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@Kaithas No worries-- you made it. I'm not going to be whipping out my magnifying glass or anything. It's close enough for me. :)

I have one more Earth submission from @Rinoa Rose as well that was sent to me via PM from one of her friends yesterday afternoon. Apparently she had the misfortune of having her computer stolen, so she said she'll be borrowing someone's computer to post it here some time today.
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I'd recommend getting a friend who already plays League to show you the ropes of the game. Going in blind kinda ruins the first impression, so even people who would enjoy it end up leaving because there's too much to learn at once. I'd offer, but I'm abstaining from League for a while.


@Sodium Ah- yeah. That's definitely true. I'd ask around if any of your friends play it. It's a really popular game so more likely than not someone you know probably plays. (If you're interested in trying it)


Meh, I play (and enjoy) Final Fantasy games, so I am no stranger to playing games that have a lot to take in quickly.
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Ooh, I am ever so excite.
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@Crimson Raven Ehh, I'm not sure if I'd say League is at all like FF...
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I am so sorry for the late post!! Thank you for responding to the PM and understanding about my laptop being stolen. I'm borrowing a friend's so I hope this is alright until I figure this out. Sorry again for this major inconvenience. Thanks for being so understanding. Sorry, had to rewrite it so the ending is choppy but if it's alright, I would love a chance to rewrite it after I take my exam due at midnight tonight. Thanks again!

Name: Petra Ducrat

Element: Earth/Stone

Age: 18 years of age

Race: Unfortunately Human….sorry

Gender: Female

Nature/Appearance: Petra is a sturdy young woman who knows the meaning of hard work. You wouldn’t guess by her curvy, feminine figure but beneath the usual dark pants and oversized shirts she normally wears, her body holds a surprising amount of strength and power.

She normally ties her shoulder length nut brown hair back into a bun to keep it out of her eyes. Her mud brown eyes are normally intent and focused on the task in front of her. Her determination can be seen through her strong frame in her 5'8 body. Most people who see her assume she wouldn’t understand “adult work” but little do they know that she gained that comprehension at a very young age.

Backstory: Petra was born and raised in Diedremere where her family had resided for several generations. Her father and brother kept food on the table, quite literally, with their hunting skills and by selling the extra meat to the local butcher. Petra would spend the day with her mother, feeding the miners who worked so diligently from dusk to dawn. She had always enjoyed hearing the stories the miners shared, barely allowing them to finish their story before shooting another question their way.

Petra couldn’t quite describe why she felt so drawn to the miners and their stories but aside from her family, that was the only strong bond she had in her life. The clearest and closest bond she had was the one she shared with her twin brother. These two were practically inseparable and would occasionally tease their parents by dressing like the other. With Petra’s shoulder length hair and the same deep brown eyes, their only differentiating factor was their gender. Their identical freckles and bright smiles were the outward features that reflected their playful spirits. They would occasionally display their playful nature by running around by the base of the mountain and seeing how far the other could climb. Little did they know, how much they were playing with fate.

On the day of her and her brother’s birthday, the Ducat family deciding to climb the mountain near their home and celebrate the birth of these two special children. As Petra and her family set off for the mountain, she couldn’t help shake this eerie feeling. The skies were clear and the breeze was light so she hiked alongside her family, up the mountain to where they would have their picnic. The day was as close to perfect as it possibly could have been….until they began their trek home.

They were coming around the final pass before the descent into their village when the mountain began to shift beneath them. Her father immediately shielded his family by stretching his arms over them. He encompassed them in his protective arms when the boulders began falling. They rolled right past them at first but then began to get dangerously close. Soon the world went black.

By the time Petra came to her senses, the villagers had already rushed to the rock slide and pulled her from the aftermath. As she awoke, she stood up shakily staggering over to her brother and gently squeezed his hand. “Kellan, we made it. Where’s papa and mama?” Kellan gave no response so she tried again. Horrified by the reality that was beginning to sneak in, she shook her brother’s shoulders only to find that no matter how hard she tried, Kellan was not going to wake up.

She felt like the earth was angry with her for ignoring the warning it so graciously gave. Well, she would show the earth just how “grateful” she was. At the young age of 14, Petra became the youngest mining worker in the village. She would angrily thrust her sickle into the rough earth and envision her hard work as a way to gain vengeance on the murderous earth. Her once playful nature was stifled and replaced with a dark hatred fueled by the desire to lash back on the one thing that took what mattered to her most.

She blamed the mountain for taking her family from her and leaving her all alone. Oddly enough, the only place she didn’t feel alone was in the mines. As she continued to grow in strength and beauty, she took notice of a strange attachment she felt to the environment around her. She felt strongest when covered in the dust from mining the stones and the grainy sand beneath her.

Petra celebrated each birthday in the darkest caves that ran beneath the mountain. She used to imagine the ceiling caving in and her being helpless to escape. As she would lie there on the cold, hard ground, she felt like her family was sitting around her, celebrating like they did on the day of the tragedy. But something was different this year. Petra didn’t see anything special about her 17th birthday but as she placed her rough palms faced down on the earth, she was shocked to feel a pulse running the cave and throughout the surrounding area. She felt each shift of the stones as feet crunched them beneath their boots. What could this possibly mean?
Petra returned to the caves every night after that to find out why she felt so drawn to the earth beneath her. Her connection continued to grow and intensify for the next year as she began to become more in tune with the surrounding life around her.

Goal: Petra wants to continue learning more about her abilities and find out if she is the only one with these capabilities.

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• Serrated blade knife
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@Rinoa Rose No worries. I have the completed one already, so go ahead and fix your formatting and stuff in your posting of it here when you get the chance. I'm surprised by how verbatim you were able to rewrite everything so far, but I may just forward you the PM of the submission you're friend sent me the other day so you can copy and paste as you see fit. Might be easier.
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@Captain Jenno @Crimson Raven @McHaggis @Dynamo Frokane @Sodium @Jay Kalton @Undine @Scrapula @NightFlight @Zombehs @Crazy Doctor @Kaithas

Alright guys- the time has come. I first wanted to let you all know how grateful I am for the interest that has been shown in this roleplay. I really appreciate the hard work and effort. Regardless of anything, it was a true pleasure reading all of your character sheets. They were all extremely well done and made my job a lot more difficult than I was expecting-- which was a pleasant surprise. I only ask that you understand that there were many factors involved with my decision making and want to stress the indisputable fact that all of your submissions were great. I mean it. After much consideration, the cast list I have chosen is in the hider below.

I have also decided to open up 3 extra positions due to multiple requests I have received and the number of amazing submissions. More information about these 3 available slots will be posted sometime this weekend. (To save anyone from wasted work, I ask that character sheets for these positions NOT be submitted until I release more information). I'm in the middle of moving and a bunch of other stuff at the moment, so to help me get the ball rolling and manage the extra people, I will also be appointing a co-GM in the coming days.

Also, I'm sure all of you have noticed the link to my art shop in my signature by now. I'm not rich (otherwise I'd get you all gift cards to Chipotle or something), but I can offer everyone who submitted a character sheet a 50% discount on whatever original art piece you want in my shop. I also do signatures, icons, and (occasionally) animations. Please note that this is something I'm only offering to those who have, as of now, submitted character sheets. When I hold mini auditions for the 3 new slots, this will not be an added perk-- so don't go telling your friends to whip up random characters to get discounts. Can't offer too much cheap art or else I'll go from being a starving artist to a homeless AND starving artist.



To those of you that made it in for now: if there are any edits you would like to make to your completed characters sheets, please just PM me about it before you make them. If you have any questions about what's to come story-wise, also feel free to ask.
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*Gives all the hugs to everyone else* Mostly because I can relate. I've never won a CS competition, like, ever... so I just wanted to know I feel the disappointment. <3 I know sometimes just knowing someone else understands can help a lot.
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You could've said that I didn't need to edit my sheet because you didn't like it enough.
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No need to be disappointed, you were all spectacular! You guys all had me sweating, frankly, I feel like I won out by a fluke. I hope to bump into you all in other roleplays, too. Hell of a good group.
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@Sodium That isn't the case at all. I suggested the edits that I did to give everyone the fairest chance of getting in and considered all submissions carefully as they were at the time of the deadline.

I've been looking over these character sheets for several hours today. If you have further questions about my decision making, feel free to send me a PM.
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I'm just saying, I get seizures from sleep deprivation. That was an hour I could've slept instead of giving it to a lost cause. From a completely removed standpoint, it would've been the more productive endeavor as well.

Whatever. Your choice was yours, I suppose. Shame that I didn't even get a chance to see the CS that beat mine out beforehand.
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@Sodium I'm sorry you lost sleep, but I can't be to blame for how you dictate your spare time, Sodium. I appreciate the effort you made for your submission, but such is the case with auditions. I can't select everyone. I made an exception for Rinoa due to her sending me a detailed PM about the situations beforehand along with her completed character sheet.

If you have any further comments or questions, you are free to PM me concerning them.
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*Gives all the hugs to everyone else* Mostly because I can relate. I've never won a CS competition, like, ever... so I just wanted to know I feel the disappointment. <3 I know sometimes just knowing someone else understands can help a lot.


I would just like to clarify that I personally wouldn't consider this a 'competition'. In deciding on the roles, I wasn't looking for the 'best' characters. I was looking for the best fits for the roles and story and trying to compose a cast that had enough diversities and similarities to create a compelling story. There were a lot of other aspects that went into the decision making, but that was one of the key things. I created the 3 extra slots because there were so many good characters submitted. I can't manage a group big enough to accommodate everyone, but I can at least offer that much.
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ahh crap, really my own fault for trying to to pick the most popular element, but I had a lot of fun writing Vessa!

congrats to the winners; pip pip good show.
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I would just like to clarify that I personally wouldn't consider this a 'competition'. In deciding on the roles, I wasn't looking for the 'best' characters. I was looking for the best fits for the roles and story and trying to compose a cast that had enough diversities and similarities to create a compelling story. There were a lot of other aspects that went into the decision making, but that was one of the key things. I created the 3 extra slots because there were so many good characters submitted. I can't manage a group big enough to accommodate everyone, but I can at least offer that much.


No need to defend yourself, hun. It wasn't an attack on you or your decisions as a GM - simply just a comfort to those who didn't get picked, because I know how it feels. I've also been in your position before and do understand the dilemma of picking the right characters. So don't worry on my account anyways.
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@lydyn I'm not feeling attacked at all-- I just don't want anyone walking away from this with the mindset that they're a 'loser' of a competition. I just wanted to clarify in case anyone got that idea.
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No need to defend yourself, hun. It wasn't an attack on you or your decisions as a GM - simply just a comfort to those who didn't get picked, because I know how it feels. I've also been in your position before and do understand the dilemma of picking the right characters. So don't worry on my account anyways.


I don't think she was defending herself, there's nothing to defend (the whole point of an audition is that we might not make the cut, after all), she was just specifying that there weren't any 'losers', as was kind of implied by the idea that the people who qualified 'won', is all. She's just expressing that she'd have accepted everyone if it were that easy.
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@Crimson Raven @Dynamo Frokane @Sodium @Jay Kalton @Crazy Doctor @Kaithas

*Gives all the hugs to everyone else* Mostly because I can relate. I've never won a CS competition, like, ever... so I just wanted to know I feel the disappointment. <3 I know sometimes just knowing someone else understands can help a lot.


Sheash, talk about ruined suspense. XP Had two notifications, and I happend to read this one first.

@Baklava

Oh well, I didn't make it. Do I care? Am I disappointed or angry? Nope, not a chance in hell. I had fun making Ark and can (and will) probably use him in a different roleplay. Although, I would like to apply for the extra characters if thats okay.

Oh, on that subject, are you still interested my RP? You were in the interest check but haven't posted anything else.
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I'm just saying, I get seizures from sleep deprivation. That was an hour I could've slept instead of giving it to a lost cause. From a completely removed standpoint, it would've been the more productive endeavor as well.

Whatever. Your choice was yours, I suppose. Shame that I didn't even get a chance to see the CS that beat mine out beforehand.


... =_= I have been sleep deprived before. You will get over it. This sounds an awful lot like complaning. You willingly submitted a character, knowing full well that it had a low chance of being chosen. Grow a pair and move on.
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