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sorry I wanna join and if not that's cool as well but im confused about the roles part like I can choose only one of those 3 things and put it as allegiance?
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I'm just going to work on my app from this thread; I'll alert you guys when it's finished. I'm also putting it here so you can critique it while I work so I can change it on the fly.

Without further ado, my finished app!

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Name: Cyrin Val, the Duelist
Age: 20
Allegiance: ASGARD
History (Optional): Cyrin is little more than a young knight of the Imperium trying to fill the shoes of his father, a figure whose virtue and renown proved integral for shaping the man that Cyrin is fast becoming.
Personality: Honesty is Cyrin's defining characteristic, and he has never shied away from telling the truth regardless of the consequences. He is still young and, perhaps, a little naive. He likes to believe that there is good to be found in all people, and that his sight will find it. Even when his life is in danger, he is reluctant to use lethal force in subduing opponents.
Tome: Cyrin's tome takes the form of a pair of blue-tinted, half-moon spectacles. They give him the abilities associated with the Greater Power known as True Sight.
  • Truth of Motion: Cyrin can see the veracity of intent behind an action. This has several uses, for example when dueling this means he can spot a feint, but it is not all powerful, and it does not mean he can see what his enemy's next move.
  • Truth of Emotion: Cyrin can see the aura of emotions that surround a person, but when someone is conflicted it is difficult to read which will most influence their actions.
  • Truth of Diction: Cyrin can see the veracity of speech, but this is guided by what the speaker believes is true and can be confounded by clever syntax.

Other: When he is practicing his swordsmanship, he doesn't wear his tome. Truth of Motion lowers his guard, and he does not wish to rely on it in a fight.
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sorry I wanna join and if not that's cool as well but im confused about the roles part like I can choose only one of those 3 things and put it as allegiance?


You can join. Also, yes.

@Aristo

I'd say for you to add her Allegiance but it's pretty clear who's side she's on from her history. Her Tome is fine along with the rest of her character so far. Just check in with @KoL for any logistical stuff since they will be playing the Platinum Knight.

@Savo

He looks fine so far.
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Hey, I'm interested in this RP. My friend @BlueAjah introduced me, so I'll start working on a character soon.
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@Guilty Spark

I'll accept his Tome abilities since all of them have drawbacks to their features. And I assume you're going to develop him more IC since he has a short section for his personality, yes? In that case, he's accepted. Please place him into the Character Tab.
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@TheWindel Thanks, but would you like me to add more to his personality?
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@TheWindel Thanks, but would you like me to add more to his personality?


Maybe just a little bit more :p
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Ah, Windel, it's been some time. Looking good thread, looking good. Expect a bio from me shortly. About two line breaks, shortly.

The body, mind, and soul are the final canvas. Paint yourself into the legend you wish to be.



TL/DR: If you want to be a non-humanoid somehow, or have some alien physiological traits, Měihóu is a great person to have met in your backstory.
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@TheWindel I've added about half-again as much to his personality, hope you like it. ^_^
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@Aristo
I'd say for you to add her Allegiance but it's pretty clear who's side she's on from her history. Her Tome is fine along with the rest of her character so far. Just check in with @KoL for any logistical stuff since they will be playing the Platinum Knight.


@KoL
Your orders, commander?

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Tome (Color and Abilities): Měihóu's big ass [...]


>Quotes perfectly
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oo thank you sorry two more questions; 1) is there any specific type of power theyd need like any limitations? sorryyy and b) is it alright if I post a cs this after sleeping so ngl probably about 12 hours or more, its cool if that's too long like i don't mind if id be too late to join but yeah sorry for the questions haha
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Ok, after a brief pause, I'm back, so let's do some work. *cracks knuckles*

@Aristo I'll be introducing the Platinum Knight soon enough, I've just finished with the Crimson one, so expect your boss to come out soon.

@franklestedd Since no one said before, I'll tell you that we still have places to join, at least until @TheWindel thinks is a good number. Also, for the faction, it's simple, just chose the one that you like the more, but for obvious reasons you can have only a single allegiance. If you can't choose, I recommend being a student, since they still have time to learn about their view of the world.

@Guilty Spark By that allegiance, you mean that your character works under Asgard, right? This would make him a part of the Justice division, your boss will be coming out in a matter of minutes.

@Knight of Doom You can join us as well.

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frankle, about powers:

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If it makes sense within the story, I don't see why not. That's exactly why they have academies, so that students can fine tune their tomes in a controlled way. Now, obviously you can't do a 180 degree spin (fire mage becoming an mage, for example), but you can evolve to something that does your archetype without problems.

Also, as far as Unity goes, times can do anything other than said reality breaking effects (bring back the dead, time travel, etc). Becoming part of a shadow is no problem at all. Just remember that your tome has to have one main function and the rest is linked to it somehow.

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Edited this because my phone screwed all that I wrote.


Also, you can present a CS at any time, this isn't a first come first serve game.
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@KoL Yeah, I can't wait to see her.
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So, I'm interested in the concept and would like to join. Only problem is, I cant be arsed to read everything on the first post. Give me a bit to get my shit together and I will likely have a cs up. No promises, though - I need my shit in order fist ^_^
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@Vocab Most of those tabs are empty right now, so it's actually the shortest it'll ever be.
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@The 42nd Gecko

Ah, greetings. It has been a while. There was a loli Esper with a thing for doughnuts who ran a school back then, wasn't there?

As for your character, are you going to explain why she constantly shifts personalities? Or is that a spoiler for her story later down the line?
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@Vocab Most of those tabs are empty right now, so it's actually the shortest it'll ever be.


Yeah, I know. I'm reading through everything as best I can now, then tomorrow I'll likely attempt to interpret it all when I don't feel like I'm going to faint... I should get more sleep...
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Hey Windel and her/his Windelful co-gms, my app is finally completed!... I do feel I could of worded my characters personality better, but I think I can make it clear in the rp!

Hope he looks ripe and ready!
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