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@gcold Today I'll dedicate time to finishing the bio -since I have nothing else that needs be done- so, the evening I'd say
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The collab on the pad is now non-canon and will be erased and discarded. The fight can come up in posts but only vague enough for people to add onto in their own remarks, but that is it. In full and as an event in our character's memories, it will stay in the endless depths beyond where the eye dares to see and the lip quivers and spits in madness. A timeskip, they call it.


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And, here it is. SOrry for tkaign so long, I really, really, am out of practice when it comes to makign bio's and I have been rther busy this past few weeks. I hope the bio is up to the task, and if it isn't please tell me what I need ot improve
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@Mortarion Ok, the framework checks out, but I want you to expand in certain areas.

-I am a stiff ass when it comes to names. Kalien doesn't sound Saxhleel to me, either change to something more suitable or offer an explanation.

-Archon is more than half a world apart from Windhelm, how does his parents even know about Windhelm?

-12 years with bloodlung sounds awfully rough. Any reason why he hasn't sought out medical attentions? Especially when he's in the college, with experts nearby practicing the "perfectly valid school of magic".

-Mistmen are exclusive to the Soul Cairn as far as I know. To be able to conjure these creatures, one would need to either visit the Soul Cairn, or learned from someone else who did. I don't see any of the two being mentioned, so please, remove this spell.
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H @gcold Ok, thanks for pointing out the errors gcold.

-Changed it so that Kalien and his family are from Stormhold, near the border between Cyrodiil and Morrowind, hope that makes sense.

-Changed it so that he acquired Bloodlung a few months after leaving the College but that due to not being very knowledgable when it came to diseases, he didn't thought it important enough to make back the trek to heal himself properly. I can change it again if this is not enough.

-Per your instructions I removed the Mistman spell, any suggestions with which I could replace it? Originally I wanted to use Summon Ash Pawn but that is something that your have only be able to learn if you had been to Solstheim, which Kalien hasn't.

-The name is, in fact, not Saxheel but Tsaesci, this is due to personal preferences only so if you prefer I can change it or turn it into a name that my character himself decided to take.
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Hey guys, just wanted to confirm that I won't be joining the RP. I really appreciate the invitation, and it's not due to a lack of interest, I just can't commit to joining an advanced RP until my schedule's a little less hectic.
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-Per your instructions I removed the Mistman spell, any suggestions with which I could replace it? Originally I wanted to use Summon Ash Pawn but that is something that your have only be able to learn if you had been to Solstheim, which Kalien hasn't.

-The name is, in fact, not Saxheel but Tsaesci, this is due to personal preferences only so if you prefer I can change it or turn it into a name that my character himself decided to take.


-How about a bread-and-butter conjuration spell; conjure familiar or flame atronach?

-I doubt common Argonians would know much about Tsaesci names. Change to something Tamrielic at least.

Hey guys, just wanted to confirm that I won't be joining the RP. I really appreciate the invitation, and it's not due to a lack of interest, I just can't commit to joining an advanced RP until my schedule's a little less hectic.


No problem, thanks for your interest. Come back anytime when your schedule clears up.
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@gcold I ended up going with Summon Ghost from Oblivion -hope htat is ok- and changed hte name to Tsleeixth, hope that is ok
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@gcold I ended up going with Summon Ghost from Oblivion -hope htat is ok- and changed hte name to Tsleeixth, hope that is ok


Perfect, you're approved unless the Schaft says otherwise.
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Alright guys. here's how we proceed.

1. @OneEyedChurro It's been 6 days for you; respond ASAP.

2. Collab people, figure out what to keep and what to dump. Get your stuff to IC once you're done.

3. @Mortarion @Sovi3t I know you guys are busy, but try to get your intros in the next days or so.

4. @LeidenSchaft @Haeo, we can collab the scout mission or just do open responses in IC. Up to you two.

5. Everyone else, go interact with each other. You don't need to collab or write giant posts. Just basic conversations and activities are fine. Oh, you can ask Ashav (and other leaders) questions or complain to them, I will react to them in IC.

6. The actual battle happens once most of the above have been sorted. The main assault (Sevine, Orakh, Sagax, Felix and Tsleeith) can pre-assign roles. Four people need to push the battering ram, some people need to be in front with shields, mages and archers need to cover range attacks and we also need people to carry ladders and breaching charges. Roles will be filled by NPCs if not filled by PCs.

7. You guys could go hunting; fill the soul gems.
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@gcold Alright then, I'll start working on my intro today if that's ok
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@gcold

Hey, so sorry about the delay. I've finished the bio, just need to do the appearance and personality, and then the finished version will be up. Hopefully it'll be up to standard. :)
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FINALLY finished it - hope it's okay! Sorry if there are any spelling mistakes in there, it took a damn long time to proof-read it the first time round.
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I've actually never collabed anything so that could be interesting but I'm already familiar with open response so I guess I'm open to either. I've been holding off on posting largely due to indecision about how I should proceed. Now, at least, I have a direction of sorts to plan for. I'm looking forward to this.

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Alright guys. here's how we proceed.

1. @OneEyedChurro It's been 6 days for you; respond ASAP.

2. Collab people, figure out what to keep and what to dump. Get your stuff to IC once you're done.

3. @Mortarion @Sovi3t I know you guys are busy, but try to get your intros in the next days or so.

4. @LeidenSchaft @Haeo, we can collab the scout mission or just do open responses in IC. Up to you two.

5. Everyone else, go interact with each other. You don't need to collab or write giant posts. Just basic conversations and activities are fine. Oh, you can ask Ashav (and other leaders) questions or complain to them, I will react to them in IC.

6. The actual battle happens once most of the above have been sorted. The main assault (Sevine, Orakh, Sagax, Felix and Tsleeith) can pre-assign roles. Four people need to push the battering ram, some people need to be in front with shields, mages and archers need to cover range attacks and we also need people to carry ladders and breaching charges. Roles will be filled by NPCs if not filled by PCs.

7. You guys could go hunting; fill the soul gems.


I'm undecided. I want to do a collab but my hopes of a quick and clean one were understandably dashed. Let's try again? What say you all?
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@MiddleEarthRoze Solid sheet you got there, I'll just need you to patch in some gaps.

For all intents and purposes, she is Breton. Though Roze would have minor Nordic traits inherited from her dad, her race should be listed as Breton. This also means that her frost resistance should be lower, as in >10%.

You have one more adept skills than what is allowed. I would recommend downgrading alteration to apprentice, because there isn't much about it in her background. If you choose to do this, her adept level spells have to be voided as well. Alternatively, you could take an apprentice skill down to novice. In this case, you'll need to tell me how Roze learned alteration in her bio. No matter which option you take, you'll need to get rid of fire spell since destruction is not listed on your sheet.

Another issue is her food reserve. For someone with no provisioning skill, she is lugging around an awfully lot of ingredients. I have no problem with her having all of that, but she'll need to store some back in camp and not carry around an entire kitchen on patrol. I do like the garlic though, useful against vampires.

That's all I have for ya. Get it done and we'll get you on the road.

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I'm ok with collab for the scouting mission, as I posted previously. That will let us coordinate better and catch any inconsistencies before the posting. I was planning on open response before departure though, not that that would take that much longer.

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AHH I KNEW I WAS FORGETTING SOMETHING

Completely blanked when it came to her magic, I was so damn focused on her backstory. I'll add in her Alteration skills - I also took a look at the skills section you put up and thought that I could substitute one Novice and one Apprentice for an Adept; rather than two Apprentice for one Adept skill - I just misread, sorry about that.

I also put in so much food because my assumption would be - big camp, not much food, which is why she has so much. Not gonna be bringing it all with her in a fight though, as you said, haha. :D I did make it a bit smaller though.
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