I'd be interested in joining if you'll have me. My writing skills are a bit rusty but I know how everything works
Go for gold.
I'd be interested in joining if you'll have me. My writing skills are a bit rusty but I know how everything works
@Louis Dabout I'm not going to comment on background/history as I am leaving that on all Imperials upto CQ.
However can you please bold your headings and either move your image to the top of the sheet, hider it or move it so it isn't on the same line as your text.
This way when CQ reads it it will be easier to review.
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Done! :D
Yes, it's-a me again!
Remember in the Interest Check, I said I was interested in playing a character who plays both sides? I was thinking of creating an underworld type who deals drugs to the Imperial governor (he seems to be sufficiently corrupt, from what I can gather), then uses some of the money to buy cheap guns to sell to the Rebels at over-inflated prices ('cheap' as in 'not good enough to turn the tide of the war, but good enough to torturously prolong it for another few months'). Oh, and the business he does with the Rebels is anonymous, so he could throw them under the bus without consequence if the Imps ever got too suspicious. How's that?
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That's fine, if you want to PM me and @CQBEXPT with details on your criminal network as well that'd be grand.
I want to put something out here, for a couple of you (Mentioning no names). Please remember that this is advanced. I'm going to hold nothing against y'all for sheets but just make sure when it comes to posting IC the quality is there. I'm a quality over quantity kinda guy, so don't feel like you need to write novels.
Just something to bear in mind, as some of your histories are a bit...
Bare.
So you could end up needing to fill them in over the course of the IC.
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That's exactly what I plan on doing. To me at least, it's not very interesting interacting with other characters if I know literally everything about them from just the CS, so I opt to leave some things out of my characters' backstories and flesh them out in the IC to better engage with the other people in the RP.
Don't worry though, I'm not using this as an excuse for an asspull. I already have a few things in mind about Jacob's time as a trooper and before he joined the academy when the time comes to explain them to the other characters.
@Louis Dabout First off your bio and personality should be separate (among other formatting errors), what you have put down for what I assume is your bio is not very well written. You also have multiple spelling errors along with some weird grammar errors. There is not an example in the star wars universe anywhere where a non-stormtrooper officer has worn stormtrooper armor, logically if it was to survive some sort of gas attack or being pushed into the vacuum of space I would be ok with but willingly no. The rest of your bio simply lacks any real substance to put it lightly. If you're willing to rework the character I would reconsider accepting you but as of now it is a no. (Picture is fine as I'm fully aware of the history of the production of the original films)
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Alright then, yeah it was late at night when I started writing. I'll work on this during my flight today.
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On note about the picture: It is fine for as long as no-one else objects to it.
Some people may not like such imagery.
Also five points to you.
That was a hella fast response.
@Notorious Clones are all decommissioned by 11BBY as they're all essentially old men.
@Notorious I'm not a GM, so nothing I say holds any weight, but I think your character would fit in better with the Rebels than the Empire. It's a cool idea you have there, and I've always had a fondness for badass old geezers.