can he join, yay or nay?
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@Flynn If he can think up a character or a role that won't make this any more clusterfucked then yes. If not, then I am sorry, but a secind thread is impossible ( at least for now)
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@boomlover
I just reread Crafty's backstory and you're basically describing an entirely different person. If he was a natural tinkerer, fine, fair enough. But he lived in a poor town so wouldn't have had much of any formal education, so he would be knowledgeable about certain things, but not just smart in general.
After that though, everything falls right apart. So he was captured by merciless slavers and forced into a labour camp. He would not at all get strong because no slaver in their right mind would feed the slaves enough for them to build up any serious muscle mass. Look up 'slave labour camp.' Everyone in those photos is malnourished and overworked.
So then everyone around him dies because reasons, but Crafty survives, also because reasons. So then one night, they forget to lock up Crafty's cage, fine, people make mistakes sometimes. But then Crafty breaks out all the other people, who you previously said are dying because reasons, with no keys, lockpicks or anything. So let's chock that one up to his natural craftiness, fair enough.
Then the malnourished, overworked, dying of mysterious causes slaved just straight up murder every merciless, armed, trained slaver there with no weapons. Because reasons.
So given all that ridiculous shit, Crafty is left emotionally dead and actually suicidal. That is probably the most reasonable thing about him. It would be totally understandable for a physically exhausted and emotionally damaged ex-slave with nothing else left to seek the sweet release of death, but then he wanders into the wastes, that are hot enough to kill a man in less than an hour by what @6slyboy6 has said. That should have been the end of his story, but instead he survives because reasons.
Then the master of the slavers, who by your timeline was killed along with everyone in the miracle slave massacre puts a "huge" bounty on his head and pays several well trained men to hunt one single, easily replaceable slave worker, (say it with me, everyone) because reasons. So Crafty "fled from town to town trying to dodge them.However it all proved to be futile." Your wording here makes it sound like the bounty hunters caught up to him. Meaning that again, he should have reasonably been killed. But you don't expand on that any further so I have nothing else to go off of there.

So in conclusion, either the Crafty you described in your CS is a totally different person, or, as I'm more inclined to believe, you just didn't think anything through and are now trying to make excuses when being confronted on your borderline Mary Sue character.
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@RhineQueen sadly agreeing with you. I will rework my character. And i realize that he is way to op. So im gonna try to fix it.
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@RhineQueen *Goes to find a freezer to compensate for the lack of chill*
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@boomlover
I'm glad that this could be resolved swiftly. I would also suggest very strongly that you reread your posts and check for spelling, grammar, and continuity errors BEFORE posting. That little bit of effort will make things easier on everone.
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@RhineQueen One thing i leanred from rping. If ya want to keep it alive always listen to the guy who knows his shit.
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@RhineQueen Thank you that you're the one pointing it (and also in a good manner). I'm terrible at these things.
@boomlover And it's good that you agree so willingly. Also good that you're reworking your character. If you need help send me a PM. If you're done with the reworked version, send it my way as well (or Slyboy). Then we'll work out any clinks if there are any.
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@boomlover
Haha~ Yeah. I'll be goddamned if I'm gonna let my creative writing degree go to waste.
Also, as I've said to you several times. I'm a chick. Always was, still am.
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Happy to help.
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@RhineQueen sorry apparently my brain thinks that everyone is a male on this site.
also we still gonna do the whole barfight thing? because since i am gonna rework my chara it might be smarter to
ignore that.
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Depends how you rework your character. What changes were you thinking of making?
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@RhineQueen diffrent history, diffrent personality and attributes but mostly the history.
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Okay well are you going to be outfitting him more as a tinkerer, or as a fighter?
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