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@hatakekuro: interesting character;; I like it. However, a couple of things - your semblance doesn't really seem to have a real limitation. yang's kinetic thingamabob was limited by the fact that she has to absorb different blows to get stronger and such - you're not really limited to that. Would you mind adding that he has to absorb the kinetic force of others? Otherwise, it seems like he's just pulling kinetic energy out of his ass, lol. Also, do you mind taking out the part where he can slow objects down with the Kinetic Energy? I think exploding shit and increasing his body's attributes is enough for right now, haha. just make sure to keep that at a limit, too. dont want you busting down steel walls while blurring around the place, right?


Fair enough. ^^ Will do.
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Oh sorry, Larfleeze was 'spose to accept ya'll.

That fuckin' loser.

You're accepted, along with tanderbolt. Hatakekuro will be accepted once he's made his edits.

With you three accepted, we'll only have two spots left, for Katsa and Potato.

So that means that we're accepting no outsiders!

Edit: Edited Eden's name. His first name is Daelon, but he goes by 'Eden', for persunnal reasons.
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Yes! Make a character!


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Oh sorry, Larfleeze was 'spose to accept ya'll.

That fuckin' loser.


u wanna fukin go, m8
ill put u in the fukin ground u silly cunt

In all seriousness, I didnt want to make any decisions without your input.
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Note: I will no longer be playing a character and will instead control the NPC's and the villains. Which means a spot on team DEVL has opened up. As I understand, Dan has taken the leadership role.
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@Dirty Dan
When you mean absorb kinetic energy from others, do you mean if he gets hit?
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Yup. Like, the stronger he gets hit by blunt force, he'll still get buffered and shit, but the more kinetic energy he absorbs from the blow. It can be however you want it. It can just be natural, like once he's kicked in the face his body instinctively absorbs energy from the kick, or he can grab the limb and grin sadistically as he absorbs the energy from their fist or something. Up to you, yo.
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Yup. Like, the stronger he gets hit by blunt force, he'll still get buffered and shit, but the more kinetic energy he absorbs from the blow. It can be however you want it. It can just be natural, like once he's kicked in the face his body instinctively absorbs energy from the kick, or he can grab the limb and grin sadistically as he absorbs the energy from their fist or something. Up to you, yo.


I was asking because I'm a little worried that the ability would be more of a hindrance for him since his own Semblance can hurt him just by using it already. If you need me to add it though I'll do it regardless of my concerns.
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Hm? How does it already hurt him by using it? I thought that it only hurts him if he tries to blow up 4 story orphanage or something.
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Hm? How does it already hurt him by using it? I thought that it only hurts him if he tries to blow up 4 story orphanage or something.


That's one way he can hurt himself though that's an extreme example. Excessive use in a short amount of time can cause stress fractures on his bones and damage his muscles. While he is able to diminish the recoil of his own attacks, it seems like it would be a bit much with him having to take hits to use an ability that already causes strain on his body to use.
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In that case, keep it as it is.
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In that case, keep it as it is.


Okay. Thank you for listening.
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Seeing as I promised @Katsa that I'd reserve her a spot, and I never go back on my promises [huhuehuehue], I'm gonna offer her the 'E' spot! Celebrations!!!!


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I'd be very interested in taking part.

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I'd be very interested in taking part.


Actually, we're sorta full.
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@Mr_pink Best of luck to you.

Alright, roleplay canceled. Any way we can still have fun with what we have?
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